Timothy M.

Tillykke med fødselsdagen belated waving of Danish birthday flags

I'm impressed at the way you portray the unhealthy relationship of Twoey and Eric, so subtle it's completely believable that Twoey falls under his spell. It's fucking scary but somehow fascinating too. Like standing in front of a rattle snake poised to strike. I'm hoping Alex will goad David into gathering his friends and make a plan to save Twoey. It's so sweet of Randy to worry about her, but I think she's too clever and cool to be hurt for long once David comes out (if he does).

Selv tak, min ven You're so right about 'yet another retelling' but as you noticed he's resigned and even adds his own bits to the tale. Ohh, stag party, that will have to go into my story notes. John can be resposible for the fun if Anthony gets the best man role for Patrick.

Ohh, Val, then you missed all the good bits. Quick, go back and start over. Sigh, Leaf Eyes and Wolf Eyes Visit pzetts3's gallery and see pictures of Arron and Chet.

Yeah, the dinner with their ne best friends did have one small sad note, but perhaps this made their connection and fun even more special. I think your prediction about their future friendship is spot on. We'll meet Fiona soon, and i think we're all hoping for a good outcome.

Thank for mentioning the growing confidence of Patrick, I think you're right about him improving this way too.

I completely agree with you, Gary. Patrick is finally getting the family and friends he has longed for and deserves. The dinner was meant to show why he and Peter 'click' with the other couple, because they are good people too. I knew your romantic heart would like the J&A story, Kitt loved it too. I'm so pleased you noticed the couple listening in, I felt this was what we were doing, too.

I did worry a bit about having John and Anthony take up most of the chapter, but they are important as friends. They will be Patrick and Peter's connection to the LGBT community of London and going to their wedding should be fun. Yes, Fiona and perhaps a few other relatives are looming in future chapters.

Thanks, Parker, I had fun writing this chapter and I'm glad the story resonates with you.

Thanks, dugh, I'm glad the chapter made up for waiting. Patrick didn't actually consider John and Anthony as friends until the day they found out about him and Peter and had a long talk. Before that day they were just customers. So yes, Patrick was very lonely, but fate is working hard to make up for it.

Yeah, I may have gotten carried away a bit, lol. But at least the two couples understand what it's like to be swept off your feet by love.

Sorry about the lack of Michael, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter nonetheless. I wanted Patrick and Peter to have one set of friends who would understand how a weekend spent together can be enough to know (or at least hope) you have found the love of your life. I don't think the neighbor is quite as bad as Bobby's father but she does tend that way. LOL, if you look at the date and year again, you'll realize Russ hasn't gone to Denmark yet. And while the two stories take place in the same universe and Denmark is a small country, having Peter related to the twins or Jacob is highly unlikely. But it's a fun thought.

Wini was almost too polite, but more for the sake of Mr. McIntyre than his wife. After that woman says "I worked too, but a woman's real job begins when she sets up a house and makes it a warm and inviting home for children." I soooo wanted Wini to say “Well, that would entail such a woman being capable of doing so. If not, her potential children would have been better off being born to another woman.”

Yeah, they click on every level. Loved the intimacy between them. I'm glad Clayton told Ryan he wanted to take their relationship further. Looking forward to the weekend and the big reveal, you author. The history lesson was important and evoked memories for me too. So much fear and sadness and uncertainty. Here, we had the added tragedy of infected blood not being screened soon enough, which hit haemophilia sufferers hard. There was also focus on (bi-sexual) closeted men being 'dangerous' because they would spread the disease to women due to their often secret trysts with other guys. But there was also a lot of effort to educate people and plenty of government-sponsored campains for safe sex.

Huge steps forward, but also some setbacks as Toph attempts too much. Why is he is such a rush to finish his portfolio? He knows he cannot force himself to paint, he has to be inspired and in the mood. But I guess the stress also came from desperately trying to get everything on canvas while he had ideas. Breaks are important though, and Gary seems to know what Toph needs. A two week vacation might be over the top, but I suspect Gary has more than de-stressing Toph in mind. His instincts seem dpot on since it prompted Toph to sleep with him - and more - just like after the successful birthday party. I was interested to note that Toph gave his brother Charles the right to share his phone number according to his own judgement. But he has not been in touch yet, so he may be cautious. Niles is a good friend to Toph, I hope he finds someone nice to love instead.

Awww, AC, now you're making me I promise to get back to the twins soon. Why don't you post your reply to Reader here? I would like to see your response about the mystery.

Not surprising since his brother seems to jump into bed with the guys JJ is attracted to.

Once Patrick had put everything away and locked up, the two couples left for the restaurant. Because they were early and the weather was mild for February, they decided to take a longer walk. Patrick suggested going north to the British Museum and turn east along Bloomsbury Square Gardens before making their way down to The Ship Tavern south of Holborn Station. Perhaps they would even have time to nip up and see where Peter would be working, close to the Great Ormond Street Hospital. For a mome

I liked the story once I figured it out. don't forget to add it to the prompt topic.

Hey tim took me a while to work out what was going on. I think I managed in the end, and I liked the unspoken SciFi with the basic human fear of dying alone.

Tillykke med fødselsdagen from your Danish friend happy waving of birthday flags

OK, time I took up the count of Will's bed partners, since he and Zach seems to be drifting apart. Black Widow starts out with us been told they have been exclusively monogamous during Zach's last senior semester at Menlo. The list after that (including everyone): He fucks Carullo (I think that counts as a first, it's only been the other way round before). Later, Carullo fucks him (with JJ watching, lol). Toby (the rent boy) fucks him for free. Then Will fucks him and Toby does him again. Kissing Kyle doesn't count, right? Jeff fucks Will (is my guess, but nothing new there). Will and Zach have a threesome with Carullo (and piss off JJ, lol) Of course, Will and Zach are together several times. Buzz Dalby fucked him a couple of times (Will did oral on him, but not a full BJ). Let me know if I missed somebody. PS When Will asked JP and Stef “Did he sleep with you together, or at the same time?” I asked, just to embarrass them. I think you mean “Did he sleep with you together, or one at a time?” Since together and at the same time means the same.

I really dislike Alex. And I hate his influence on the brat's behavior towards Jim. At least, Karen was there to stop it this time. Ethan must have the patience of a saint, and I assume he's the reason Tony hasn't dumped Alex as a friend and roommate or even told him to fuck off until he grows up and stops being a stupid prat and a fucking pain-in-the-arse. OK, rant over - I shall try to ignore Alex from now on as not worth the attention the idiot craves. I think I might like him less than Stuart, who may be an egoistic prick and a predator, but at least has his age and inexperience to excuse his immaturity and offensive behavior. I'm glad Ty told him what an utter shit he was for trying to out Ross. Together with his behavior so far it should convince Ross Stuart cannot be trusted. Ross should tell him to fuck off and that if Stuart outs him, he'll have Jim and Tony use their influence on the gay scene in Melbourne to make sure he's banned from MANdatory and outed as a black-mailer. Of course, they would never do that, but Stuart doesn't know. It wold serve him right to get a taste of his own medicine, and maybe he'll stop and think about what he's becoming. I hope Ty tells Jim about the encounter, since I'm sure he and Tony can come up with a better way of helping Ross than the one I've suggested. I liked the glimpse we got of Kevin with his parents. He's going to have a hard time telling them he's bi if he starts dating Warwick. Oh, and I agree with wildone, it would have been fun if they had turned up at MANdatory too, but I don't think Kevin is quite ready for that yet. At some point, I think he would benefit from a talk to Sam (and Deon). Oh, and I'm sure Warwick would be happy to relocate to Sydney and start working for the Swans. Great chapter, Grame, with unexpected drama at the end. But now I have to wait two more weeks for more.

I always thought Chuck was a nice guy, but what he did to poor Matty wasn't kind at all. But maybe Matty didn't want Chuck as a boyfriend? But he didn't even get to fuck him...

Wini very quickly became a favorite character for me, because she is curious, clever, and compassionate. and you already know my opinion of the other 'lady'