Whew! So happy Michael made it through surgery. Soon the family will support him and his dads.
Great story so far, Tim!
Now:
I'm impatiently waiting for more!
For a moment Patrick thought he heard a grumpy voice mutter “the sooner, the better. I miss Theo.”
*snort*
A nice chapter, but I'm really glad the next chapter is only one click away.
a blond, barefooted protector clad in black leathers which had flashed into his mind when he was contemplating what to put in the last spot. Transparent wings hovered around his broad shoulders, and the badass attitude clearly said he'd deal with anyone and anything trying to mess with his charge.
I love this!
Great chapter!
Michael insisted on getting an arm free to wave back.
He is such a lovable boy.
...but surely Michael’s guardian angel won’t forsake him now.
I liked the nurses at the hospital remembered Patrick's mother as a special person. Her abilities almost sounded magical.
‘Plate – tallerken - Teller.
‘Gaffel – fork - Gabel.
‘Mouth – mund - Mund.
‘Næse – nose - Nase
‘Eyes – øjne - Augen.
Peter's mother reminds me of someone I know, ugh. Otherwise, I think we all have someone like that in our life sooner or later.
I love 'knuddel' chapters, thank you.
Hey, that means we get to make friends together as a couple, rather than me having to convince your old friends to accept me
That's so sweet.
“All I want is to be surrounded by people who accept me and love me.”
Awww... A lovely chapter!
Patrick's parents did the right thing in keeping those relatives away from him.
Most people have relatives they'd rather forget.
On to the next chapter.
penny pinching prudes, or agonizing aunts You really have a thing for alliteration, huh?
So, the evil neighbor made an appearance. Makes me think of another kind of arrows fitting her bigoted mind.
Thieving comes along nicely.
A delighted impish giggle and ditto angelic titter in his head made him want to roll his eyes. Jeez, when would those two leave him alone?
Never!
I love reading about the beginning of AI.
Theo might already be running tests.
A nice chapter.