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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    You are breaking me with the following... The dog whimpered quietly as his eyes tracked his boy moving down the street fifty yards from the unmaintained hedgerow he had collapsed into hours earlier. He didn’t know anything about anatomy or physiology, but if he had, he would have understood that three broken ribs and a hairline fracture in his humerus were why walking and barking seemed all but impossible now that the adrenaline of the fight had worn off. As badly as he wanted to be with his boy, the pain of moving anchored the animal firmly in place. Having grown up with dogs all my life, I have more in common with Small Fry-Speed than others in this story. I almost gave Hosea at one point Kudos for self-examination, but then he reverted to form... How was he going to face his wife or their pastor? His son’s sins ultimately reflected on him as Elisha's father. @@@@@@@ Losing his temper with the dog was another failure. While done behind his back and against his express wishes, Elisha was showing compassion in caring for the animal. It was easy to get caught up in God’s holy war and forget about things like compassion for his creation. Attacking the animal had been a base action – one he regretted not only because it had cost him half-a-day of work and a hefty co-pay, but because it had highlighted something else dark and shameful in his heart.
  2. What a triangle, Kevin is only in it to get his rocks off, who knows what truly moves or motivates him?? Åke and Matthijs, despite being from permissive societies, need to crack their shells open!!
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 43

    My invitation must have gotten lost in the mail...
  4. drsawzall

    Trust Fall

    But what will Wishbone think if the boys grow to love like each other??
  5. From the frying pan to the fire....what is Pretty in Pink/Quantum Sentinel up to? Could he be Cresendo?
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    Chapter 17

    The boy does need driving lessons!! And a refresher course on safe sex as previously said lessons seem to have been purged somewhere between round 5 & 7!!! I’m not sure the following was the smartest thing to do…. I composed a concise, professional message introducing myself, briefly explaining my connection to Paul, and requesting a private conversation with Neal. I hoped the name drop would be enough to open a door — or at least earn me a reply
  7. drsawzall

    Moving In

  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    One of the best bio's on Jefferson out there!!! Amazon.com: Thomas Jefferson: A Life: 9780060976170: Randall, Willard Sterne: Books
  9. The stories we see here and elsewhere on this site simply prove this is one of the best out there!! Thanks for this
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Hosea is truly despicable, one who I hope finds his leg infected with incurable toxins and needs amputation. How is it that he can justify his faith when he ignores most of it?
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    I see fireworks coming,.... One other point I'd like to make, Jesus' arrival and the formulation of "Christianity" by and large by design, frees us from the precepts of the Old Testament does the old testament apply to christians - Search
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I am so looking forward to the rest of this story, the rogue mutthas already captured my attention, and I have to offer Kudos for Marcus graduating from Law School...He and Joshua have been missed!! While Thomas Jefferson is deservedly known for his work on the Declaration of Independence, when asked what he most wanted to be known for, he said fighting for the freedom to worship god as one chooses. It was through this work as an assemblyman in Virginia, ensured that the taxes of hardworking citizens no longer supported the state-recognized church. He is considered the founder of the principle where church and state are separated. More importantly, it was the right of everyone to worship their god in a manner of their own choosing. Throughout the course of his life, he carried what became known as the Jefferson Bible. The bible was a distillation of what he thought, unfettered by the interpretation of others. jefferson's letter to the danbury baptists - Search Jefferson Bible - Wikipedia The Bill of Rights (Amendments 1–10) - The Simple Constitution Opps...I'm off my soapbox!!!
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    Moving In

    Good to see the guardianship has been formalized, next step will be an adoption, and this is where the crapola might/should/ will hit the proverbial fan... Social services should have provided a reputable lawyer/legal firm and have any funds due to Daren locked up in a trust till 18, perhaps a bit longer access all the funds. Social Services should also be providing a monthly stipend for Daren's everyday needs. While I may not be a legal expert, I did sleep in a Holiday Inn Express once... holiday inn express commercials i'm a doctor - Search
  14. Thanks for the continuation, looking forward to the next chapter...
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    Ellen

    Gotta go with wow with what we have found out about Remy and that F'ing snake Anduin... I suspect all of this is going to get messy! And what if that little nagging suspicion was confirmed that there was more to this "We grew up like brothers."? It was so frustrating, really. And constantly hearing the complaints. Anduin was disrespectful, unreliable, constantly inciting trouble with purposeful remarks, they said. He was intrusive towards Remy- this point displeased Ellen the most and she didn't really know how to respond to it, especially since only Marc had ever brought it up. Anduin claimed it was ridiculous, and Remy merely shook his head in response.
  16. I feel that this vacation has put things in proper perspective for Russ, and shortly after will find the three adults plus Toby cementing their status as "family"!!!
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    Held Fast

    Morning prayers sound like a 2 for 1 deal....
  18. Wishbone needs to bite a Drill Sergeant in the ass...
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    Chapter 17

    I gotta go with all of them in the first 60 minutes only to find him passed out behind the couch with the dogs, or on the porch, the back 40, under Davin, or some such nonsense...
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    Chapter 10

    As I said before, #TeamDalian, Marvin just doesn’t cut it for me and we see by his hesitation at theme, not to mention his”type”….
  21. drsawzall

    Poem

    Simply fantastic and thanks for this!
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 68

    Cal is like a babe in Toyland. At some point real life will come calling!
  23. Persistent little bugger he was! Liked this very much, and your telling in the first person was well done!
  24. My life’s story!!
  25. drsawzall

    Moonlit Cave

    Did not see that ending coming!
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