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Lol, yes! What is he waiting for? Right? Thanks, Tim.
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Sorry about that, but you found something positive, hope, nevertheless. Thank you, Tim.
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NaPoWriMo 2016, Week 4 and 3/7
Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016, Week 4 and 3/7
22: Impressive 23: I'll definitely come visit you at your house! Never did a poetry slam though. 24: Got sweaty hands while reading this. 25: Oh my God! Yes! 26: Bridges are inspiring! You found a much better use for them than just driver over them. 27: This made me wish to sit in the cool shadow of a (the) three and read a book. 28: I've been there, your words recall the feeling. 29: For whatever reason I thought of hats while I read this. 30: I'm still learning, but I dance. 31: 'A lightning to clear the mind'. Absolutely. Thank you, Parker, for a month of fine poetry. -
22. Day : closure. 23.Day: I can feel the love 24. Day: not alone 25.Day: I agree Day 26: I hate those days Day 27: hug Day 28: Nice Day 29: yep Day 30: You took me with you on a journey this month. We even wrote something together. Thank you.
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XXII. You just go on and slap your knee, Yes, I know the joke’s on me. I just could not help myself, Now your eyes gleam with glee. Rub it in all you want: I barked up the wrong tree. Yep, you told me long ago, Even bought the fucking tee, Borrowed words from old man Bill, “I told thee.” XXIII. The bodies seeking out their own spotlight, Ice cubes fly, expertly caught in a glass, Just flip the bottles; it’s a damn hot night, flex your arms, show your smile, and shake your as
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Thank you Renee, for featuring my story.
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Lol, yep you're right, it were two. That's why I love to write this story: brief encounters that hopefully incite readers to think about. Thank you, Puppilull.
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Thank you, Lisa! For the speedy edit too.
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I apologize for the mistake! Thank you and Geemeedee for telling me! To many stories in my head, maybe one day I'm going to write their story.
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Haha, if I had the time for all the stories in my head... This prompt story is my opportunity to show at least parts of my ideas. I'm glad you liked it, Val. Thank you for leaving a review!
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Hi Geemeedee, Roman is an attorney, who comes to the bar with his colleagues several times the week after work. Thank you for reading the story.
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Prompt 494: Use the following words in a story: army uniform, a dog, a tent, a hamburger, and a toy. Roman scanned the bar. The piano bench was still empty, the spotlights off. It seemed the whole room was waiting for Martin, just like him. For whatever reason though, the man was taking his time, and Roman was getting more and more nervous. It made him wonder if that was exactly what Martin was aiming for. The fucker! When the door behind him opened, Roman turned around to see who was comi
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I might reopen LHC sometime this week. 494 looks promising.
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Happy Birthday, old man! Come over to the bar and I play you your favorite song. Yes, there's drinks too.
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It has been a hard week for you and your family and you shared some of the pain with us. It reminded me of those I loss and I felt with you by reading your poems. I'm so glad there are happy ones too. Baker boy is really great. Thank you for sharing, Tim!
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NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
Aditus commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in NaPoWriMo 2016 - Week Three
The first spoke to my heart, let me think of those who now roam the eternal hunting grounds. It's dance op de deel in Northern Germany, your barn dance, lots of fun I bet. I loved working with all of you! And for the rest: something is moving, you expressed it so well. Thank you for sharing those with us. -
April 15: made me smile and think of lying mirrors in shops April 16: a prayer I can wholeheartedly agree with, which is rare April 17: Is somewhat creepy, but oh so right April 18: a beautiful picture April 19: Despair, hopelessness, futility, powerlessness…so sad April 20: nice spring day? April 21: not yet
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I'm glad you liked my selection, Val. Even though I had so little time, there was always something that caught my interest. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Thank you, Puppilull! It has been a very interesting week, many things happened which gave me ideas. I'm glad you mentioned the tiger poem.
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Parker, I love your comments. You let me see a brief glimpse at your thoughts, your feelings, thank you for this! *hug*
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Thank you, Cole! Sometimes I'm afraid to talk at all, especially if it isn't my native language. But then I hope for forgiving hearts and the power of emoticons.
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XV. He leans against the bar, drowns out all the love songs in the world, it’s only short, hard beats for him now. Messy kisses, fingers digging into flesh, zippers hiss, Sweat, beer, body wash, and musk, Warmth, brief joy found in a stranger’s arms, Before he fades back into the faceless crowd. XVI. Hidden behind a thin veil of gold, Revealed through a light tug, Lies a true sight to behold, Better than any drug. Dark brown, liquidly filled, Caught in one satisfying bite, glor
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Happy Birthday!
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I so hope writing some of these helped you to cope with your pain and help you to remember happy times. Beautifully written, as always.
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Thank you Tim!
