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Nice going Sammy. goodness I know jacob thought he was doing the right thing, but i hope this fight with parker doesn't end up hurting Josh someway. I don't think Jacob would ever forgive himself. I did like the little insights on Philip though, maybe at least there can be a thawing there between Josh and Philip. I like how this is playing out. Jacob is so protective of Josh its fairly evident i wonder if he even realizes it fully. It's sad that people like Josh's dad do indeed exist. more to come going to read the next chap
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Seeing Josh's day through Jacob's eyes really makes me feel for Josh even more. good cover in the math class. I'm curious about Mr Fisher too, guess we'll see what happens there. Uh oh its time to meet the parents...this should be interesting. As jacob said as much as he would like to do something to help, Josh really needs to stand up for himself. even if Jacob did something or said something, it can only be reinforced with Josh building his confidence. I like that Jacob is continually thinking of ways to help his twin. it's great to see that they care about each other and want to protect each other. I think you convey that really well here Sammy. good work.
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An Almost Ordinary Schoolday
Jammi commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in An Almost Ordinary Schoolday
i can tell you've been working on this and there is definitely improvement Good job Sammy. First day went off without a hitch despite some unexpected surprises . Josh handled them all well. i wonder how Jacob will handle running into parker hmmm guess i'll keep reading to find out lol. -
I lovev the Prince and the Pauper too its exactly what I thought of once i started reading this. Sounds like they have thought this out fairly well. Jacob's excitement was contagious. I'm anxious to see if they will pull it off and for how long. Can't wait to see how ethan plays into all this too since a certain someone is crushing on him haha. I'm concerned about Josh taking the test for him. will the teacher be suspisious if Jacob suddenly aces the history test ? guess only time will tell
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I'm glad Josh decided to tell Jacob the truth. and it was good to see him break down in front of jacob as well, if only to prove that it is okay to be vulnerable and that he does have people in his corner. Jacob's reaction was understandable to an extent. I'm glad that despite his confusion and his being taken aback he doesn't want to lose what he's found with his brother. so they are going to swap places eh that should be interesting,. I like Jacob's family and his brothers especially. Surely they will be okay with him being adopted. after all that doesn't really make him any less their brother sometimes its not all about the blood. Great chapter though looking forward to next one
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Read this chapter last night xD I like how this is progressing so far. i Like how you seamlessly write the two mian characters povs. Josh and Jacob may look alike and are even similar but you manage to play off their uniqueness pretty well.
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I liked this chapter. I love anything to do with twins, so this story gets points just for that in my book. Secondly I already really like Ethan. We finally got a name for him the cute one Josh was staring at. very smart bringing Joshua and Jacob together. he's going to be a great ally in this story me thinks. at least i hope so. Parker got suspended ha! good one lest thing for Joshua to worry about for a minute. from the end there it sounds like Jacob may have found something out and i'm not even going to comment on Josh's "dad" I thinkw e all know someone like that in our lives. so narrowminded its a wonder they can see straight. Great chapter sammy I'm not done reading though i shoud stop lol
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Oh dear just when Joshua was trying to come out of his shell just a bit here comes the bully. Nice chapter Sammy. I can completely sense Josh's struggle here and his longing for friends and people who care about him. he doesn't feel like he has any of that. I see he saw his twin i can only assume. It's redundant to say that I can't wait to see what's next but i really can't. i am enjoying this narritive greatly. You aren't allowed to call it crap anymore lol got it ?
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Awww poor Josh. Sounds like he has it really rough. Nice set up, not too litle and not too much. just enough to get an idea fo what's going on with him. can't wait to see what happens next.
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Sammy that was great. I love stories about Twins,. Can't wait to read more to see where this is going. Captivating beginning had my attention right away.
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Boy Meets World was my show back in the 90's early 2000's. I loved Rider Strong (Still do) and Cory and Topenga were a great couple. I'm excited that there will be a sequel and I hope it does well. You definitely can't do it without Mr. Feeney. William Daniels is definitely a favorite of mine for sure. Mr. Feeney is always who I picture when I think of Dr. McPherson from my Circle of Life series lol. Anyway It should be interesting to see the characters again, like seeing friends you haven't seen in awhile Hope we get a few good years from this. Also wouldn't hurt if Matt Lawrence came back as Jack xD
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Happy birthday Mikie Mikie <3 I hope you are having a fantabulous day!
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Congrats Rob.
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Happy birthday Daithi! hope its a great one
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how about something to replace cheat so good ? not that I know of anything I just don't get that one lol. I like the idea of elite member though
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Happy birthday James
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[Layla] Congratulations, Layla, on Becoming a Promising Author!
Jammi replied to Cia's topic in Stories Discussion Forum
congrats Layla -
Rest In Peace Napervic: 1968 - 2013, Rest In Peace
Jammi commented on Trebs's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Fare thee well my friend. I'll never forget you. -
Oh dear and the rollercoaster ride starts ? This should be an interesting ride. Poor Kei; I had a feeling this was where you were going with what was wrong, and awww him feeling all alone. I understand why Alex was upset, but he may have been just a bit harsh. Regardless this sets up a very intense situation and I am looking forward to seeing where you go from here. it should be grand in your capable hands
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I read this when you first posted it and didn't get to review but nephy you know I adore you lol and you scare me because your mind works in twisted ways lol like mine. Anyway the concept of the story caught me right off, and the first chapter didn't disappoint. I feel for Kei, everyone is so against him, they are all upset with him and I have a feeling that they will be kicking themselves later. Like another reviewer said it seems there's a reason Kei hasn't been himself hmmmm can't wait to see where you go with this one i'm sure it will be epic
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Chapter 15: Cousin Interference
Jammi commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 15: Cousin Interference
holy jumping to conclusions Batman! So now we know what Sam has been up to this past week and why Lucca hasn't heard from him, and unless I miss my guess, Germ just went to have the conversation with Lucca tht we saw last chapter correct? Poor Sam he's gotta be so confused about everything, but trying to be good about it since essentially Lucca hasn't done anything wrong. and Poor Lucca in the middle of something he doesn't know how he got into the middle of lol. Oy and Jeremy this is why we don't assume my friend. I hope next chapter this gets cleared up. good stuff Intune I'm glad I had something to read when I got off work today nice way to start my "weekend" Can't wait to see what happens next -
Congratulations On Becoming A Promising Author!
Jammi replied to Cia's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Congrats KC -
To Join the fun I must give a huge thank you to my Beta/Editors for all their hard work. Thanks Kim (naptowngirl) for working with me all these years lol and always being willing to talk with me about stuff and give me advice. and to Mikie(comewhatmay) For coming onboard. You rock my friend
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uh oh i can only imagine what Germ must have done and how that might tie in with Sam not talking to Lucca this whole time... looks like someone's got a mess to fix Great chapter though I was just saying to Kim earlier that I hoped you would update soon. I miss Sam though, probably not as much as Lucca but enough lol. I hope he's in the next chapter. Lucca's thoughts in this were very telling. Can't wait to see what happens next,hope the next chapter comes a little faster. still enjoying this story, Germ better fix this.
