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LOL OOOkay:1. Maybe it was a whole pitcher? 2. Yeah me too. 3. Irri hat a very convincing idea. :thumbub: 4. Good! 5. Thank you for your comment.
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Thank you Sly! You tell me. What could he have asked?
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So what could he have asked, hmmmmm. Not telling! Thank you Lisa!
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Good! And no, not a chance. It's a seeeecret. Thank you for your comment.
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Thank you Valkyrie! I'm glad you like it. Ha, but that was my intention. I'd love to read the questions you came up with.
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Prompt 353 - The Anniversary
Aditus commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 353 - The Anniversary
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Ha you had me with the accident! I really thought Evan was dead. I liked that there was hope at the end.
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Fascinating. I already read something about this on google news.
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“I can’t believe you asked him that!“ Ralph slapped Andre upside his head before he passed him a wad of paper napkins. “Yeah, me neither.” He took the tissue and dabbed it at his face and chest. “I’m such an idiot.” “That and you stink of beer.” Ralph sniffed at him. “I would never have thought—“ “--yeah that’s obvious.” Ralph shook his head and turned around on his barstool, hopping down on the far side, making sure he didn’t land in the puddle of beer around his friend. “Thinking really is
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Finished.
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352 is mine.
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Someone pass me a jacket. The desire for warmth comes out loud and clear.
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Lol, thank you Lisa. As I said before, take out of it what you want, make it your own, which would make me happy.
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Thank you. I might.
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Thank you.
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The 'I' is always problematic. In this case I wrote 'my' which suggests there is an 'I'. There is the volcano, which destroys but the lava will also be good soil eventually. A person, the 'I', can destroy, with words, with what they do, but it can also be the foundation of a new beginning.Did this make sense? Maybe I just thought too much about this. Thank you for your comment Ron, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. 'Grace' hmmm nice, love it.
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Cool! Thank you Jo Ann. I visited Sicily when the Etna erupted, it was spectacular.
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Good idea. Sasha and I have to wait a little until the leaves actually turn red, but wouldn't that be fun? Thanky for your comment nostic.
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Thank you Jaro. That's the special thing with poems, everyone can take what they want out of them and make them their own.
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Ha! But that's exactly it. It's the Etna on Sicily. I thought it's a good image of how something destructive can also create life, literally and personally (as in what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.) Thanks Irri.
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Poem Prompt One, Tanka, Stray
Aditus commented on Toast's story chapter in Poem Prompt One, Tanka, Stray
I love this. It's sad, as most of yours. The inner person fears its own storms and lightning, that's what I see. -
Okay so I cheated by reading your response to Irri's comment. I'd never dared to say I actually thought of air-condition when I read this. LOL Very good, Ron.
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Out of my shadows, rivers of red stone arise, burn to become life. Green slopes swaying in the wind, veiling the lines they came from.
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Thank you Dark. I always read this blog and now I'm in too. Wow! Aww Lisa 'practical flawless' thank you, but you didn't mention my endless sentences you have to hack in two or three all the time. And I learned a lot just by reading what the editors around here talk about. Now you know Sly and you made me think about how I'm doing this, never did this before. Turning the table, good idea. *goes and reads The Phantom*
