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    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    And the story is waiting for you... If it will be your bedtime story, you'll have some interesting dreams I'm sure. Love to read about your ideas. Thanks, Gary!
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    How come Carly is such a bitch? There must be a story... Still, I was glad Craig stood up to her. 'Some growing up' seems to be a motherly euphemism, lol. I'm feeling sorry for her little daughter. So...the talk. A talk? First of many talks? *tries to be patient*
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    The Holly and the Ivy

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story in Fiction

    Haha, yes, the king is almost himself now, which means he will be dominant...as long as Noël lets him? 'The bed-scene is written with so much wit...' I find writing those scenes' is always a special challenge. I'm really happy you liked it. Thank you again for the review, Peter! I am writing my antho story right now, after finishing I'm going to start on book two. Promise!
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    The Trial

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Trial

    I went through quite a number of pieces until I found one that fit. I'm glad you agree. Thank you so far, Peter. Now I'm going to reply to part two.
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    The Trial

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Trial

    I'm sorry I didn't answer your review, Def. 'You do get a sense they always belonged together.' These words make me very happy. That was what I wanted to show, even though everyone and Noel had their doubts. Thank you for following THatI and sharing your thought with us.
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    Prologue

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Prologue

    The perks of reading a complete story... Thanks for giving THatI a try, Gary.
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    Reunion

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Reunion

    Ah, so many good ideas. I hope I can surprise you. Thank you for reading and commenting, Gary.
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    The Letter

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in The Letter

    Wow! Thank you, Tim! Glad you like it so far.
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    Reunion

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Reunion

    Tim! Welcome, welcome. I can't wait to learn what you think of the next chapters. Thank you for reading.
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    And I'm standing with both my feet in the middle of drama central. No wonder the story got out of antho dimensions. This will take a while to solve...lol. Tempestuous start, Gary.
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    Thank you!!!!!
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    Thank you for featuring 'The Holly and the Ivy', Cia. It's the first time one of my stories is featured. Yay! Can't wait for your comments and questions on 29th.
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    Lights On!

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Lights On!

    Thank you for taking a look then. I'm happy you liked it.
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    Story

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Story

    Thank you, Suvitar! That's all we can hope for, in real life and for Jack and Gene. Maybe one day, we'll revisit them and see.
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    I fought with this one, so many ideas so little fitting rhymes. Did you know there isn't anything remotely adequate rhyming with sofa? lol I pushed it away, because it wasn't what I wanted. Peter's poem reminded me and, with a little help, it became this. Thank you for your nice words, Gary.
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    Thank you for your comment, Tim! Warm is good. Right? Maybe we'll meet there.
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    Dream 2.0 The red door dares me to come closer still, to touch its handle, press down, step inside, although its color screams entry denied, I cannot resist the lure, and the thrill. Fingers on icy cold brass feel the chill, as my need to know and my fear collide, I pull back my hand, but my feet abide, and instinct to flee fights unbending will. The door flies open, warmth invites me in, all I can see is a flickering fire. Shadows dance on your lumine
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    Happy Birthday!!!
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    Life Story

    Aditus commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Life Story

    To put it in structured sentences, poetry for example, helps sorting through things/thoughts/pain/joy. At least for me. I guess this just needed to be said. Out loud. I'm with Val, my first thought was you definitely needed a , even though I just came in from the rain and still drip on the floor.
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    So true, kaleidoscopes are truly enchanting. You catch this beautifully. The other reminded my of my great-aunt. Thank you, Dolores.
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    Translation, because yes it's in German. Sorry.
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    I salute you for this perfect sonnet. Like someone smarter than me said: Simplicity is the ultimate sophistication.
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    Solitary

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Solitary

    You might be on to something... It's Pup's roses becoming daffodils maybe. 'walks a tightrope' 'A challenge'...yeah. Thank you, AC.
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    Solitary

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Solitary

    'Such beautiful imagery...' Thank you Def, you couldn't have chosen nicer words.
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    Solitary

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Solitary

    As long as there is a dog you might be alone, but not lonely. I'm glad the poem reminded you of a good thing. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Tim.
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