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Sure, Chris. Just as innocent and angelic as the stories you have been writing.
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Don't worry yet, @Mrsgnomie! The Korner Krew still has @kbois firmly in our sights until she finishes the next epilogue. After that, whoever publishes next, you, @kbois, or @astone2292, are fair game for the fickle folk in the Korner. Tell Kbois not to bother with the whetting stone. The Krew all keep their pitchforks sharpened and ready for action.
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It will be a much more fun place with Weinerdog in charge. I think it would be a very hot environment with cool vibes. Luci can do his bit as second in charge.
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Wow, Bucket! Stay safe. I hope they contain the fire easily. I suggest alternating hands when hitting the refresh button and tapping it, not hitting it. I don't want you to get wrist tendonitis after such extreme physical exertion.
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I agree that Beckett has lost his patience. I wouldn't blame him if he let his power take a few potshots at these tedious creatures. The way they use the word 'human' makes it sound as if it is a word for a non-magical being. I'm hoping they will have the answer/power to grant Beckett's request. I also wonder what their problem is with Dragons. I hope it won't put Val in danger.
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A letter elegantly written and beautifully poignant. A letter many of us wish we had written while Carlos was with us.
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An elegant and poignant letter that I am sure would have touched Carlos' heart. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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This may be a cold Christmas story, but inside the house, it is warm, toasty and full of love. It is a wonderful tale and a worthy tribute to Carlos.
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A great short story, James. It was endearing and realistic. I agree with your statements about those of us with ADHD. Any chemical treatment should be very short-term. I was fortunate to have a very great psychiatrist who helped me with a brief period of Adderall and a lot of training for two more. I now know that ADHD is a blessing in my life, not a curse. As for weed, it is often beneficial and much less dangerous than alcohol and tobacco. Carlos would enjoy this story very much and approve of its young characters.
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A great way to laugh yourself into the New Year. Carlos is probably laughing out loud and using a box of tissues to dry his tears...or whatever. 😉
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2024’s Ridiculous Resolutions
raven1 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in 2024’s Ridiculous Resolutions
I threw my resolutions out before midnight on the 31st, and now I regret it. I could have shared my idiotic resolutions here. I had some good laughs from this. Thanks, Lee! -
New Year's resolutions are fun, even if almost all of them are ever kept.
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A beautiful, poignant poem that touched my heart!
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Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing this.
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There is no better tribute to Carlos than these real-life memories of Defiance's friendship with Carlos. My deepest thanks, Defiance!
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Thank you, Defiance, for sharing your wonderful memories of Carlos with us. I cannot think of any better tribute than this.
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These are two vignettes filled with love and caring. They are well written and hold the promise of excellent stories yet to come from this author. This is a very fitting tribute to Carlos, who mentored many of the fine authors here in GA.
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These were two beautiful and well-written vignettes. I, too, hope you will write more to share with us on GA. This is a lovely tribute to Carlos.
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This is a very interesting and fun coffee chat with Carlos during one of his many travels. I loved reading the conversation with him.
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This sounded so much like Carlos. A coffee chat with him would be so interesting and fun. I especially like this line. I don't think Carlos ever took the easy route on the road or in his life. Thanks, Bill!
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Hey @Mancunian! I take the blame for this also. I should have realized the file you sent me was an older file. I worked on the new file when I got up this morning and sent the edited chapter back to you about 30 minutes ago. Don't rush. Take time to check it over. I know your readers appreciate your focus on the quality of your stories.
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Thanks, Dave. I appreciate you reading and commenting on it. I hope you have a great year ahead.
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How about starting with Reily's Lambda twin brother? No one knows about him since he was secretly sent to live with Nat in Rio as a baby. He also loves to dress up in high heels and sexy dresses. He's an LGBT+ character that can kick ass and looks good doing it.
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Donovan is a great support for these kids. I imagine that his efforts will help all the kids. Really? He's a shapeshifter and just needs to shift to a much larger shark. (Shadow Effect Chpt .10.) 🔽 It is a great epilogue for Tyler, Elijah, Austin and Aston. Also, Kage. Thanks for this story and the others in the series. The epilogues are a bonus but just know I'm going to miss this very much. I do hope you have something lined up soon to soothe the withdrawal anxiety, Kbois.
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In order to provide us with a larger vocabulary, Myr shows a great deal of persistence. See @drpaladin's comment above for further clarification!
