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  1. Aditus

    Burnt Dreams

    Not cruel... inspiring? Thank you Ieshwar for sharing your thoughts. I love to hear what people think about my stories. Please do that.
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    Burnt Dreams

    Thank you Cole! I'm happy because exactly that was my intention. All kind of things? I'm curious now.
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    Burnt Dreams

    Thank you Bill! I'm glad you liked the story. Yes, that's the advantage of an open ending, we can make our own. I like your version.
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    Burnt Dreams

    I felt a little bad to end it like this, but only a little. I always try to imagine how my characters feel, how the would react. I'm glad it worked out. Thank you for the really nice comment.
  5. I was so sure I smelled vomit. Eww... Very good story Sasha, nicely paced, I liked Blake from moment one. Why is it again that everyone but us can see what an a$$ the man we fell in love with, is ?
  6. Aditus

    Story

    A very sad story. I guessed it would end like this but somehow I had still hope they would find a better way to end this, but it was not meant to be. A good story, it will stay in my mind, but I won't read it again.
  7. Aditus

    Half Jack

    A well written story, as always Thorn. In theory gender identity shouldn't be an issue, it's the people who count. We got a glimpse at some of the problems it can involve until you know who you are. IMO it ran a little too smooth between Sam and Nathan, but on the other side... Why not? Wouldn't it be wonderful if it would work out like it did?
  8. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    Kitchen challenged! Now I know what your name means. Honestly? Shit you two were lucky nothing more happened. Must be love, right? What a story and you told it well, as always.
  9. Aditus

    Invested

    I don't know why you guys write so epically pictorially about stressful dinner parties, you're making me really nervous here. Good story Cole, I want the recipe for the vegetarian cassoulet btw.
  10. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    What a great story Mann. A personal disaster leading to a worlwide one, I could see everything in my head like a movie. Seeing how this world worked something like this had to happen some day. A well written and constructed story which interpreted disaster as it should be, inexorable. Wow.
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    Burnt Dreams

    Yes ma'am! I'll abstain from the 'that' from now on.
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    Burnt Dreams

    This could be my new motto then? Thank you for the praise Z., it really means much to me. I had proficient help, though.
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    Burnt Dreams

    All in good time... Thought you might love that line, haha. Thank you for asking those questions, now I know it worked. *hug* You'll be the first who knows what happens next, as always.
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    Burnt Dreams

    Ahh but you featured the prompt that might give some hints...All the questions will be answered in the next two anthologies, I promise. Thank you for telling me how you feel, I have to admit I feel a tiny bit guilty.
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    Burnt Dreams

    Thank you Jo Ann. You're the perfect doubt-killer! It helps a lot. *hug*
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    Burnt Dreams

    LOL. Sorry? Yes for what happens next you'll have to wait for the next anthology, for what you're probably waiting for you'll have to wait for 'The Back-up Plan'. That were five 'for's' in one sentence... wow. Nevertheless, thank you for your comment, I might write a prompt or two around the guys, if that helps.
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    Chapter 1

    What a wonderful story! Everything was just right, nothing over the top.I will start this Friday the 13th, with a positive feeling, thanks to you.
  18. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    OMG you make me really nervous seeing Christmas Eve dinner coming up! I'm with the kids waiting wide eyed for the explosion I have to imagine now all by myself. Great job Kitt.
  19. Aditus

    Chapter 1

    I loved this tale, it even had a moral at the end, as it should have. Beautiful language too. Thank you.
  20. Aditus

    Burnt Dreams

    Burnt Dreams Maya held the phone in her hand, finger hovering over the last number, but then she threw it back on the desk. Closing her eyes, she pinched the bridge of her nose between her thumb and forefinger. How could she call a client while Paul made such infernal noises in the kitchen, banging around pots and pans and slamming drawers shut? She sighed. Ever since the man had come back yesterday, he'd been in such a foul mood it equaled the weather outside. Fed up and determined to find out
  21. Paul tells his sister Maya how he met Sam, became his friend and fell in love with him eventually.
  22. Agreed.
  23. I might start reading a bit earlier now...
  24. I'm so behind I didn't even get started yet. I have some serious reading to do during winter break me thinks.
  25. You stole my story title! Naw... not really, but you could have.
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