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It seems that Lewis' life is dictated from without. He just rolls along, doing an excellent job with whatever is assigned. Still, I really like learning all about the various areas he visits. It allows me to research these areas and learn even more. Thanks for your continued sharing of your talents, Q. Tony
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Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
All this time and still Robbie has not had serious counseling. With all he's had to endure he needs major help! I know I feel this way because I was a professional counselor, now retired, but he could still have drama without this unnecessary trauma. -
I am also touched that the yacht is named "Huon". I am eager to see what develops between Lewis and Sebastian. Great going!
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So Sebastian returns, but without the twins in tow. I like this continuity.
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Thanks. I love learning about Australia and environs through your writing. It has opened a wonderful new world to me. I am extremely grateful for this knowledge.
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II am not familiar with time zone differences of 1/2 hours. Every time zone I am familiar with is in one-hour intervals. The purchase of the glass-bottom boat seems odd for transport. Better for tourist uses. Seems like an imposition on a brother he has only known briefly. The story is good. The language - especially in conversations - is stilted at times. Patience is the virtue; Patients are people... Just minor observations. I do await the next adventure. Tony
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I am not familiar with time zone differences of 1/2 hours. Every time zone I am familiar with is in one-hour intervals. The purchase of the glass-bottom boat seems odd for transport. Better for tourist uses. Seems like an imposition on a brother he has only known briefly. The story is good. The language - especially in conversations - is stilted at times. Patience is the virtue; Patients are people... Just minor observations. I do await the next adventure. Tony
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The likelihood of a teen bonding with others - especially adults - when they've had no bonding as a child is very remote. I would like to think Ian has a chance, considering he does have a bond with Steve. Thanks for the conclusion to this story. Tony
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Is this the end? As usual, I hate leaving new "friends" behind. But also, as usual, I always enjoy your stories as I learn so much from them.
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I love the care he takes of Ernie, Emmy and family.
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At long last, another chapter! And, as always, very well done! May the next one appear after not so long an interval. Thanks, Dodger! Tony
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Was the decision to abandon the cruise come about too abruptly? The fire might simply have been minor. However, we'll see what new adventure awaits.
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Now you have me confused about the seasons: If it is Autumn up here, the winter would follow. Summer still follows spring in either hemisphere.
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I believe the comments to this, point cover all that I was thinking. I just hope the coming chapters have less time between postings. Great job, Dodger! Tony
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Another wonderful volume comes to an enviable end. If only I could enjoy just one of their travels...! Now that this volume has ended, it's on to complete the next 24 volumes! You make waiting for 2019 hopeful: meanwhile, we must live with the excrement produced by the Swamp folk. Tony
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A beautiful, charming, joyful chapter filled with authentic CJ and Owen. You've done quite well with this one!!! Tony
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Thank you for posting this chapter. I was in serious need of a Makarovia injection! Tony
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This is the second story I've read involving the Kokoda Trail hike. This was done with much greater detail - so much so that I am tired too! Great job! Tony
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A great way to start today and the month of June. That's, Carlos. Tony
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In true Quokka fashion, I am looking forward to a compelling, yet educational, journey. Intrigue is already starting. Keep the chapters coming! Tony
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So well done! As I don't live far from any of these places in Orlando, I could picture the visit well. Glad to see you were also a part of the story. What a great way to kick off my Friday! Tony
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Owen summed up the best approach to mourning: be thankful for having been able to have that person in your life for the time they were. Death is a reality, as CJ points out, even though we always want it for others. Thanks Carlos...well done chapter. Tony
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And now where does this go? I do hope there's a follow-up.
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You definitely have extraordinary story telling skills. Another Silverton? Going to be interesting. Tony
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Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 97 A Memorable Night to Forget
Please don't keep us hanging a long time to see how this is resolved. Great chapter. Lots of smiles but also depth. Thanks. Tony
