I won’t restate the previous comments, but just add a new question instead. I wonder what three new words were added to THIS version that weren’t included in the first one? 🤔🧐🤔
My one observation is the flow between chapters is very rough. There often doesn’t seem to be any connection other than the actual characters. I love the characters but each 1-2 chapters could almost be a separate short story.
I don’t know what I did to deserve another chapter today!?! Again I didn’t get a notification and just came across this unexpectedly. I must be living right. 😇🥳💫
I’m glad I try looking at the whole list of stories ( because I quite frequently/randomly don’t receive notifications). I found the last two chapters just by chance today! Yayyyy!!!
Ok, after all the revelations in this chapter, I have a wild and crazy proposition. What if the reason dear old dad doesn’t want Nathan around Annie is because she/Annie belongs to daddy dearest and not Nathan?
I am almost afraid you’ve backed yourself into a corner that I hope you can write the inhabitants of Keller Hall out of. You have created such a hopeless scenario that I’m having trouble seeing how they will survive. Who are they going to find that can or will stand up to Gary, et al? Especially on such short notice.
Question for @Yeoldebard, is Blake intended to be the mate for both Erith/Gara and Adam? My memory is telling me that Erith mentioned that earlier and now Adam has as well.
Ok I’ve tried to be patient. You said @lilansui “see you in 8 hours”, but it’s been over 18 hours now. You’re killing me/us! This story is too good (as all of your stories are), and it is torture to wait for the next chapters. 🙏