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  1. Timothy M.
    That's OK, I checked to see whether you had commented or liked it, and that wasn't the case, so i wrongly assumed you hadn't seen it. I don't think Renee posts these in any specific order, so if you submit one soon, it will probably jump ahead of anyone who haven't sent their critique. We sure have something to live up to after the first two.
  2. Timothy M.
    Tillykke med fødselsdagen ! and of course we have to celebrate with a few SATW comics https://satwcomic.com/evil-flag https://satwcomic.com/flag-day-every-day https://satwcomic.com/nordic-cuisine
  3. Timothy M.
    Did you see the first critique, @Dodger ? That was really good too.
  4. Timothy M.
    Of course you can specify the cities, it will give local color for people who are familiar with them, and for others it's nice to get some description of places we may never visit.
  5. Timothy M.
    YAY ! Awesome !
  6. Timothy M.
    Closed does not mean locked.
  7. Timothy M.
    Awesome critique @Wicked Witch You totally captured all my feelings and thoughts about this story. I never thought it was possible to write emotionally and heart-wrenching porn, but Hudson proved me wrong, and you've high-lighted that aspect brilliantly. I eagerly await the sequel too.
  8. Timothy M.
    You'll never get any Scandinavians to approve of Marvel's Thor. https://satwcomic.com/nordic-halloween And the time reverse ending of the first Superman movie ruined it for me permanently. I guess I like Batman slightly more than Spiderman because of all the cool gadgets. The rest of them are pretty much 'bleh' to me. I haven't seen the new Wonder Woman movie yet, but I intend to.
  9. Timothy M.
    Ahh, that makes sense. I did wonder about that note, because the language wasn't that bad, especially in the later chapters. btw sorry about not leaving any comments on the story, but I wanted to read it fast, so I could join the discussion here.
  10. Timothy M.
    LOL, I bet most of your readers recall that massively moment.
  11. Timothy M.
    Please no more drama I crave only peace Amen to that, but unfortunately we seem to live in a world where drama (political, religious, personal, etc) seems to be the norm, whether in the public medias, IRL or on the internet. Making a mountain out of a molehill is the trend - or as we say in Denmark based on the story of H.C. Andersen : En lille fjer kan nok blive til fem høns! (One feather can turn into five chickens.) I’ve been a good person Since the day I was born I want to claim the same, but I think I'll stick to saying I've been a decent person. But there's not much fame or praise for living your life quietly and decently.
  12. Timothy M.

    Caught

    Timothy M. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Caught

    It' nice to feel you belong, but it's even better to know you did the right thing, no matter what your peers may say or think. It's almost impossible as a teen, but with maturity and a good dose of stubbornness and integrity we may get there eventually.
  13. Timothy M.
    That was really well put, thank you @William King I forgot to say last night, that I enjoyed the story, and I'm looking forward to more. Oh, and even if you definitely could benefit from an editor, I think you did rather well for a non-native English speaker. I know how difficult it is, and I'm forever grateful to my editors and beta readers. The only mistake which really made me was when Adam was staring at the roof and not the ceiling in his room.
  14. Timothy M.
    I can see @Israfil 's point, but I actually found the hand job conversation hilarious, especially because it didn't end with Robbie coming. But perhaps it's because I'm not really looking forward to the awkward conversation with Daniel. I'm glad Robbie blurted it out in the presence of Sue and Nathan, because they can call Daniel on any unacceptable behavior much better than Robbie can. As much as I've urged Robbie to come out to his family, and preferably to Daniel as the first person, I don't think Daniel has any right to feel angry over Robbie keeping it a secret. He can be upset, and it's fine to need an explanation, because no ordinary straight people know what it's like to be afraid of other people's reaction to what turns you on ('kinky' straight people may know ). But Daniel needs to get over himself and learn a little compassion, the way Nicola did. PS - I don't understand this need to keep it a secret from Amy, she was the first person to ask Robbie if he's gay. So obviously she's familiar with the concept in some way or another.
  15. Timothy M.
    OK, I read the story. It was sad to see how hurt Adam was by being betrayed and abandoned by people who were important to him. The ways he coped were understandable, even if they were at timed counter-productive, and caused other people to be hurt. I think people are not so much selfish in the negative sense of the word, but we are definitely motivated by whatever makes us feel good about ourselves. Our personality and experiences determined what it is.
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    I agree with Gary, this was a fantastic chapter. I swear I was all when Bobby calmed Johnny down just by putting his arm around him, not to mention taking his hand and coming out in front of everyone. It was really good for the talk, too, because everyone could see how his behavior had caused them to lose years of potential love and relationship, and how him finally admitting the truth gave them a new chance. Connor's speech was so brave and sad, but I hope it will mend some of the damage with Daniel. And I think we could all take this advice to heart: if I do my utmost then it should be easier to forgive myself for failing when I do fuck up.
  17. Timothy M.
    Maybe PS - and how is your chapter doing?
  18. Timothy M.
    I'm not sure how the banner came into the topic since I was asking about the author logo in a topic about signatures. But I'm glad we managed to get past the confusion, and next time I'll make a new topic if I have a question.
  19. Timothy M.
    A very interesting and heartening story, at least when you get to the point when he starts to open up. It's difficult to comprehend the emotional torture he suffered for most of his football career. I hope he finds a new focus in his life as well as love and contentment.
  20. Timothy M.
    Yes, very true - but it also makes it easier to get another chapter written...
  21. Timothy M.
    No need to apologize - I saw this comment but forgot to reply. Better late than never, eh? Yeah, Eric isn't the snooping kind, but those pictures were too much of a temptation. Maybe he did look for his name as well, but I think he would have asked Nelson about it rather than try to read it himself. It's so funny the way 'What would Rob do?' hit a home run with everyone.
  22. Timothy M.
    - so I wasn't not seeing something meant to be there, but seeing something not meant to be there. Shows how rarely I visit that list. I'm glad it seemed an easy fix once we were looking in the same place. And I'm pleased Val was seeing it too. I actually restarted my laptop to see if that would fix it.
  23. Timothy M.
    Just to the left of the text starting A proud father of four... there is a small square space and instead of a picture there is an image logo and the text Author Logo. I can't figure out how to make a circle in the image above - but are you not seeing the same as I do?
  24. Timothy M.
    it's the same in Firefox without logging in or using a private window. All I get is this: Author Logo Mark Arbour writes historical fiction about gay and bisexual characters painted on the canvas of the past.
  25. Timothy M.
    BTW I can see the author banners at the top just fine. It's the author logo to the left of the text I cannot see.
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