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Those times were so different. But think I prefer the risks of hitch hiking and doing who knows what. To the world of play dates and people afraid of shootings in school. I think you made a good point that in those times of freedom and lack of societal awareness the kids were not linked. Kind of like in the "History Boys" when the teacher points out that soldiers were not listed on monuments before the Great War. In fact I suspect there were other similar events at least since the industrial revolution which due to racism or classism were never found out as no one was tracking the kids that Horatio Alger wrote about. Corll and Gacy probably helped start this awareness. Also the fear mongering that is now so endemic. Youth are probably safer now. Although my guess is that the increasing level of homeless kids is or will become at similar risk. Scary stuff Rustle. Glad you followed your instincts. I haven't followed Brooks at all but if he has had a positive time in prison would look at current thought about adolescent brain development and see if he could learn to function outside. He may not be able to function outside anyway. Imagine it is mute point.

Oh for them to be safe and er warm? Just finished these chapters. It has been years since I read the first bunch of GFD. I may need to go back...if I can figure out where I left off. Hehe.

I was a bit surprised that Brad was not a bit more aware of abusive dynamics from Robbie's experiences way back when. Although of course those dynamics were not codified then. I have a hard time with Frank not being more helpful with Zack. Fear those zealot types. Good to see Zack again. Great chapter but opens the way for much new angst for Zack and Will and maybe some more healing for Brad.

Great to see them back and adding yet another plate to spin and balance.

Enjoying your tale. A bit Tolkianesque but fun so far. Thanks.

Sasha is almost as compelling as Silver. I have liked most all of your adventures but do hope it is not too long before we see Sasha again. Thanks.

My first thought was that I would need to review back a few chapters to bring it back. It is a tribute to your skill that I had no problem picking up and enjoying this new chapter. Thanks for another addition to your family lives.

I am rereading after how many years? I remember waiting and waiting for chapters then suddenly they started up again. What a great chapter.

Shaping up to be a nice family birthday weekend. Hope it continues in this vein. But I fear Arbour will strike again. Young Parnell will be in the crosshairs now. 40! I remember that. Hope Brad's fortieth is as memorable as mine was.

Uum. Ageing as a side effect. Guess more of an ugh at my age. But if they can cure a hangover why not ageing? A WEEK? Thanks for your work. Hope the struggle works out.

Wow. Zack zaps and J.J. Steps up. The fact that I worry that JJ not be hurt and Parnell is adds to the kind of ride we get. Liking the Lord and JJ as well as Zack more over last few chapters. Thanks.

Rough when people you have come to like and respect are forced to do painful things. Thanks for the great chapter. New directions? Uum.

Early on I had wondered about this being the first of your stories I've read in process. It is hard but no worse than many other stories I am reading here. Hopefully the next phase will give Sacha and us a break from the pain for awhile. Thanks.

Kinda different for you isn't it? I am enjoying and waiting as you develop your tale. Thanks. Steve

Well I'm latest,so far, but wishing the very best year. Hope to continue to enjoy your story(s) for years to come. Pax. Steve

So hard to read. Must of been hard to write. One hard way to wake James up. Hope to see this move on soon. Pax.

Part of me wants to wait till you are finished so I can follow the story easier, however, when the new chapter appears I am so hooked I reread the last one and the new one. I think this indicates a well written tale that I like. Thanks.

I think it will be fun to finally get to know JJ. What a good way to move through the anniversary angst. Thanks.

Another addition to your fine world, er universe. I being of an age to live more in fantasies enjoy yours. Thanks. I am wondering if they have to add new crew what dangers will come aboard. Or, I suppose, supports?

I suspect PSAT and SAT along with reports from the tutors would work. Also most states require proficiency tests under No Child Left Behind and he would be able to take them at a local school. Or/and a letter from Grand has done wonders for others. I suspect JJ's education has been more rigorous than most home schooled children.

It keeps building better and better. Can't wait for more. Thanks.

Such a cool chapter. I am most distressed that I am almost caught up to you. Great sci-fi.

Mysterious Man uum. I feel in that place where most of the fantasy is fitting together nicely in my mind. But ongoing questions. Ahh you must be doing a good job. Thanks for your work.

Congrats JP. Clearly Mark has a few addicted people on the hook here. Thanks on what is Pride Day here for this history of Gay Pride cleverly disguised as .... ?

All the best aspects of your stories are appearing. I am looking forward to an exciting ride. This may be the first time I caught one in process. Hope I can survive the delay. Are any of your stories in e book format?