raven1
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Your poems painted beautiful images of summer and gently touched my heart. Thanks Albert.
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Hawaii is a beautiful place, and your poem made me feel the same feelings I had when I first went there. Great poem!
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This is a very excellent poem that reminded me of the weeks I spent there. Awesome!
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This is a reward that you most definitely have deserved. Your work and talent have produced many of my favourite stories on GA and other sites online. BRAVO!
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Another great chapter as the danger increases for them. The Great Pyramid is a great monument. A photo of the two lovers standing before it was a great souvenir. They are going to treasure that for the rest of their lives.
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I personally applied the duct tape to make sure his lips were sealed. The scarab seems a focal point for what has happened to them. Could it be cursed? How powerful are the people who are trying to get it from them? I agree that a hotel safe doesn't seem the best place to protect the scarab.
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Hey all! Hope all is well for you all. Just checking in for a quick minute. Take care.
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Hi Albert! I'm only here for a few minutes. I have another birthday to go to tonight, then another tomorrow. Not looking forward to the double hangovers. 🤪
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I finally show up and this is the first thing I read.
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Smooth sailing for a carefree start to a great romance is a great way to start a story. I love both Reg and Alex. I think the champagne bottle was a missed opportunity. They should have written a message in the bottle and seal it before throwing it overboard. It would have become a historical artifact instead of trash. 😆. Love your description of the romantic settings too!
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I love the romance of this story. I know readers will enjoy not only the romance, but everything else that will come with the story. Don't forget my advice about Tags and make sure to add Romance to this tale filled with love. Gary is right when he says your romantic side is exposed.
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Hi Albert! I got the last three and will work on them tomorrow!
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Just a quick update. The river level is much lower and the city cleanup is in full swing. Still the rainy season, but at least the rain has stopped for now.
