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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    And the reality of the new blended family sets in, with a hint of the trials and tribulations to come. I can see that there will be times of angst and joy. Looking forward to more, enjoying this and very well done!!
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I find this a wonderful addition to the pantheon of stories to be found here on Gay Authors. Very well written, engaging, offering a unique and different perspective. I have to concur with @Summerabbacat and am more than willing to follow this tale to see where it goes. This is what I love about GA, exposure to so many perspectives and look forward to more!!!
  3. Temptation is a dangerous friend...this should be very interring interesting.. Carjat's photo of poet Arthur Rimbaud at age 17
  4. drsawzall

    Prologue

    An so a mystery to unravel...looking forward to more!!
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    Chapter 152

    Separation anxiety is wreaking havoc with Armand, not surprising knowing the love he has to share...The following had me reaching for the tissues... With Christen’s painting gone, I focused on Nonna’s painting. I brought what I had done to my home studio. When the boys found out I was painting her, they would come and sit with me as I painted. They would comment about her, the flowers and I should include wild flowers in the painting. I had 4 critics as I painted. After one of my painting session, we would go and sit in our roof top garden. We didn’t talk a lot, we remembered Nonna. One of the boys would say something that triggered a memory and then they would comment on that thought. In a way they were bringing Nonna back to life in our memories. I had to tell them how I met Nonna, at least 10 times and it always led to questions. This sessions brought Nonna back to me. I don't think GG is finished with Armand and Colin just yet...And I agree, time to send a painting to auction to see what it will bring to benefit Uncle's Home!!!!
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    Chapter 19

    Amen brother!!!!! Right On!!! Right On!!! Right On!!! Libby...Take note of all your poor starving fans out here in the wilds of the internet, you've created something we want to see more of!!!!
  7. Can't say it any better, looking forward to Book 2.
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    Chapter 19

    The following was simply delicious for this avid reader, such a simple but stunning plot twist...Kudos to Martinez for figuring this out... Speechless, Jase watched her tug her ear buds loose so that they dangled around her neck. The faint strains of Guns N’ Roses reached his ears. “Hey. Hey!” Martinez crouched down and smacked his cheek. “You okay?” Like @raven1 and @CincyKris I am so looking forward to seeing what the next chapter(s) will bring...we need to know Jase's backstory. And while I would be content with his returning to the life he lost seven years ago, it would be criminal for there not to be a future for both Jase and Lucas... The following was a bit of brilliant wordsmithing, so powerful and if there was a picture of the word bittersweet, needing a description, you'd have to go a long way to find better... Lucas closed his eyes and concentrated on getting air past the tightness in his throat. “Will I ever see you again?” It was a fair thing to ask. They hadn’t pulled any punches with each other. Lucas could take the truth. Jase’s voice echoed back to him from the doorway, as rough and uneven as Lucas’s had been. “I don’t know. I’m sorry.” “Don’t be sorry.” Lucas sank back against the mattress. “Whatever happens, don’t be sorry.” If anyone had a right to that, it was Lucas. Despite the rosy future Jase had painted for him, all he felt was bleak despair. How could he help Macy give the world hope and love when his own was lost? He took a deep breath and tried to exhale some of the crushing pain, but it refused to go. A plea sprang to his lips, but he clamped them closed. No, he wouldn’t beg. After everything, Jase deserved some peace. He had no reason to be sorry. Can fate be so cruel???
  9. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    Not sure the Tyfus/Ryler have been an item long enough for that sort of news to spread...I think what we have here weinerdog and @J.El is a crossover conundrum...
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    Loved this, couldn't make up mind between the love, laugh and wow icon...great job sneaking that in there!!!
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 12

    A mountain is moved incrementally, and good on Tyler for realizing the need to put someone else, (Rufus), ahead of selfish needs...Tyler still needs to determine if he is serious about being bisexual or simply fooling himself...to me the answer is obvious... Next steps are to get serious and take their science project to the next level and enter the competition...One way to win over dear old dad...BTW...good on the mom's talking, it will be interesting to see how that all works out... Speaking of dear old Dad...down a few percentage points for the office he is running for, the pressure must be intense to say the least and I loved the following...just think of all the various possibilities/outcomes....just sayin... "Third rule. Act decently, especially in front of your dad. We don't want to give him a heart attack just before the election."
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 122

    Well, that was predictable...wasn't it???
  13. drsawzall

    TSJ Chapter 7

    I'm assuming as school ends for Zac and friends/fellow crew members they will be heading towards Canada to sail the Great Lakes and then the Pacific, I'm wondering what weather season they will be heading into??? Then there is the conundrum as to using the insurance payment to fund that trip and the others...would the insurance company pay off on the stolen yacht knowing it is still out there...somewhere, or is the payment for the one the hijackers destroyed??? Will or is Jordan thinking of buying the luxury yacht they will be sailing in the Med??? Considering the previous tall ship sailing as training for the boys starting their own charter business?
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    Chapter 18

    AND...Just.Where.Is.Macy in all of this???? Is it Thursday yet????
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    Chapter 18

    All I can say is...Thursday...what am I gonna do till Thursday.....
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    Chapter 18

    Gosh darned cliffhanger....grrrrrrrrrr I'm counting on Martinez, and her shock at Lucas being shot to nullify Swift... Next chapter ASAP....pretty please and thanks!!!
  17. Well now no red herrings here and if the pink elephant don't work how bout a bottle of
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 151

    Another wonderful job during the holidays, and it looks as if the family will be expanding!!
  19. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Progress and setbacks, good on James's mother, why do I suspect she just may be Donavan's kryptonite... Roy will be good for Jakie and as @weinerdog notes...keep those pointed shoes polished... As for Dion, trying to figure out how he is going to re-enter the picture...a dust up with Donavan perhaps??? And...how is Mr Wilbur doing???
  20. At the end of the day, isn't that what anyone wants.... There is still evil afoot, threatening all of them and much unfinished business...
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    Chapter 17

    Ah...the estimable Detective no-so Swift, the man who was everywhere and nowhere. I was glad to see the connection with Macy's drawings, it is time to take a closer look at all of them...and her mother's diary... Jase's tattoo is bothering him and he can sense Macy as if she was at a great distance from him...time to start a search pattern, increasing the parameters until his sense of Macy becomes stronger. What is Macy to Swift???
  22. False courage will get you nowhere...
  23. Spare the innocent and eradicate the evil messiah's like the vermin they are!!!
  24. Like rubella, the evil Messiah's need to be eradicated and I am all for sparing the innocent. The denizens of the underground will have to find a way to break bread with those above ground
  25. Like an addict, I am hopelessly hooked and in serious need of another fix, and fix, and fix...ad infinitum!!! So many wonderful threads that must be leading to many more chapters... “I know you can protect him,” Firuz said. “However, Rashan is to be a Commander of Armies in the future. Wars are not simple. The empire is stable for now. Duke Silver is thinking of the future. Prince Yan is the Emperor-to-be. He is sure Yija will take the throne in his mother’s homeland. Duke Silver is anticipating there will be those who try to stop this future. Prince Rashan must be equipped to conquer a kingdom. You are now Rashan’s Shadow Guard. You shall be a Shadow Guard to the Commander of Armies. Your role is to give him everything you have. Only then can you protect him. Do you understand?”
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