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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    I think that the team are going to be thinking of a better way to deal with the flauros. Both M and J (and Audra) are too smart and to determined to let these things keep them on the defensive. It was time for Jenson to get past some of his misgivings and take what he's wanted for so long. I'm pleased you agree. Thank you for your review and your support. I appreciate it.
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    I think the flauros were always treated like creatures and not given credit for intelligence. I don't think anyone on Alect-3 will make that mistake again. Thank you for your review and your support, Val. I appreciate it
  3. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    It might get ugly at some point, especially since the Alectarans seem unwilling to look too deeply into why the flauros are on the planet. More will come on that in the coming chapters. Thank you for your review and your support, Def. I appreciate it
  4. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    Thank you I'm happy things have started to be clarified with the characters. M and J have both realized how much they have to lose. Merrick was always open to the possibility, but now he was also willing to give J that little extra push he needed. Thank you for another great review, and all of your support, Gary I appreciate everything you've done for me.
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    The flauros are very smart... smarter than they realized. I doubt they'll be underestimated again. I think the M and J needed each other after the stress of the day. I hope that J will continue to keep himself open to Merrick. And 'My, Merrick' I loved that too Thank you for your review and your support, Drew. I appreciate it
  6. LitLover

    Story

    It was not a conventional relationship, and it would be hard to move past where they are right now, but throughout the story I got the impression that BOTH of these men loved each other, even if neither one was ready to admit it. I think they will find a way.
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 1

    This made me wish that schools and students actually did this. It encourages thoughtful of others and seeing the suffering or challenges that those around you face. In the end, more was won than just first place in the contest. At least two couples might have found each other. Thank you for this.
  8. LitLover

    Story

    Seamus and Ailen: a love that transcends cultures and beliefs. It was a wonderful story. I would like to think they lived the rest of their lives happily with each other, although I'm sure there was some flack from the monks.
  9. LitLover

    Story

    Hmm I think Morgan may want to look for another job now. haha. It was an unconventional way to meet, but I think the anonymity helped Wil to open up more than he might have with someone he saw face to face. I am really happy they found each other.
  10. LitLover

    Story

    This was lovely. They were so awkward, shy, sweet and real. I was happy when they finally let down their barriers and admitted their feelings for each other. I would love to hear more about them.
  11. LitLover

    Chapter 1

    So beautiful and so sad. I was teary from the beginning and crying by the time I read the last sentence. I can't imagine having to go on after the loss of the love of your life. The treasure hunt made me smile and helped him to remember all that they shared. It may not be strictly a Christmas story, but it was beautiful nonetheless.
  12. LitLover

    Story

    I loved this Such a wonderful story of hope and bringing comfort to others who are less fortunate that you. it is the true Christmas spirit. Thank you for this
  13. LitLover

    Story

    I was a little confused, I must admit, but I like the idea of the wonder of children being a source of magic. Thank you for this
  14. LitLover

    Story

    Although I wish Jack had been honest with Gene from the beginning, I get why he wasn't. In the end it was good for Gene to go and and live for a little while and grow into himself. A lovely Christmas story. Thank you
  15. LitLover

    Story

    Not the ending I was expecting at all. Thank you for sharing this.
  16. LitLover

    Story

    A sweet story, and a lovely ending. Thank you
  17. LitLover

    Story

    Hmm a kiss from a goat. lol I am curious to know who Tanner is though. Is he real? Will he seek out Jude again? Thank you for this, secret Santa
  18. LitLover

    Chapter 1

    It would have been tough. Sayed seemed like a great guy, but I don't know if I could have forgiven the deception, but I guess things aren't always so simple and people take chances in order to find love.
  19. LitLover

    Chapter 1

    Mom wished for her son to find someone, and he did. Thankfully, in the end, the fact that he was happy is what mattered to her. A lovely Christmas story. Thank you
  20. LitLover

    Story

    Haha I agree with Graeme I think they got her out of the way so they could get everything done in time. lol
  21. LitLover

    Story

    I'm glad Thomas finally actually talked to Eric and found out he had misjudged him. Sometimes our own pre-conceived prejudices keep us from seeing things clearly. Thank you for a sweet story.
  22. LitLover

    Story

    This was beautiful. I was really hoping that Wally had lied and Elliott wasn't dead. I am so happy that wish came true for me and for Darren. I can't imagine what Darren's life was like, thinking the love of his life died in such a horrible way, then getting kicked out and having to live on the streets. Although Darren didn't have the same struggles in those two years, I think his life was about as much of an empty shell. Thank you for giving both men, and me, a happy ending
  23. LitLover

    Story

    Very sweet! The best Christmas gifts are seeing the people you love. Thank you for this
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 16

    Chapter 16 Merrick stared out into the forest, watching for any unusual movement in the trees. It had been a week since Harwick had been killed. Jenson heard from his friend, who had told him the markings were territorial ones… warnings that this area belonged to the flauros. Investigation of the trees around the ship showed similar ones. The flauros had set off the perimeter alarms around the base and the ship a few times in the first three days, but there had been no sign of them since
  25. LitLover

    Story

    “What do you mean you volunteered our apartment for the building’s secret Santa party?” I stood in the doorway of my roommate/best friend’s bedroom holding a bowl full of batter… the cake I was making, forgotten. She turned and gave me a mischievous grin. “6C is organizing it this year. It’s a great way for me to get to know him, Kade.” Ana had been trying to find a way to catch the attention of the hot brunette in 6C, ever since he’d moved into the building 5 months ago. She managed to b
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