I have read your stories for years elsewhere. This is a departure in content but not in quality over your other work. This story is so sweet. So sad. So well done. Thanks for your work and glad to see you here. This site is I think the easiest to comment on of those I visit. Pax. Steve
Read this story last night and am really enjoying it. It's the first story of yours I've read since, "Are you Christian", which I really had liked. Looking forward to where you take these guys. Thanks. Steve.
Wow! Rayne and Daniel will join Silver as friends to pull out and get reacquainted with from time to time. Thanks so much for your work and another great tale.
It is a shame, mostly, that creative police and social work is probably done less today than back then. Unfortunately it did tend to tie in to being white male and working or being deserving vs. undeserving poor. I love the way you pull these stories together. When I came out first in the late 60's my Dad would say he could understand the way I was but did I have to talk(meaning be open) about it. Your guys and women do a wonderful job of that and you also show that semi hidden network within and around the community at that time. Again I love this story. Thanks for your labor. Pax. Steve
Ah I had Will hooking up with Buzz's son and moving to Texas ranch life. Then you ruined it. Ha. Thanks for the work. It is really good to have you back on again. Pax. Steve
I am so glad the recent notice brought me to this tale. From the first chapter on I was grabbed and twisted and yanked through the angst but also the tenderness. What wonderful families your guys have. Well drawn and hard to put down so I am wondering if the detail issue is not as serious on a through reading as it was in serial? It was annoying enough at times that I noticed it before I saw the comments but I didn't find it as serious as some did. Thanks Dave. I think I liked this more than Abel but they are both well drawn adventures. Thanks for these as well as your comments which are usually well worth reading.
Please have Rayn call the cops from hospital ? This must stop. Well that part of the story. Rayn and Daniel could mux through a few more chapters for sure. Your characters are always so beautiful and beautifully drawn... Then you pull them end us through the most exquisite pain. You are good?
WHat a relatively peaceful family gathering. Drama was pleasant and very justified. Will just gets better and better. What class with the car and marshaling the grand kiddos. It appears that the Academic Predator will still have much to do. I can't see him slowing down too much. Is Brad actually more stable for real? How nice that would be although he clearly has some heavy hitting left to do. Many questions. It has always been thus. The job of a teacher. Like all good to have you back. Pax.
It is sad that this fine tale has attracted so little,attention. It is a well written moving novel with enough twists and turns to keep the interest. It is also an amazingly accurate look at the time. It makes under the radar seem um not that bad. I suspect this a work of love. Thanks. Steve
Not much new to add. Great to have fix. If it helps this chapter is right up there with what we like about your tales, Humor, human angst and drama. Wish you well.
You always have touched the sweetness in your couples what a powerful chapter. Especially enjoyed the slam on the Docs. So good to have one of your stories around again.
Another fine addition to these adventures. It is amazing how you manage the differential in real and story time so well. One moment I was thinking Casey would be in first grade by now in real time and the next you have fit in the hater candidates. Somewhat confusing but man what a sweet tale. Please keep it spinning for a long time.
Well you did warn us somewhat and none of your stories are fluffy. This has been good and I'll trust you to move all along with fine drama and probably a dose of angst. Thanks I think. Pax.
This is my second time through the trilogy. This time I was just as hooked as the first, putting aside obligations and reading till 1:30 a.m. On several occasions. Funny,sad, reverant and all around powerful I have talked about it to so many friends gay and straight. Thanks. Pax. Steve