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  1. drsawzall

    TSJ Chapter 5

    I hope Carter and the yacht show up soon !!!
  2. An interesting chapter to say the least, I think the stalker is Herr Webber, the little shit...I also think it is time for Niki to have a long discussion with his brother, who coincidentally, is Herr Webber's boss. The scene, the confrontation in the camera shop in front of a customer would and should be grounds for immediate dismissal... Then't there is the issue with the good priest, Father Abuser and his superior...will Inno's mother find out about the abuse and would love to see her confront Father Abuser and his superior./.. Now, both boys are rather going after the stalker in the wrong manner, yes they should have gone to the police much sooner, but how stupid is Niki??? He works in a camera shop with all sorts of cameras, would it be so difficult to install a disguised security camera at the entrance to his apartment???
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 148

    A quick but profitable trip to Paris and possibly some new benefactors to the orphanage...The boys and girls will do well with GG's guidance
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Just another thought, god forbid if James's mother tangles with Donavan, I'd love to be a fly on the wall for that!!
  5. I think the appropriate thought here is an old quote..."Let he who is without sin, cast the first stone!!"
  6. So glad to see the boys connect...both also finding their way individually, Niki finding an ability to coexist with work and Inno realizing that the church no longer stands in his way as he seeks his personal spiritual relationship.
  7. An interesting chapter, the similarities between Furio's father and Tristan's mother are quite remarkable...glad to see Furio hears the song of Ninetto soul...
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 8

    Some masks certainly came off in this chapter, Donavan is a sexual predator and needs to account for his actions. I wonder if James came forward, how many others might??? Roy's mask showed a caring, if not mixed up individual...he knows what's right and needs to stop covering for Donavan... Hopefully Jackie can keep james somewhat sane...I hope she wears very pointed shoes... At least James can now be true to himself, his "coming out" will be old news at school in a week or so... I think James misread the mask on his mother's face, at least I hope so...obviously she wants the best for him... I hope James speaks to Mr Wilbur, he might find perspective...then there's Dion, what will his reaction be?? Have we seen the last of Donavan, will he confront James, will Dion get involved???
  9. drsawzall

    Act II part 1

    This just keeps getting better and better!! ANTOINETTE: We know everything, Mister Rassendyll. I am selfish. I want Michael. If you defeat him, send him into exile, then he will be mine alone. But you must spare his life, and you must come to the castle at Zenda. RUDOLF: But can you help us? How will we enter the castle? ANTOINETTE: The key to the back door is under the flowerpot on the right side of the doormat. And I will leave the porch light on. RUDOLF: Oh. That sounds simple enough.
  10. This just in from Orlando...
  11. HOLD THE PRESSES FOLKS...Gnomie and Kbois in the same general area...will there be unusual meteorological events??? A sighting of the Four Horsemen???
  12. Thanks for this chapter, it was simply brilliant...and just too many good lines to quote...You had me laughing so hard, I just had to pass some gas and...what's that???...It's better than saying I soiled myself...
  13. Wowzer...just had to do it...
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 14

    I wonder if there is a clue in Macy's drawings...
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 147

    I think the following says it all.... I wouldn’t bet on it. Now with Arnaud alive, he has freedom, but when Arnaud passes on, Christen will pick up where Arnaud left off.” “So, when I pass on, you will continue to adopt children from the Home?” “No, because by the time you pass on, there won’t be any children to adopt. We will have adopt them.” I leaned in a kissed Colin, “That would be a miracle. I’ll tell you this, I’ll continue to adopt those that hurt the most as long as I live.” Now, Colin leaned in and kissed me. “I’ll support you as best as I can.”
  16. There are those who live their faith in quiet works. Following the precepts and the unfiltered words, putting the needs of others before their own, understanding the concepts of Christianity. While a confirmed agnostic, I try to live my life following the Golden Rule and for whatever reason, your story brings to mind the parable of Jesus and the woman at the well...https://www.learnreligions.com/woman-at-the-well-700205
  17. It is a shame that the acts of the depraved overshadow the works that faithful do...
  18. drsawzall

    Tribulations

    Much happening in this chapter, some good and some horrible. Niki and Lucas and Nicki's conversation with his brother... Then there is Inno. While I am living in Massachusetts, just outside of Boston, I am well aware of the pedophelia scandal the engulfed the catholic church here, and the subsequent revelations worldwide. Sexual abuse was institutionalized over generations and for my way of thinking, the church has lost its legitimacy. I believe it has done more harm than good as history will attest to. Sadily so many other faiths have followed along the same wayward path, ignoring or warping the teachings of their lord and savior... How can so many misconstrue the basic foundations of their beliefs, is beyond my comprehension...
  19. I can clearly remember standing on the sidewalk near the entrance to the local catholic church when I was 13 or so. I was with my sister who was waiting on a friend to come out after a catechism class. She was followed out by Father Dwyer and stopped to speak to my sister's friend asking if we were catholic. When told we weren't, my sisters friend was admonished for hanging around with the likes of us as we were destined for hell. I looked at Father Dwyer as he stepped into his new Cadillac and asked if he was going with us as he obviously didn't take his vow of poverty seriously... Having been taught my elders and betters to be respectful, when an outraged Father started to belittle us, me in particular and threatening us by telling my parents, I could not stop laughing at him, knowing my parents would have a field day with him, told him so and to save me a seat in hell... Knowing Jesus wore borrow clothes, I've often wondered what he would make of all the folderol, pomp and circumstances, some faiths, evangelists, TV phonies, spew in his name...
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 26

    So glad to see how well the new resort was received and looking forward to seeing the Lady Janice arrive. Then there is the prospect of building a marina, that should be quite interesting!!!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    Tyler...tyler...Tyler...what can one say??? I don't think and I am, possibly wrong, that Tyler's father is completely homophobic, he'd go trolling for their votes in a heartbeat, if the election was close..and there would be a certain cache to having a gay son... Mommy dearest on the other hand...needs professional help... Gotta love Jim and he must have a large set of testimonials... Rufus, good on you...you go boy!!! If he has come out, and had testimonials like Jim, at school...He ain't giving up on Tyler... Tyler...Tyler...Tyler...pull your head out of yo ass....
  22. drsawzall

    Act I part 4

    Simply, just a delight and very well done, loved the byplay by all the various characters!!
  23. I have to wonder if the shift that took out Talin's hunters has joined the fray??? A classic double cross and as we should find out, to no good purpose... The Principal Messiah needs to be saved for last and her ending as brutal as her life was...it's time to administer justice!!!!
  24. drsawzall

    The Busker

    An important story and tough read, highlighting those who many simply do not see or value. Well done and thanks for the reminder, that we all can and should do better by our fellow citizens. Thank you...
  25. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    All because of a chicken sandwich...a valuable lesson learned...now to find Macy and whoever has her...
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