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    Bright Thunder

    Aditus commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Bright Thunder

    I have to admit it's been a while since I read something of yours. Your writing got even better. WOW! To have such a relationship...I was the fly on the wall, I saw it all live and in colors, I heard the thunder, felt the rain, smelled the food, but above all I saw love.
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    Chapter 1

    Aditus commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I always read the werewolf stories. The fight was exciting, and I agree with Jo Ann: Bill has quite the nose. Maybe I should work on mine some more? Great story Wayne. Thank you.
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    Poem One

    Aditus commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem One

    Playing with oppositness, aren't we? Searching... Did you find an answer? My favorite line (besides the title): This egocentric devil I am Honestly Believes He’s the most altruistic angel of them all. Great work.
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    Chapter 1

    Aditus commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I expected all kind of things when I read the title, but not that you would take the antho theme so literally! I wonder how long their respective scars were at the end of the story. Great story. Thank you.
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    Thank you for your comment Wayne. I still can't believe I said that, though.
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    Thank YOU for reading. It feels a little like unburden on other's shoulders. It helps.
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    He's amazing, isn't he? Because he is a real person. I'm like you, I always deal poorly with death. This time I tried writing.Thank you for your comment, Cia.
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    This one of the honest things I ever wrote. I'm glad you felt that. Thank you for your comment, Jo Ann.
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    Thank you Lisa! For reading, listening and encouraging me. All the time. xxx
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    Thank you Sasha! Without you there wouldn't have been a story. *snuffle*
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    Into the Fire

    Aditus commented on Cole Matthews's story chapter in Into the Fire

    You already know that I really like this story. Now that I see it all polished, I like it even more. It's interesting to see a part of history I don't know much about. Well I guess I'm learning more when you keep this up.
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    Chapter 1

    Aditus commented on Yettie One's story chapter in Chapter 1

    It's the ever present question: What if...? What if they had met at the front? What if they had both survived? What if Owen could have told Todd he loved him? Questions, which can never be answered, which makes them powerful, so powerful they can destroy a life. When I visited Verdun and I saw all those white crosses, I practically felt the lost chances, the unanswered questions, the destroyed hope, the ruined lifes that rested there and elsewhere. You tied all this to a gripping story, made it even more clear, showed what sacrifices have been made.
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    I'll start....hmmm....at the end this time. And when the weather is too nice to stay inside, the dogs, my laptop and me go out. Together.
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    In Sickness and in Health He sat beside her bed, holding her hand. She was thin, too thin. Her skin was yellow, as were the whites of her eyes, a telltale sign of liver failure. Sometimes she would fall asleep for several minutes, and then, when she woke, she had this faraway look, as if seeing something nobody else in the room could see. She was forty years old and dying. According to her doctors it would happen in the next few days. Nothing could be done; the cancer had come back. *** I ha
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    The narrator struggles with the impending death of a dear friend and colleague.
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    Happy birthday, Conner!
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    LOL OOOkay:1. Maybe it was a whole pitcher? 2. Yeah me too. 3. Irri hat a very convincing idea. :thumbub: 4. Good! 5. Thank you for your comment.
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    Thank you Sly! You tell me. What could he have asked?
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    So what could he have asked, hmmmmm. Not telling! Thank you Lisa!
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    Good! And no, not a chance. It's a seeeecret. Thank you for your comment.
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    Thank you Valkyrie! I'm glad you like it. Ha, but that was my intention. I'd love to read the questions you came up with.
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    You captured this dreadful moment of life perfectly. Great work, Mann.
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    Prompt 353

    Aditus commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 353

    Ha you had me with the accident! I really thought Evan was dead. I liked that there was hope at the end.
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    Super Clusters

    Aditus commented on Daddydavek's blog entry in Daddydavek's Blog

    Fascinating. I already read something about this on google news.
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    “I can’t believe you asked him that!“ Ralph slapped Andre upside his head before he passed him a wad of paper napkins. “Yeah, me neither.” He took the tissue and dabbed it at his face and chest. “I’m such an idiot.” “That and you stink of beer.” Ralph sniffed at him. “I would never have thought—“ “--yeah that’s obvious.” Ralph shook his head and turned around on his barstool, hopping down on the far side, making sure he didn’t land in the puddle of beer around his friend. “Thinking really is
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