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Great story, Gary. I'm on my tablet, so I'll be back later to do a proper review. Stay turned for Part II. See what I did there?
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Perfect, Drew, just perfect. Personally, I'm partial to "Our love is untouchable"
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What @Lyssa said... Nicely done, Caz
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So encouraging and so full of surety that life will be better.
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You mean it was there is the first draft? Oh jeez... I really need to grow some more, so stuff will be less likely to fly over my head. Ah well....
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Great chapter Carlos. In the interest of full disclosure, I must admit to giving myself a head slap for missing a very important reference in this chapter. CJ remarks that he does not "smoke those" (cigarettes) when asked what would be the purpose of the pocket to be sewn into all of his suit/sport coat jackets. As I pondered whether or not he smoked cigars - I was leaning towards he has not/does not/did not/at least not yet - it finally hit me that "those" was a reference to what he did smoke. We both know what that is, right? Oh boy, I can't believe that slipped by me... Must be my innocent and nature. As for how long it took for the light bulb to go on? I will never
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Sounded good, so I googled orange, yellow and purple carrots roasted in butter sauce, and this came up. Looks tasty... https://simplyfreshdinners.com/2015/03/roasted-tri-color-carrots.html
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You had me at "I wanna new drug...". Loved Huey Lewis and the News when I was young(er). Thanks for the memory, tim.
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Unforgivable is a really terrific story about two very likeable MC. If you haven't read it, I highly recommend that you check it out. @Timothy M. So very true. come visit Litlover's story topic where we're about - I mean having a spirited discussion about Choices.
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Your man is beautiful and good, but then so are you. Two peas in a pod as the saying goes.
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Just Over a Week Later...
Reader1810 commented on JayT's blog entry in Randomnicity (aka Jay's thoughts)
Intersting, I took it as Jay outlasting them all. And Jay, I get your reaction completely. It was the same for me when my grandma died. Doesn't mean we loved them any less than the Game Hounds Safaris.ones who showed their emotions for all to see. -
Happy Birthday Cole!!
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You're welcome!!
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Reading this story again because I've been listening to the Chumbawamba song that is the anthem of Lars and Aitor. Carlos, you know the one I'm talking about. As for this story? It never gets old.
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Happy Birthday Myr!!
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I'm not sure what to say about this one, but I know what to do..... I know it's hot, but those were cool hugs, I promise.
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Your words always make me stop and ponder.
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Until lightning struck, and all was as it should be, because even star-crossed loves have to beat the odds. Right? Say yes, tim.
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Happy Birthday Graeme!!
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Too true, just this morning, she was inquiring about the availability of wine in tim's new drop-in-centre.
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You may have been sober, but I was drunk as a skunk when I beta read the chapter, that's why I missed it. Note to self: No more drinking on the job.
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She is.
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Hey tim This is what these words pull me to do... As always nicely - and powerfully - done.
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Featured Story: The Navigator
Reader1810 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Read it and loved it!- 21 comments
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