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    Life's too short for not being spontaneous and impulsive! Small battle won... He, he. I suspect you didn't put up much of a fight. Cherish those moments!
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    I'm glad these are your favourites. They are the ones that are most me, so it's much more personal. The others are more observations from a safe disrance. This is my reality. Both of them. Thanks for your review!
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    Poetry prompt 3 - Lyrics Emotional… Rasping beard on my shoulder blade His strong arms encircling Warm breath feathers over my neck He’s my fortress of love Feet padding over wooden floor Tiny arms encircling Warm breath feathers over my neck I’m her tigress of love Reality… Warm, tangled sheets suffocating Sharp elbow in my face Both stampeding for the bathroom He showers forever… Token breakfast on the table Kids argue over where to sit Rushing all out
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    A little late maybe, but reading the last chapter I got the impression that using first names was a no-no? It almost seemed to me like an attempt to do away with the real person, so the church could create a new one only filled with the "appropriate" thoughts and ideas. I admit, I'm very suspicious of groups who feel the need to take over people's lives like that, so my interpretation of the guys correcting themselves almost apologetically is perhaps biased. It's "just" a title thing?
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    I like the way you're thinking!
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    I want to slap Nathan's father! Right in the face.
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    Prompt 439

    Puppilull commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Prompt 439

    The difficulties of long term relationships... When you realise just loving one another isn't enough and communication has ground to a halt. I hope they make it. Vegas, baby!
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    I finally had time to read chapter 9. I must say I really don't understand the sibs. I've tried to see things from their perspective, but I'm lost right now. There has to be more than some warped sense of doing the right thing or plain hatred/disgust for people to act like that. What happened to Hamish? What ruined him and turned him into this hateful person? Loneliness and jealousy could explain the box of cherries, but not going to the police.
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    And we seem to be reviewing at the same time too! I fear I might be too concise to really get to the true emotions, but it's much easier to follow the form. Otherwise, I think I would get performance anxiety... Thanks for reviewing!
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    Chapter 6 Passage

    Puppilull commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Passage

    Quite the tempest within you describe. Also a force of nature. I'm glad it ends with a promise of "spring". I like the use of "leaves" in both the first and the last tanka. Ties it all together.
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    1 Chirping bird mid chase Across deepening blue sky Captures the late fly 2 The child cries in pain Blood trickles on warm asphalt A naked knee scraped
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    Chapter 10

    Puppilull commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 10

    Oh, I hope nothing has happened to Dillon! It must be harder for him to defend himself, now that he's sick. (Or...? )
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    You put words to my feelings so very accurately and beautifully!
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    You're too kind! I don't know if I truly got it, but if you liked it I'm glad! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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    Chapter 20

    Puppilull commented on Rambling Robin's story chapter in Chapter 20

    Hmm... Interesting healing method, to say the least! It makes me feel sad when Mick constantly feels like he has no control over what is done to him and his body. I hope his new abilities can help him gain a feeling of calling the shots for once. The cat claw thing... I used to do that with my cat! It made me laugh thinking of Mick doing it to Takashi. I love the Princess Bride! "I'm not left handed either!"
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    One Last Promise

    Puppilull commented on LieLocks's story chapter in One Last Promise

    There I go again and feel sorry for Malachy... Despite his not so nice selfishness, I can't seem to dislike him. Interesting though how the tables have been turned between him and Nick. I hope Sasha gets his memory back soon.
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    He's cute! I spent two hours on a plane today and I'm beat. You don't have to apologise after crossing a quarter of the world!
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    Don't take this the wrong way, but when you use words like dilemmata I sort of want to kiss you... Love the list! (No surprise there...)
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    Wow! That's great news! Congratulations!
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    More like virgin blood to keep her young... When I read Wind I got the feeling he was younger than 17. More like 10-12. But it's hard to tell. I did think MaryAnn wad Colt's mother for a while in the beginning, so the feeling of them being connected isn't just in your mind.
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    Oh, Colt related to MaryAnn! But wouldn't her son remain the age he was at his death? He wasn't that old?
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    Exactly!
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    That recruiting idea has occurred to me too. That candle Colt has could come from that encounter. Were they trying to influence him to join the queens and the lord, light his candle in their circle? I don't think Colt understood at the time or he's repressed his memory due to other more psinful events that day... I think not even the queens know the full prophecy or the extent to Colt's powers. It's only MaryAnn who is intent on bringong him in alive as far as we know. She was going to try and convince the others, without giving away too much information. To me it seems like whoever he sides with will have the upper hand in the battle and the resulting outcome. I don't think we know all about Colt's heritage yet. As I rambled in my review, I think the battle ahead is for more than just Colt and the pack. It's for the world.
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    One step closer to this cake and I'll cut you! Back off!
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    That uncertainty actually captures my idea perfectly! It really is addictive, this poetry writing. Thanks for your review!
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