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    Eurovision

    Aditus replied to Daisy's topic in The Lounge

    I think the German piece wasn't bad, it just wasn't ESC-ish enough. And thank you. Well at least for me and some of my friends it's a love and hate thing. It's nothing we take serious, more something we can complain about, talk shit. It gets more and more boring though, not IDK, weird enough I think.
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    Eurovision

    Aditus replied to Daisy's topic in The Lounge

    Oh well...zero points. I should have visited the jazz festival.
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    Eurovision

    Aditus replied to Daisy's topic in The Lounge

    No, that was me.
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    Eurovision

    Aditus replied to Daisy's topic in The Lounge

    I'm going to walk the dogs now.
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    Eurovision

    Aditus replied to Daisy's topic in The Lounge

    Ha yes the clothes were great. Tonight it's black. Or white.
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    Eurovision

    Aditus replied to Daisy's topic in The Lounge

    Yep.
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    The Second Fifty

    Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in The Second Fifty

    I'd love to sit in your beautiful garden and hear more. Happy birthday, Cole!
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    Happy Birthday, Cole!!!
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    Thank you, AC. I love sonnets and I will definitely write more - with four-lined quatrains. It somehow didn't fit here. The sentences felt to be short. So, I hope you don't mind if I stay away from first love for my next sonnets or I might be short again...
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    Thank you, Lit. So thankful that lies behind me. haha
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    Well, the character of my new anthology series are named Romeo and Julian, but that's that. No classic story rewriting, although...I just got an idea for the fall anthology. Thanks.
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    Thank you, Cole! I'm just glad that lies behind me. I want never feel like that again. Obviously, lol.
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    Yep, I'll definitely design the t-shirt. Even if Sunday school boy seemed to be a caricature, he sadly is not but quite real.
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    Aha, see that's why I'm team Rob. He is a model brother, including being annoying as shit. LOL Eric has his share admirers , only he doesn't notice? Do I know someone who has the same problem? Loved this chapter. And yes, I'm catching up. Almost there.
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    If Rob were bi, would he still be so confident? He is older than Eric, more secure in who he is and how he comes across - with girls. But with boys? Not just when he gets hit on by them, but when he really wanted to be with a guy. Hmmm...
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    I hate shopping - for clothes, not for food. My favorite colors are black, blue and deep purple. But I love watching other people buying clothes. And I love seeing others in nice colors, even the Easter egg variety. LOL Your writing was as if I'd been there. Thanks, Tim.
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    First love. You just had to ask about that. Those secret glances when they didn’t look. “I only called because I lost my hat, last time I was here to borrow that book.” Those awkward moments when words failed me. Oh! I stumbled and stuttered, forgot to breathe! My feet were too big. I stepped on their toe. Yet it was all wrong, what lay underneath. Today I’m not who I once was - although My love still has to have black raven hair. I trip, I dance, I crash, l fly. Whereto? As long as i
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    I really like that the talk, they don't let things fester, which is good. I agree that the past is the past, still it made them to what they are now. Maybe they would be as good together as they are now, if it weren't for their past. Can't wait for K & M meeting C & A.
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    Everything is still so perfect. The feeling of arriving home together, the acceptance at Kendall's office. If it were me, I'd be afraid something might happen soon, always the pessimist...haha. Michael jumping out of the truck because someone had 'hurt' his baby made me laugh, after I knew his knee was okay, those boys and their trucks...although if someone had hurt my motorcycle...
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    I understand what Kendall feels, it's kinda unreal what happened. If something goes extremely well, we always think something bad will happen any minute, poetic justice and all. Why do we do this? Good thing he has Michael... . And it isn't as if Kendall didn't have his share of bad already.
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    Happy Birthday, Sasha!
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    Chapter 20 Bridge

    Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Bridge

    'As much as he hated to admit it, he’d resented his son for being stronger and more resilient than he was.' This happens so often: Instead of being proud their children accomplished something they couldn't, parents get jealous and angry. It's such a good explanation for Carson's behavior, not an excuse though. It took quite a bit for him to get there, but he did, which is good.The college fond...ugh. The logical me says water under the bridge, what happened can't be changed, what is important is the here and now. The emotional me is very upset. If it had been a criminal offense, he would still be punished even though he is ill, he regrets what he did and he changed. Again a very good chapter, Gary.
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    A very good chapter, Gary. What I liked most is how Michael and Kendall's relationship is still growing. It's wonderful.
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    Chapter 18 Shuffle

    Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 18 Shuffle

    I have to admit I've been a bit ovwerwhelmed by all these emotions. I mean I'm glad they worked it all out and I can see why everyone did what they did, still... Well, I liked Michael's parents more, sorry. The chapter is very well written, though.
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    Crack In The Wall

    Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Crack In The Wall

    If I really managed to do that, Lit, then I'm happy and a little proud too. The world can use a little poetry every now and then. Thank you for reading and liking my stuff.
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