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  1. Thanks everyone. Made my heart hurt. Congratulations to all the winners and all nominated. Great writing by all Many thanks to Louis and Corneles
  2. I'm not a gay male, but bisexual female. There's times that I hate my body because my hubby has the genes that keep him slim, muscular, and at 62 turns 30 year old heads. I'm very me. At 54, I were jeans everyday, boots, and t shirts or sweat shirts. My weight flucuates all the time. I've never been bigger than a ten or smaller than a five. Who cares? He just wants me healthy. Surprisingly, both sexes seem to gravitate toward my laid back, don't care if I'm sexy or not image. so, I think happiness with your self image sends out a message to those around you. JMO
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    Smitten

    I feel like you are going to get a lot of mixed reviews with your story, but I'm entranced. What wonderful writing and descriptions of inner feelings. I've one writer here that I just read for his great imagery, which I need to catch up on. I'm so behind. But, back to you. I'd say, keep your descriptions of the relationship in a comfortable place for you and your readers. I don't mean take away from your story. Just be tasteful and make your readers appreciate your writing and the emotions you write. JMO. I love it!
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    Rule 3354

    Definitely a different approach to a story. I'm curious. You did your homework and that's great.
  5. I knew you were this and had evil thoughts.
  6. I'm shameless too. Send me two please. LOL
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    Chapter 2

    Cliffhanger? Did you just not want to write sex or let us know what the phone called revealed? "throws cold water on you"
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    Chapter 2

    The underlying turmoil in this chapter read like a "brushfire". I was hot just reading it. What a way to end a day. Your best friend gives you advice that you know is true, but your inner self pushes you in the opposite direction. Fitz opened the gate though
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    Chapter 5

    I was right. didn't take away from my enjoyment of the sweet Christmas story. Now, I hate that it's over and just have to imagine Chris and Frank's journey from here on.
  10. Welcome Jayzin! Enjoy and glad to have you.
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    Chapter 7

    Basil had already alienated himself before Will came along. What will the loss of a limb do to his emotions, his confidence that Will has helped him regain? Will's tears are understood, not just for Basil's loss, but fear of the unknown. The next chapter should be heartbreaking as well. I'm sure when Basil finds out the after effects of the attack, things will change. Can't wait for more. Love it
  12. Good Luck to all who were nominated. Being nominated with so many seasoned and talented writers is an honor in itself. Thanks to all who nominated me!
  13. Kudos to you and your wife. Your story makes me feel more solid in my relationship. thank you!
  14. Tugs my emoitons because I feel like you are writing from you heart. Beautiful piece of poetry
  15. Happy Birthday. Hope you have a great day!!!!!
  16. Just looking for stories that I wanted to read and felt at home with. Googled, gay stories, and landed here. Love it. Great authors, great people and wonderful atmosphere.
  17. Never thought someone tripping a geriatric in a round about way would be funny, but I had to laugh. Great take on the prompt. BTW, the scene in the living room could be the scene in a million teen oriented movies. Mom and Dad can't watch us all the time.
  18. From the biggest sap that loves happy endings, this made my day
  19. Why am I not surprised? Didn't know you were also a poet. lOL
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    Chapter 11

    I was wondering until I saw Lisa's review if you wrote the song. Now, I know. A young lady of many talents. "bows" It's beautiful. The depth of emotion in this chapter? Great job
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    Chapter 10

    Damn, what a wake up call CAn't believe I missed this chapter. Dan is so crazy about Jae. I have a feeling he will fight for him tooth and nail.
  22. 7:15 a.m. having my first cup of coffee at work and checking in at GA
  23. This is so much fun Still getting thoughts together for next part
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    Chapter 1

    I'm so glad to see Ryan and Will back, and of course, "The Purpose." I love how he annoys the hell out of Will. So, Barrington is back out on the streets. The good thing now is he'll have to deal with Will and Ryan. I'd say the odds are in our boys favor. This was a great surprise to wake up to this morning.
  25. This is beautiful Thorne. Thank you
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