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Poetry Prompt 9 – Sonnet: Never again
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 9 – Sonnet: Never again
Thank you, Lit. So thankful that lies behind me. haha -
Well, the character of my new anthology series are named Romeo and Julian, but that's that. No classic story rewriting, although...I just got an idea for the fall anthology. Thanks.
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Poetry Prompt 9 – Sonnet: Never again
Aditus commented on Aditus's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 9 – Sonnet: Never again
Thank you, Cole! I'm just glad that lies behind me. I want never feel like that again. Obviously, lol. -
Prompt 412 What time are we supposed to be there?
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 412 What time are we supposed to be there?
Yep, I'll definitely design the t-shirt. Even if Sunday school boy seemed to be a caricature, he sadly is not but quite real. -
Prompt 239 Just give me a minute, please.
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 239 Just give me a minute, please.
Aha, see that's why I'm team Rob. He is a model brother, including being annoying as shit. LOL Eric has his share admirers , only he doesn't notice? Do I know someone who has the same problem? Loved this chapter. And yes, I'm catching up. Almost there. -
Prompt 243 I never make a promise that I don’t intend to keep.
Aditus commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 243 I never make a promise that I don’t intend to keep.
If Rob were bi, would he still be so confident? He is older than Eric, more secure in who he is and how he comes across - with girls. But with boys? Not just when he gets hit on by them, but when he really wanted to be with a guy. Hmmm... -
I hate shopping - for clothes, not for food. My favorite colors are black, blue and deep purple. But I love watching other people buying clothes. And I love seeing others in nice colors, even the Easter egg variety. LOL Your writing was as if I'd been there. Thanks, Tim.
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Poetry Prompt 9 – Sonnet: Never again
Aditus posted new chapter in Aditus' prompts and circumstances
First love. You just had to ask about that. Those secret glances when they didn’t look. “I only called because I lost my hat, last time I was here to borrow that book.” Those awkward moments when words failed me. Oh! I stumbled and stuttered, forgot to breathe! My feet were too big. I stepped on their toe. Yet it was all wrong, what lay underneath. Today I’m not who I once was - although My love still has to have black raven hair. I trip, I dance, I crash, l fly. Whereto? As long as i -
Chapter 23 The Wild Card Effect
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 The Wild Card Effect
I really like that the talk, they don't let things fester, which is good. I agree that the past is the past, still it made them to what they are now. Maybe they would be as good together as they are now, if it weren't for their past. Can't wait for K & M meeting C & A. -
Chapter 22 Making Your Own Odds
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 22 Making Your Own Odds
Everything is still so perfect. The feeling of arriving home together, the acceptance at Kendall's office. If it were me, I'd be afraid something might happen soon, always the pessimist...haha. Michael jumping out of the truck because someone had 'hurt' his baby made me laugh, after I knew his knee was okay, those boys and their trucks...although if someone had hurt my motorcycle... -
I understand what Kendall feels, it's kinda unreal what happened. If something goes extremely well, we always think something bad will happen any minute, poetic justice and all. Why do we do this? Good thing he has Michael... . And it isn't as if Kendall didn't have his share of bad already.
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Happy Birthday, Sasha!
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'As much as he hated to admit it, he’d resented his son for being stronger and more resilient than he was.' This happens so often: Instead of being proud their children accomplished something they couldn't, parents get jealous and angry. It's such a good explanation for Carson's behavior, not an excuse though. It took quite a bit for him to get there, but he did, which is good.The college fond...ugh. The logical me says water under the bridge, what happened can't be changed, what is important is the here and now. The emotional me is very upset. If it had been a criminal offense, he would still be punished even though he is ill, he regrets what he did and he changed. Again a very good chapter, Gary.
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Chapter 19 Game of Chance
Aditus commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 19 Game of Chance
A very good chapter, Gary. What I liked most is how Michael and Kendall's relationship is still growing. It's wonderful. -
I have to admit I've been a bit ovwerwhelmed by all these emotions. I mean I'm glad they worked it all out and I can see why everyone did what they did, still... Well, I liked Michael's parents more, sorry. The chapter is very well written, though.
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If I really managed to do that, Lit, then I'm happy and a little proud too. The world can use a little poetry every now and then. Thank you for reading and liking my stuff.
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The first stanza happened to come out as it did, and I had to simply accept its form and write the others accordingly.Be all the Poetry-Prompt-Geek you want. I will come back and read your comment again and again, especially when I struggle with the words again. Thank you so much!
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Thank you, Cole. Fear itself appears indomitable at times, it needs to be conquered. I'm fairly new to poetry, I'm glad you loved it.
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Thank you, Dolores.
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It made me sad.
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Carlos! Happy Birthday! I promised you a red bow.
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As I already told you, it's one poem a day, and this month I run around with a little note pad all the time and jut down words. You don't need to understand German, the translation is there, btw. Just try to speak the words, it's fun how they sound. I do that all the time with languages I don't speak and make the native speakers laugh.Thank you, Cole!
