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    Days 8 to 14

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 8 to 14

    Thank you so much for telling me your thought to all of them! I wrote most of the poems somewhere not at home and think it showed, it has been one hell of a week.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Thank you, Lisa! I think I wrote the one about being tired after we both complained about the week we had.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Of course you knew the dessert! Yes! Forsythia! One of my favorite too. Thank you. It makes me happy, when thought go in different directions. Basil yes, sometimes when I make pesto to go with it! lol Thank you for telling me your thoughts, AC.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Thank you, Val. I'm glad you reminded me to take the on challenge.
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    April 8: Not comforting? I can't quite believe that. Also she seems to be a chatty one. And what I said in the thread. April 9: I love this one! Could never understand all the fuss about Pi. Isn't it just a cake? April 10: Ah yes, you manage to emphasize the rush and hectic with a neat trick. April 11: As I already said about Val's poem: These old words are quite onomatopoeic. April 12: I so love this one! Holding my breath until I reached the end every time. April 13: In search for inspiration you found a bird. Again. I recognize myself. Writing poetry sharpens the senses. April 14: And I'm without words again. My heart hurts, you made me cry. Gah! Perfectly performed despair.
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    I like number #7, it's exactly as you said. I also learned a new word: Claymation figure. Number #11 made me grin. those old-fashioned words are pure onomatopoeia sometimes. Number #12 talks to me. Poetry has way to make things clear, has it not? Thank you for sharing, Val.
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    Wow! I hoped this would happen since forever, now I'm kinda shocked it's finally there. I'm going to enjoy this and cook dinner now. Whatever happens next... The drama is back. Great chapter again, Parker!
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    Okay, an explanation for Zander's behavior at the party, I'm still not happy about it. lol. I find it kind off prophesying that Kaz is training Andy how to run. Didn't he do that enough? I hope that's not a metaphor what will happen next. A great chapter. Thank you for sharing.
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    I have mixed feelings to be honest. As everyone else I'm glad he made a conscious decision to stay, saw what is good in his life. On the other hand I'm disappointed. Zander doesn't need to admit anything to say no to something he doesn't want. Maybe I'm just in a bad mood, lol. Well written as always. Thanks, Parker.
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    Days 8 to 14

    Aditus posted new chapter in Never Cry Wolf

    VIII. You’re never sleeping, keeping vigil, whispering, waiting, until it’s finally your turn, being me. You? IX. (poetry prompt 19) I can’t sleep You’ve moved on I count sheep You are gone The mammals leap And I’m in Bonn. At least I got to keep the dog, He is true, Faithful too. I feel blue. Have no clue. Damn, what to do? I want some stew! Tossing and turning in bed, And fluffing the pillow. Get out of my head! The white curtains billow Going to change them t
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    That's what I call a perfect debut! Red fits you well. The words you found are beautiful, your sense of rhythm excellent.
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    I hummed your words, very nice. Love it. Some parts were a little muddled in regards of the music, not your words, at least for my ears. A difficult task you mastered beautifully.
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    Sage Advice

    Aditus replied to Zombie's topic in The Lounge

    @Z: Looking at the hair, you ignored it. Don't watch too much TV/computer, otherwise your eyes become squared... WTF?
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    Looking good!
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    Some pitfalls avoided, a number of things clarified. Now to face the dragon... They are on the way.
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    Happy Birthday!!!
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    A little of everything. I love to eat ice cream in winter, with hot cherries. Number five was very emotional. And the last one was kinda creepy in a Dorian Grey way. Don't you get sick again, what we would miss! On to next week.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    ii I have this forsythia bush in my garden, it screamed look at me! Write a haiku. iii Always welcome to hop on my bike. ; (v)I read a book and wrote it for the main character, the same with (vii). Thank you for your comments, Parker. I'm enjoying this too. Looking forward to next week.
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Days 1 to 7

    Thanks, Tim! I'm glad you like my daily poetry. I look different at my world right now, always searching for inspiration. Exciting. Glad you're on board too!
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    April 1: I’m glad you’re in. It will definitely stick. April 2: cute April 3: *grin* April 4: I ‘d call this ‘Prayer for winter to finally f* off’ very nicely phrased. April 5: My favorite! What I wrote in the thread. April 6: All kind of recipes are circling around in my head. Yum! April 7: A close second. I really love your multi-logue. J
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    Days 1 to 7

    Aditus posted new chapter in Never Cry Wolf

    I. Fool: Stupid, silly, harmlessly deranged? Or just a person who enjoys something too much? Fool: Hoodwinked, mocked, played, tricked? Or just a dessert of pureed fruit mixed with cream? II. Only a thin line, A hint of yellow and green, Will soon spring open. III. Black leather, smooth and worn, molded around me in years. I feel as anew born, now the first outing nears. You are waiting for me, looking so hot in your gear. Eyes are shining with glee, I’m so happy we’re qu
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    Never Cry Wolf

    Aditus posted a story in Poetry

    Achtung! Poetry! A collection of poems for NaPoWriMo 2016.
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    I wrote the second with my head not entirely straight...well that came out wrong. Um..., thanks Lisa!
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    I'm glad. To be honest, I felt a little bad. I tried to move words around, but it came always back to the first version. Thanks, for the forgiving comment.
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    Thank you, Puppi! Yes, it's finally spring. Time to break some rules...
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