Timothy M.

Ahh, yes, I forgot his bottom legs. But the way he's standing, he looks more like a black scorpion.

Nope - six legs, it's a beetle. Lots of black beetles around. Try picture googling Carabidae.

Well, if Caroline wants to act like a man, why doesn't she take Granger as her role model. After all, she is intelligent and clever, so she should be able to work out better solutions. Then she wouldn't have ended up making Granger her enemy which was really stupid to do. On the other hand, I love to see Granger outfox his enemies and get every advantage while still acting honorably, so I very much enjoyed this chapter.

So what - if humans fuck the planet up so badly, they don't deserve to survive anyway.

Well, Svalbard is a dangerous place and Denmark is scared of nature, at least in SatW. https://satwcomic.com/drama-bear

I still can't quite understand why Curtis would sabotage the plane, and I wonder whether the pilot was in on the plans. Maybe he was phoning Curtis in a panic, because he realized Darius was going with Travis. And if Darius got hurt or killed, the whole family would fall on Curtis like a ton of bricks. So perhaps Curtis immediately rang Travis and deliberately pissed him off, so he would refuse to get on the plane. But if the pilot was in on the plans, surely he could have stopped the fire. In addition, why would Curtis have such a tight timeframe. If he meant for the plane to crash on the three hour(?) flight to the west coast, surely it would be better to have it happen once they were away from urban areas, instead of right after take-off. But maybe he only meant to scare Travis and maybe disfigure his looks, so that's why the fire had to happen, while they were still on the ground. All in all it's a mystery.

Cue ominous music - this chapter reeks of future trouble. Don't say I didn't warn you.

Somehow, I'm not surprised Travis turned up. But perhaps it was because I hoped for this to happen.

Time to update the list

It would be more convincing if the artist had remembered that spiders have EIGHT legs.

Glad you enjoyed it. You can see where my avatar comes from. Happy New Year to you too. Yes it is, and she's still making new ones, although not to fast.

I had a very relaxing holiday, with lots of nice food - including risalamande. https://satwcomic.com/exotic-food Happy New Year to you, too. I'll try to hang around here more often.

Thanks, buddy. Godt Nytår from Danmark, too.

Me too

I loved the way Devyn's trouble with understanding human behavior was portrayed. I need to finish reading this story.

I'm surprised that Caroline would be with someone who is described as 'a brutish bore' but perhaps it makes it less likely that her feelings are engaged, which would be a larger danger to her marriage than an affair only for sex. Hopefully Doctor Jackson will be able to save the Norwegian. Poor Winkler and the other staff having to work all night to clean clothes and repack. Surely they could wait another day - although I don't know how long the journey to London takes.

Thanks, it's fun to do a bit of fanfic writing, although it can be a challenge too.

Since everyone else is going with Zach or Curtis, I'll vote for the douche friend who spies on him. I can't recall his name, but I'm sure you know who I mean. Not that I really think he's got the gumption to hit Travis or would be able to win a fight, the way Zach would. But it's fun coming up with other options, and the guy might be annoyed at Travis avoiding him.

LOL, glad you liked it.

Sorry, only three chapters in the Fire prompt series, but I'm glad you liked them.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for leaving a comment. It's always great when readers find an old story.

Tillykke fra Danmark

Yeah, it's sad, because they wrote great stories. Even if the admin team know more, it may not be possible to share it. But I think mostly people just stop visiting.

It was difficult to read at times, but that's because Dodger knows how to grip your heart and twist your guts. No pulling the punches, but if you stick it out, it's a rewarding and thought-provoking tale. Should be mandatory reading in the military.

It's good for Will to learn about other coping strategies, even if they are not something he can employ. In addition, now that he knows how Travis reacts, he'll be able to take that into account. It's one of the things I like about Will, he never forgets important information like that, and he always tries to work through his issues intelligently once he cools down. Calling JP was an example of that. I hope for Stef's sake he did not know about the phone tracking and neglected to inform JP. Otherwise, I think they may have a major argument. Hopefully, only Brad will be in trouble, he's used to it.