Timothy M.

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Zach and Robbie are very different personalities, but they both take the man who loves them on a rollercoaster ride of joy and anguish.

Great story, I can totally relate.

I guess we'll never jow how this was supposed to have ended.

Uhm, so did Puck survive or not ? I'm confused here..

Well, we knew from previous events they would miss each other, but hopefully they'll catch up in time.

Val is very clever and I like the way he keeps foiling Mia's plans and the government too.

Yes, Val did tell Kismet and he can now court Tal with a clear conscience.

I'm thankful Kismet got out of Mia's clutches. I hope Val recorded the conversation, or that Kismet will believe him, when he tells the truth.

Well, Kismet is certainly protective of Tal and the attraction seems mutual. Rad's stupid joke back-fired wonderfully.

Hmm, why are government agents chasing Kismet? I'm glad he made it safely to Val's family.

Preparations almost done and we're ready to go hunting. But I wonder why Amberly couldn't be told - does Kismet really believe he'll stay at home ?

Best friends are awesome, and Kismet does mean Fate. I have the feeling he'll have an adventure on the ship, but hopefully he'll find Puck as well.

The treachery is revealed, but too late. Or is the dead prisoner perhaps not Puck ? Clereva got away much too easily, and Windall is totally bonkers.

And two foolish and irresponsible young men and their stupid scheming mother get their just deserts. I like the Queen and her no nonsense acknowledgement of Rix's Bound.

Ha, serve Torzet right if he is Bonded to that girl. Love the triad marriage, and it was funny how Rix got all excited by Amberley but is now focused on extracting information without giving too much away.

Well, thank God they finally found a solid link. Now they need to pull tank and get things moving.

Jorzet and Clereva are evil and their eldest son is probably in on it. I'm getting Macbeth vibes here, and I bet Clereva is plotting to have Rix go insane, so her sons can inherit the throne.

So the guards beat up the Heir's future Bound husband, well, that should cause trouble for them I hope. And they both contracted an alien disease, hmm ? I loved the way Rix put his obnoxious relative Torzet down.

LOL, that test had me interested from the start and I guess Puck got shipped out to a space station or something. Shame about the purple-haired lover not keeping his guards in check, and I hope he's looking for Puck and not thinking he got stood up.

Hmm, I had hoped this was progressed further than the short story which did have some kind of conclusive ending. But I guess between the two stories we have a good idea of their lives being forever entwined.

Thank you, tim I try to.

I'm beginning to like Tine, he's clever and will lead his Imperial a merry chaise more than once, I bet. I'm glad he spoke about Aiden, and I feel sorry the friends were separated.

Well, let me put it another way, then. I'm continuously amazed and grateful about the number of people who read my stories, compliment them, and ask for more. I rarely feel the stories rate the praise, or that I can compare to some of the brilliant authors here at GA. But it's great to strive for improvement and have my readers point out when I do better or give them pleasure with my efforts. I also think there are some very good authors here on GA who do not get the attention they deserve, and I'd prefer them to be the ones promoted, rather than those of us who have plenty of GA friends and readers and fans. In other words, you all give me so much in return for my stories, that wanting more promotion or attention would make me feel greedy. Silly, I know, but there it is.

Different than the original short story, but I like this version. But why is Lizan holding out a red tunic, when Tine is already wearing one ?