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    The first spoke to my heart, let me think of those who now roam the eternal hunting grounds. It's dance op de deel in Northern Germany, your barn dance, lots of fun I bet. I loved working with all of you! And for the rest: something is moving, you expressed it so well. Thank you for sharing those with us.
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    NaPoWriMo Week 3

    Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in NaPoWriMo Week 3

    April 15: made me smile and think of lying mirrors in shops April 16: a prayer I can wholeheartedly agree with, which is rare April 17: Is somewhat creepy, but oh so right April 18: a beautiful picture April 19: Despair, hopelessness, futility, powerlessness…so sad April 20: nice spring day? April 21: not yet
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    Days 15 to 21

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 15 to 21

    I'm glad you liked my selection, Val. Even though I had so little time, there was always something that caught my interest. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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    Days 15 to 21

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 15 to 21

    Thank you, Puppilull! It has been a very interesting week, many things happened which gave me ideas. I'm glad you mentioned the tiger poem.
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    Days 15 to 21

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 15 to 21

    Parker, I love your comments. You let me see a brief glimpse at your thoughts, your feelings, thank you for this! *hug*
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    Days 15 to 21

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 15 to 21

    Thank you, Cole! Sometimes I'm afraid to talk at all, especially if it isn't my native language. But then I hope for forgiving hearts and the power of emoticons.
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    Days 15 to 21

    Aditus posted new chapter in Never Cry Wolf

    XV. He leans against the bar, drowns out all the love songs in the world, it’s only short, hard beats for him now. Messy kisses, fingers digging into flesh, zippers hiss, Sweat, beer, body wash, and musk, Warmth, brief joy found in a stranger’s arms, Before he fades back into the faceless crowd. XVI. Hidden behind a thin veil of gold, Revealed through a light tug, Lies a true sight to behold, Better than any drug. Dark brown, liquidly filled, Caught in one satisfying bite, glor
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    Happy Birthday!
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    Days 8 to 14

    Aditus commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Days 8 to 14

    I so hope writing some of these helped you to cope with your pain and help you to remember happy times. Beautifully written, as always.
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    Days 8 to 14

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 8 to 14

    Thank you Tim!
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    Days 8 to 14

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 8 to 14

    Thank you so much for telling me your thought to all of them! I wrote most of the poems somewhere not at home and think it showed, it has been one hell of a week.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Thank you, Lisa! I think I wrote the one about being tired after we both complained about the week we had.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Of course you knew the dessert! Yes! Forsythia! One of my favorite too. Thank you. It makes me happy, when thought go in different directions. Basil yes, sometimes when I make pesto to go with it! lol Thank you for telling me your thoughts, AC.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Thank you, Val. I'm glad you reminded me to take the on challenge.
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    April 8: Not comforting? I can't quite believe that. Also she seems to be a chatty one. And what I said in the thread. April 9: I love this one! Could never understand all the fuss about Pi. Isn't it just a cake? April 10: Ah yes, you manage to emphasize the rush and hectic with a neat trick. April 11: As I already said about Val's poem: These old words are quite onomatopoeic. April 12: I so love this one! Holding my breath until I reached the end every time. April 13: In search for inspiration you found a bird. Again. I recognize myself. Writing poetry sharpens the senses. April 14: And I'm without words again. My heart hurts, you made me cry. Gah! Perfectly performed despair.
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    I like number #7, it's exactly as you said. I also learned a new word: Claymation figure. Number #11 made me grin. those old-fashioned words are pure onomatopoeia sometimes. Number #12 talks to me. Poetry has way to make things clear, has it not? Thank you for sharing, Val.
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    Wow! I hoped this would happen since forever, now I'm kinda shocked it's finally there. I'm going to enjoy this and cook dinner now. Whatever happens next... The drama is back. Great chapter again, Parker!
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    Okay, an explanation for Zander's behavior at the party, I'm still not happy about it. lol. I find it kind off prophesying that Kaz is training Andy how to run. Didn't he do that enough? I hope that's not a metaphor what will happen next. A great chapter. Thank you for sharing.
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    I have mixed feelings to be honest. As everyone else I'm glad he made a conscious decision to stay, saw what is good in his life. On the other hand I'm disappointed. Zander doesn't need to admit anything to say no to something he doesn't want. Maybe I'm just in a bad mood, lol. Well written as always. Thanks, Parker.
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    Days 8 to 14

    Aditus posted new chapter in Never Cry Wolf

    VIII. You’re never sleeping, keeping vigil, whispering, waiting, until it’s finally your turn, being me. You? IX. (poetry prompt 19) I can’t sleep You’ve moved on I count sheep You are gone The mammals leap And I’m in Bonn. At least I got to keep the dog, He is true, Faithful too. I feel blue. Have no clue. Damn, what to do? I want some stew! Tossing and turning in bed, And fluffing the pillow. Get out of my head! The white curtains billow Going to change them t
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    That's what I call a perfect debut! Red fits you well. The words you found are beautiful, your sense of rhythm excellent.
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    I hummed your words, very nice. Love it. Some parts were a little muddled in regards of the music, not your words, at least for my ears. A difficult task you mastered beautifully.
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    Sage Advice

    Aditus replied to Zombie's topic in The Lounge

    @Z: Looking at the hair, you ignored it. Don't watch too much TV/computer, otherwise your eyes become squared... WTF?
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    Looking good!
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    Some pitfalls avoided, a number of things clarified. Now to face the dragon... They are on the way.
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