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Prompt 417 But why would you want me to meet you there?
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 417 But why would you want me to meet you there?
You know I love Rob, but he is a bit much. He means well, still... And that wasn't a tiny cliffhanger. -
One more: A Fool's Thoughts by me. Maybe 'All Categories' should actually be all categories, including poetry?
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Lol, I guess as he saw him only once a year and was busy with getting angry he didn't connect the name with the man he knew. There are longer and shorter chapters. I make the cut when I think it's the right place. Maybe it was a knee-jerk reaction, hit first ask later. Thank you, Cannd. I'm glad you think, it's an intriguing story. Hope it will stay this way.
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A good start! Many questions to answer, so hurry up! We want more!
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Thank you, Def! Many more to come, I'm glad you're in.
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Lol, well I had to do something so you'll want to read the next chapter. Thank you, for your comment, Lit! I'm glad you checked out my new story.
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You're asking the important questions here, lol. Noël will demand some answers and tell us in the next chapter. Thank you, Puppi!
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Yeah, never a prologue without the first chapter. This would be plain mean. Glad I caught your interest. Thanks, Puppi!
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Yeah, well...wish to be there some day.
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Yay! Thank you, Cole! So, what could happen next? Next chapter will give some more answers.
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Good! Thanks, Mike! Glad to have you on board for another of my stories.
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Thank you, avidreader! I'm glad you like it so far.
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The Holly and the Ivy Chapter 1 - Reunion Someone was shaking me by my shoulder. I could hear he was talking to me, only the words didn’t register. My eyelids were so heavy; it felt as if they'd been glued shut. I finally managed to pry them open, and looked directly into a smiling face. The crinkles around the eyes deepened when the man saw I was becoming awake. “You have to get out young man, this is your stop. The driver’s waiting with your luggage. He already called for you two times.”
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The Holly and the Ivy Prologue I hurry through the freezing cold to the heavy church doors. It smells like snow. The cast iron doorknob sucks the warmth from my hand, makes me wish for a mug of mulled wine. Shit. The damn door doesn’t move one bit. I have to push with the force of my full body weight before the wooden barrier gives way and promptly hear an amused chuckle from behind. “What’s so funny?” “Nothing, love.” Nothing my ass. The warmth from the inside of the incense-smoky church
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My grandmother made me talk to Diarmad Guerin every year after Christmas Mass since I was three. The letter he gave me a few weeks before my eighteenth birthday changed my whole world.
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I wasn't even awake when you suggested this. It has been fun last time. I'm in.
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Water drops meet sunlight. Rainbow. Opposite means beauty. Rainbow. Breathe through my color of life. Blood. Be aware I am danger. Red. Bath in my comforting warmth. Sun. Fear my wasting fire. Orange. Enjoy my sparkling zest. Lemon. Watch out for my acid. Yellow. Visit my soothing forest. Leaf. Stay on the path, don’t get lost. Green. Lift your arms, reach out to me. Sky. Avoid my biting coldness. Blue. Paint your favorite color. Brush. Found it was my eyes. Indigo
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Chapter 14-Poetry Prompt 4- Accountable
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14-Poetry Prompt 4- Accountable
That's the beauty in poetry: You put 'the ugly' in nice rhyming packages called stanzas, and with every package done, some of the ugly is gone, or at least easier to manage. Another step in the right direction, I guess. -
I can't get this out of my head:
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I guess I have to write a prompt story for this week. Next week I'll post the first chapter of a second story which I'll update weekly. Can't wait.
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Yay!
