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Such raw emotion.
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Ooh..! Plot twist!
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Chapter 1 - The Midnight Hour
Brokenbind commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Midnight Hour
Tease indeed, but perhaps a story to settle in to. -
Tyler might just be the hero of this chapter. Optimism despite Mum's booze, little money for treats, and a lacklustre holiday spot.
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That's an extraordinary commitment. As a non-writer I had no idea of the amount of effort involved in producing a story. Great floor-plan too! I want Renke and Penni to be 'official', dagnabbit..
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Lots of twists and turns - liking it so far
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It all seems to be falling into place for Stephan. Hopefully this isn't just calm before a storm...
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Perhaps the guest room won't be needed after all...
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Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
Brokenbind commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
Aww - I really want Artie and Scotty to work. -
Good that Stephan is making friends and adjusting so quickly. Sometimes you just know when somewhere is 'home'.
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Good Lord - I don't envy Treadway...
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Good story. I wonder if he'll start his new life in rural Denmark, or in a big city?
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I was a bit alarmed that Matty didn't get tested afterwards. But I assume that was implied. That child will be very lucky to have them all.
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Just binge-read from the beginning. I like this story - it's imaginative and has good chemistry between the main characters. Quite why a trauma doctor would lead an exfiltration team is beyond me so far, but this is fiction, and it helps the narrative.
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Well that was lovely. They will have a more balanced relationship now than the did before. Rex gets his Daddies back under one roof!
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That was very well done. I felt I was there.
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It felt as if Hank had several thunder-clap revelations in the space of ten minutes. I feel for him - it's not pleasant to have your world view pinball around like that. It will take him time to digest it all.
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Enjoyed this immensely.
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Chapter 16 Moral Support
Brokenbind commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Moral Support
The dog is also called Chase..? That poor pooch will be awfully confused when human Chase next visits Dawson! Chase and Hank. Thank goodness they are in therapy. More mature as he now seems, Chase is still hugely reactionary. Hank is mired in grief. Both still need support -
Great to see a new chapter. I anticipate that Governor von Beckendorff may serve to keep the chill away from George as the evening wears on...
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That segue was most welcome, and we left their story with their future full of promise. Thanks Headstall.
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Chapter 5 More than baby steps
Brokenbind commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 5 More than baby steps
That went very well, considering Adrien's initial fears. And his relationship with Theo seems supportive and easy, even after only a month. -
"Asswrecker McFrostybitch" made me laugh, but this is so well written that I smiled throughout
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Chapter 13 Fare Thee Well
Brokenbind commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 Fare Thee Well
Fingers definitely crossed for Dawson but I bet he doesn't need much luck in that department. Go get your man! Seriously. Chase and Hank are so disconnected that I'm about to facepalm myself into two black eyes. -
If Gustav was Anami, and he was with Victor, then perhaps Victor is at risk too?
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