Timothy M.

@Valkyrie English commas are the bane of my existence as a writer, and I hate that since I'm close to perfect with commas in Danish.

even the bad ass brother could see they were perfect for each other. Momo will be amazingly blissful with Tian's love to lift him up, and Tian will get rid of the hardness covering his soul and be happy too.

Well, I'm not surprised Momo feels worried, but at least it doesn't prevent him from being with Tian and expressing his feelings.

on the chapter and @FanLit's comment. The clincher was He Tian's elation at Momo almost smiling, he's probably waited a long time for that. But I wanted to smack Momo a little for upsetting the bliss. He could have waited half an hour.

Well, I'm seriously considering having a shower after binging on these HOT chapters. I like how He Tian takes charge but offers pleasure at the same time, and I bet Momo loves it too. And I'm sort of proud of him for reciprocating.

Reading the January CSR Feature story reminded me I've missed having a HOT! like for some stories / chapters. Would that be an option for later ?

Reading this story makes it clear to me we need a HOT ! like. fans self and contemplates taking a shower

why don't we have a 'hot' like ? I'm not surprised He Tian had a smug smile on his face, he just got to act out one of his secret fantasies about Momo. Yum. I have no doubt he'll be back for more.

Well, well, still in denial, but now He Tian knows what Momo wants. We want it too.

It's so funny how He Tian tries to hit on Momo by taking him on a date, and the guy is in total denial. Thanks for the background explanation, it helped, but the story works without it too. (but it would be easier to read the chapter if you got rid of all the empty lines, if you don't mind me saying so.)

At least Trout is having fun being straight for the evening, but the steak tartare was a nasty surprise.

I sure hope he doesn't wait 15 years to tell Aron he loves him. I'm glad he helped Simon get away from the bastard too.

I don't see the gallery pics banner either (laptop and Google Chrome). I tried Firefox too (without logging in), same thing.

You're sounding all grown up. And I like your new icon.

Serves him right, LOL.

I've been trying to come up with something interesting for this topic, but so far I've only managed to compile this embarrassing list: blond guys, uncut dicks, no 'unprepared' anal sex, a dislike of emotional characters, and cravings for (hot) chocolate I guess this is a case of 'write what you know / like'

That's exactly what Daniel should tell the social worker etc, that he feels safe with Lewis and Griffiths.

I liked the fact they're going to avoid the Quidditch club, and that Mason persuaded Daphne to report the incident. I'll keep silent about the rest, but I hope we'll soon get to the end of this whole I don't understand c... or I may lose my temper.

I feel the same way. I like this first line prompt, it has a Rob feeling to it.

Well, we try. Not always successfully,, but we do our best.

When you do, could we have a type of reaction too ? And I like @BHopper2's suggestion of a normal smiley.

I'm so glad I wasn't the only one who felt sorry for the poor guy with pee in his eye.

I can certainly understand why Eric would want his own computer. It's not just the privacy matter, but also not having to go out in the cold, and only using it once a week. I noticed he actually phoned Andy, which is a huge improvement.

I can certainly understand Jordan's concerns and I never assumed he didn't want to live with Noah. But I would have respected him and his worries more, if he hadn't turned up at Noah's door a couple of days later all ready to move in. And if he had introduced the matter in a better manner, like: Noah says: “We’ll be together in the same house. And it will be perfect. Honestly, that is what gives me strength, just knowing I'll be living with you.” Jordan says: “Um … I'm sorry, Noah ... I’ve been thinking … and um ... I don’t know if it’s still a good idea that we live together …” What Jordan could have said: "It's what I really want too, but there are a couple of things I'm worried about and I badly need to talk to you about them." As for Noah's family and his mother in particular, they may love him and him them, but that does not oblige him to accept shitty treatment. I cheered for him, when he stood up for himself, and he should never have apologized unless she did too. And he should have told her, the reason he wasn't honest about being in a relationship is because he's fed up with her nosy and controlling behavior. Or he should have asked his brother to tell her, if he really wanted to help.

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