I might be overly critical, but am I mistaken in my memory that Grayson is the youngest (freshman HS and not legal)? But she is thinking of letting him move to NY to be near his sophomore/junior College boyfriend? Did I miss something?
Just found this story today. I’m enjoying it so far , but the radically different chapter lengths is frustrating. This one is less than 400 words. Also, not sure if the uploading process is doing it, but all the contractions seem to have lost their apostrophes (we’re, you’re) or something.
Look forward to more.
I agree. As much as I am glad that Donovan is becoming more self aware, the outright meanness and disregard of his feelings by both the ONNAS (- the D) and the DAKS is in no way justified. With “friends “ like these who needs enemies. I will withhold ultimate judgement but wrongs by Donovan do not justify the hateful behavior of the others. It just makes them seem even worse. Plus the DAK (- the S) have still not offered any explanation for their behavior during the Davis incident.