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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Not soon enough…
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    Fore!

    Loved this…friends talked me in to joining a golf league for gentlemen of a certain age…being the youngster in the crowd, I was assigned to a foursome where I explained to the group it had been at least ten years since I last picked up a golf club… I felt immensely thankful that they were duffers and hit mangled shots just like me….that is until my ‘partner’ at 93 years old, out drove me off the tee, and everyone else… Turning to me, with a smile and a wink, told me my problem was LOFT….lack of fricking talent…. True story I kid you not, and the money I spent at the driving range the following week will attest to that,,,
  3. What’s not to love… I can still feel you inside me. Tomorrow I want you to come in my mouth after you fuck me. And I want to stay longer. Make it count.
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    Chapter 21

    Hopefully the Gardia also took casts of the tracks the tires would have left… Three weeks after the destruction the Gardaí called Declan with an update. Explosive residue consistent with agricultural explosives had been confirmed at the site. Witness accounts of the vehicle on the lane combined with Father Michael’s testimony pointed clearly to Cormac Bresnahan. Charges were being prepared. Possibly Torin, as well given his presence in the area that night I’m hoping the two reunite at the Well of Slaine, and that the visit back home is brief!
  5. Temptations running across the generations….
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    Prologue

    An interesting prologue and the hook 🪝 is set!
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    Chapter 31

    The reminder of the assassin’s effort on Easter will be a stark reminder of the lengths the church went to to effect regime change… I found the following very interesting… But they will consider survival,” Matteo replied. “If Benedetto frames the city as corrupt, he indicts every order that has accommodated governance. That threatens them.” Lorenzo walked slowly toward the hearth, hands clasped behind his back. “So we shift the debate,” he said. “From purity to balance.”
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    No More Shadows

    The growth that shows healing… For the first time since that night, I did not feel like I was orbiting a single point of impact. I felt like I was moving forward on my own axis again.
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    Palomar

    Lately Mark has been posting on holidays, so…for me the day is now a holiday! Happy birthday and many, many more!! What are the odds that the young, entitled saboteurs get cleaning the bilges?
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    Chapter 18

    And Lord of the Snacks.
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    John

    An appropriate title for this chapter would be Regrets… It seems to me that everyone but Dottie is/was living in the past. And to a point that is understandable.
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    Chapter 2

    Johnny is seeing a life beyond surfing, a younger person’s sport, if you are to compete at the highest levels… His yesterday’s leave him with nothing to prove any more. He is wise to look into the future and what it may hold for him..
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    Chapter 30

    Lauretta has the gist of it, wiser beyond her years while Benedetto works himself into a corner constructed on absolutes…
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    Chapter 44 S3

    This chapter was a reminder that the future is no longer in the rear-view mirror....
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    Reckoning

    If the killer had good lawyers, that's exactly what they should do: to use the plea to mitigate portions of his life sentence...
  16. We are so lucky so many talented authors take the time to share their work with us!
  17. The two are made for each other, and Billy is a putz….and I like Joey!
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    Chapter 17

    Can you color the planets outer atmosphere yellow?
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    Chapter 17

    Hopefully the spire neutralizes the father and then self destructs.
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    Chapter 15

    The escape was thrilling and now to find Camilla to wrap this sordid mess up.
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    Chapter 12

    Can’t add much to these comments other than to say they were fantastic… Hopefully the switch happens before the inquiry into who was actually to blame for the loss of the 500…if not rat the bastard out!!! is it required to polish the lances before using??
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    Tongues Sliding

    Take Mike on a date or just to your apartment! It is time to take this further!!!
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    Chapter 29

    Twin sons a double blessing and once again Danilo is worth his weight in gold…the bit about the necklace was priceless… Is the good friar about to overstep is position, preaching himself into a corner with no exit? Lauretta has wisdom far beyond her years, she is a treasure. Which way will the winds blow?
  24. You've left us hanging with a couple of outstanding items. I did notice Daphne's attitude, might she be a distant cousin to either Clare or Brittany??? The message from Alice, what's up??? I'm confused...This just to name one of couple other comments, remind me of Sam? "Hmm... here." Bitter nausea spread through Dante as he handed Frank his phone with the message, and then seconds later he could see something very similar flit across Frank's face. "Do you remember the address?", Frank then asked seriously, handing the phone back. Some additional background is needed here... "We can't just-" "What can't we, huh?" Frank raised his right hand and began counting off on his fingers. "Give the Sapphires the finger, give Matt and Alice the finger, make some people very happy, grant us a wish-" Thank you for taking the time to gift us with this story. The ending seems incomplete to me and could have been fleshed out a bit better...but, that's just me!!! Will you be finishing White Sheets?
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    Chapter 20

    Trail cameras, easy to order on line and even Amazon as well!!! If it is proven one of the Bres’ was responsible, stringing them up by their testimonials would be too kind……
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