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  1. Valkyrie

    Prompt 476

    Thanks for the review, Gary. I'm glad you liked it
  2. Valkyrie

    Prompt 476

    I love the name Soren I don't know how to do the little dots over the 'o'. lol Thanks for the review
  3. Valkyrie

    Prompt 476

    You never know where the prompts will take me... I like these guys, so who knows? Maybe we'll we see them again at some point. Thanks for the review, Cole. I'm glad you liked it
  4. Valkyrie

    Prompt 476

    Who doesn't want a knight in shining armor? Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
  5. Valkyrie

    Prompt 476

    Thanks, Addy I started it a couple of weeks ago and finally got around to finishing it. lol When I read the ambulance prompt, I thought about a story I saw on tv about a knight who was impaled on his own sword. That made me think of jousting, and then led to my prompt idea. lol I'm glad you liked it
  6. “Quick, call an ambulance!” The voice sounded far away and tinny – like I was listening through a soup can. Which wasn’t too far off the mark, I suppose, considering the helmet I was wearing. Hot breath blew on my face in steady puffs. I wrinkled my nose. It smelled like hay and apples. I heard the dull thud of hooves walking away from me, then a concerned voice. “Can you hear me, Soren?” I blinked and did a mental check of my extremities. I wasn’t in any pain – I just felt a lot of p
  7. No...I don't walk straight...lol but not because of my socks. I'm glad you commented on your selection of names. One thing I really like about your stories are the names. I've always been fascinated by the meaning of names and take great care in my own stories when choosing names. Two other comments: I love Sam Gamgee, too. He's the definition of loyal friend. My other comment is that cats are pretty awesome, too. Even non housecats
  8. I have to laugh at the whole sock thing. I am the same way...I very rarely actually pair up my socks. If they're at least close in color, then I consider them matching. Although a lot of times I do find myself wearing vastly different sock colors because I'm out of ones that relatively match. Honestly, I'm happy if they don't have holes in them. lol My mom makes fun of me about my socks all the time. She gave me a nice bag of socks once because she couldn't take it anymore. I thanked her for the new socks and she laughed. They were a bag of her 'old' socks. LOL
  9. Working all day, then going home and collapsing in bed. I'm not feeling well today.
  10. Valkyrie

    Prompt 480

    Thanks, Defiance. I'm not planning on expanding it, but I agree that it could be an interesting premise for a longer story. Thanks for the review!
  11. Valkyrie

    Prompt 480

    Thanks, Tim I appreciate the review and I'm glad you liked it.
  12. Sam is making a very difficult decision, but it sounds like the right one. Their relationship seems like a roller coaster and they can't move forward while still living together. What a sad glimpse into their lives, but very realistic and well-written. Nice job, Tim.
  13. Valkyrie

    Prompt 480

    Thanks so much, Gary. I'm glad you liked it.
  14. Valkyrie

    Prompt 480

    Thanks for the review, Parker. I'm glad you liked it.
  15. Welcome, from a fellow Western New Yorker This is a great site. I'm sure you'll enjoy it here.
  16. Valkyrie

    Prompt 480

    I would have definitely called the cops! lol Thanks for reading and the review. I'm glad you liked it.
  17. My response to Prompt 480 has been posted. http://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie/promptingsfromvalhalla-2016edition/1
  18. “I just have a simple question. Who the hell is asleep in your bed?” Anger radiated off my boyfriend in palpable waves. His face was bright red, and I swore his eyes were going to start shooting flames at any moment, incinerating me on the spot. I froze under his wrath, hand suspended inches from my mouth, the spoon I held dripping milk into my cereal bowl full of now soggy Frosted Flakes. “You could have warned me before I went back there, you coward. At least have the balls to tell me f
  19. A collection of my responses to Prompts.
  20. I finally have one written Look for it to be posted when I get home from work.
  21. Very well-deserved! Congrats, Cynus! :D
  22. :wizard: Happy Birthday, Gene! I hope you have an awesome day! Here's a cake for you
  23. Valkyrie

    Chapter 4

    Casey's not a bad kid. I don't know many teenagers that would take it upon themselves to clean house, do laundry, and make dinner, especially when it's a place they don't really want to be. Lane is adorable. I want to have a 'talk' with the neighbor who tried to touch him... That POS needs to be reported to the police! I found the teacher at school - the one that Casey talked to - a little creepy, too. Or maybe it's just me... Anyway...I think many families are so caught up in their own activities and lives that they don't take the time to spend time together anymore. A shame, really. I look forward to the next chapter.
  24. Great review, Tim! I absolutely loved this story. It's one of my favorites on this site. Well worth the read
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