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  1. What else? The purpose fits the words? Folded kiss of course made me think of folding space and time. After reading your poem I thought more of Kiss in a box. Weird. Thanks.
  2. Lisa always gets me flavored coffee for my birthday. I can't get it here, at least not this really tasty, crazy stuff. Love it. When I have it, I skip the green tea and the sugar.
  3. Aditus

    Poem Four, Stop

    There's nothing wrong with that. Impulsive has something to do with pulse.
  4. Congratulations Cole and Randy!
  5. Aditus

    Chapter 14

    I totally missed this chapter. Again. I liked to read more about Opie, it still isn't enough, though. I like dragons.
  6. One mug of green tea no milk,no sugar, then later two mugs of Italian coffee with foamed milk and vanilla sugar.
  7. You explained it well. I totally understand why you want to break up with him. Maybe he will too, together with the 'it's not you, it's me' line. Usually you can't break up with someone without hurting them. You just have to live with being villainized by some. And there are people out there who like villains, just saying...
  8. Happy Birthday Mike!
  9. Happy Anniversary you two!!
  10. Without words.
  11. Very interesting. Some things that immediately came to my mind: That's entirely my fault because I'm such a slow writer. Which brings me to my question. You said you're in the planning stages of your next story. How do you do it? Write down snippets, ideas? Characterizations? Cole is also an amazing beta-reader. I'm just saying...
  12. Well this certainly wasn't a match made in heaven but in hell. It's good it's over, for both of them. You wrote it well.
  13. Aditus

    Home again

    Thank you Sly. Definitely more to come because this little experiment went so well. And 'poor Jonah' will be a popular line, mark my saying.
  14. So good Jo Ann.
  15. Aditus

    Home again

    Unfortunately. Help me remember why this is something good?
  16. Happy Birthday!
  17. Aditus

    Home again

    I'm happy you all liked my little piece. Makes me write faster. I hope to have something by the end of summer. Thank you for your comment.
  18. Aditus

    Home again

    It's actually a re-write, but because I'm a slow writer and I want to finish this before I start posting, it will probably be end of summer. Thanks for your feedback.
  19. Aditus

    Home again

    You? Nosey? No way! Prologue and first chapter done. Thanks for encouraging me.
  20. Aditus

    Home again

    Hahaha, thank you Cole. Well it will be part of a story...
  21. Short and sweet. (I hope.) Home again.
  22. Home again? I stood in front of the departure gate, and of course Chris was nowhere in sight. Then somebody called my name. “Jonah! Hey Jonah… over here!” Michael. He waved at me with what looked like a hat and suddenly I felt the cold. I had totally forgotten about that. A hat would be good, and gloves, and definitely a warmer jacket. I grabbed my suitcase and my duffle bag and crossed the street. “Hey Michael, didn’t Chris say he’d pick me up by the departure gate?” “Yeah, but we could find
  23. Yep, I wondered about the 'just' also.
  24. Happy Birthday!
  25. This is one of the reasons I have to re-write my favorite story and have to come up with lyrics of my own now.
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