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  1. Hi Page! I wish you, Morgan and Max have a great weekend ahead! I always enjoy hearing your updates on family life.
  2. Exactly! Dayna would hate what is happening if she were alive, but she loved her kids and would want the best for them. I do believe that she would understand that Perry and Kyan raising her children is the best possible outcome. If she did not, then she wouldn't be the loving mother her family knows.
  3. I agree about the posting here. The guidelines have been updated, and if you have problems there are so many ways you can get help from people here. The first or second time may take help, but you won't have to wait forever to get it. I never had to wait more than 24 hours for help, and many times got immediate responses. By the third time, posting was very easy. Being new to posting poems, I did have to wait a few days while in mediation, but that requirement goes away for recognized authors who post a lot.
  4. raven1

    Chapter 14

    This was a very well-written chapter. The dialogue was carefully written to dance around a situation created by Miss Tsosie's beliefs. The conversation could appear the same in a discussion of sexuality, but that's not the case here. That's why I think the dialogue is so skillful and authentic. Of course, I also like the idea that we know Naiche is both a blood relative and now legally a son. I do agree that Dakota may need to have a talk with the other boys, but still feel that Wamblee is more than aware of what Dakota and Naiche both are.
  5. I might actually agree with this if Dayna was alive. Kyan and Dayna would have to interact with both Perry and the family. However, she's been dead for six years, and Perry has been there to raise her children and help Kyan for those six years. Danya and Kyan's foundation existed for three years, but Perry and Kyan's foundation as best friends has lasted for nine years. Kyan needs to stop living those three years over and over again.
  6. Dayna is haunting Kyan. Six years after her death she is still controlling him. I respect her less and less as I get to know her better. Dayna was the one with a problem and kept Perry and Kyan from communicating, but Kyan is now blaming Perry and the family. Kyan does need to have someone wake him up and bluntly tell him to stop living in the past. Kyan is wrong! Perry seems to think it is over and that is sad. Jessica should slap him and wake him up. One fight doesn't end a great relationship like Perry and Kyan have. They both need to move on. Very well written drama, and a courageous twist considering how vested most readers are in Perry and Kyan.
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    Chapter 6

    I don't doubt the explanation, but I also love pictures! Too bad GA has rules against them in the comments (but email works).
  8. Hi Everyone! Good Morning, Afternoon, Evening!
  9. Hi Dugh! Hope the doctors get back to you with something that will help. I appreciate the time you took to tell us more about what is happening with your health. I didn't know why you were having infusions, or what the treatment was that is causing you so many difficult side effects. I admit that I went down the rabbit hole to find out more. I was happy to know that the treatment side effects are temporary usually, and that the successful treatment means that you won't have to deal with TED in the future. Wishing you the best. BTW, I hate "professionals" like that nurse who don't know how to admit they don't know the solution and throw out idiotic suggestions that can adversely affect a person's health. She should have listened carefully and recorded what you said to report to the doctor, not diagnose and suggest treatment.
  10. raven1

    Chapter 6 Eager

    The way you write your descriptions makes me doubt that anyone would find them tedious. I always find them interesting. Even in modern-day stories you write the descriptions are interesting and add flavor to the setting and atmosphere of the story. You have a great talent for this. It also shows in the poetry you write.
  11. raven1

    Chapter 28 S1

    Mac is finding out the dangers he may face in a shifted form. I hope he does start to be more observant and cautious. The adventures and learning about animal behaviors in this chapter as well as the ones before it are fascinating. I look forward to future chapters that reveal more. I do think the incident with the archer is very important, since the next two animals, whitetail and mule deer, are both prey animals actively hunted on the reservation. I hope there was no one around as the four guys returned to the hohrahn. Seeing two naked young men enter the hohrahn followed by two naked older men could lead to interesting gossip.
  12. Hi All! It's bedtime for me. Have a great day!
  13. Hudson and Otis together are an interesting contrast. Their sexual encounter was very hot. I wonder why Otis likes the small, glass menagerie he collects. They could represent the value of small things or the insignificance of small things. They could also represent the strength of being since small glass objects resist being broken. Hudson immediately understands the danger that Jasper faces and reacts quickly to protect the fragile kid whose life is in danger. Jackie is a puzzle. He seems naive about what is happening around him. Does he know how evil the company he works for truly is? I suspect with Jasper missing, Watkins may focus on Otis as a replacement for Jasper. I hope Hudson has the skills to keep Otis really safe.
  14. raven1

    Chapter 6

    One family secret down and how many more to come? I always thought the idea of vampires not being seen in mirrors was a bit of a stretch since you should be able to see their clothes and objects at least. So for now, I will defer making any opinions about Scott's status as something other than a human. I did find it interesting that Scott's family are naturalists, and also that Greg was able to quickly adjust to the idea. Chris referring to Scott as "Sir" however just reinforces my belief that Scott and his family are part of a ruling class that Chris and his family work for.
  15. raven1

    Chapter 20

    Blake and Seth feel like they and Craig are boyfriends is a nice thought. Reality may not live up to what they are feeling now. Blake is the lucky one so far in a safe and accepting home. Craig and Blake have much in common and I hope they will be able to help each other. Ty keeps checking to make sure Seth is OK. I wonder if his concern and friendship indicate that he wants something more than just a friendship with Seth. I am not hopeful for a reconciliation between Seth and his mom. She is too dysfunctional as a mother. She obviously has been the source of the chaos in Seth's life. She also created the monster, Stacy. I doubt she has the will, skill, or energy to fix Stacy enough to make it a home where Seth will feel safe, comfortable, and loved. She won't have anything left over to provide Seth with what he needs to heal. She is the villain who has poisoned both of her children's lives. It would take many more chapters to develop any redeeming value in her character. The same is true for Stacy, but as much as I hate Stacy, she is also a victim much like Craig. If Seth does decide to give his mom a chance, I hope it is with the understanding that Seth will remain with his aunt and uncle until Seth's mother fixes Stacy. Stacy really needs psychiatric help as well as discipline. I doubt whether 'Mom' can provide either of those. Whether or not they have 'blackmail' evidence, I still think Stacy is unhinged and will physically try to hurt Craig or Seth.
  16. The Hawaiian vacation with four no filters on their mouths kids and Perry and Kyan's lack of discretion had already led to this conversation in the last chapter. I had a great laugh that it was Ava who wrested control from her father by her guileless announcement. I do love all the kids and my favorite changes with each chapter. Ava won this one!
  17. Nice way to wake up. Kyan doesn't have any problem adjusting to his gay side sexuality. He seems to be very excited about exploring Perry's body and learning how to please Perry. The highs and lows for December are about 30 degrees Colder! That's more than just "much cooler"! Do you get a kickback from the Oregon Tourism Commission? Summers are awesome and I loved those months, but winter was what chased me away to the tropics. Kyan is oblivious to how Perry's family really feels. At least they will be a happy surprise for Kyan. I had a great belly laugh when Ava outed her father and uncle to the family. Of course, Jessica and Charlie will be in tears laughing at the beginning of the next chapter. Jed and Trudy will probably be smiling a lot. I wonder how long it will take Kyan and Perry to lift their jaws off the floor. Ava's comment stunned them.
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    Chapter 213

    I too feel that Pierre has abandonment issues. One thing that is not clear is who his father is. Was Christian his father, or a half-brother given the responsibility of raising Pierre? If Pierre is biologically related to either Christian or Arnaud, why does he only appear during the last visits Armand made? I do love the way Armand finds more and more ways to get healthy organic food without going to a supermarket. The money saved, supporting Ivan's farm, introducing new foods for everyone, and keeping it healthy is a win for everyone. I was not surprised that Armand got read the riot act by Elsie. It shows what a great mother she is! I suspect Armand might get some ribbing from others over the matter.
  19. raven1

    Chapter 6 Eager

    Thinking about Vincent and their relationship tells us a lot about what Jubal wants and needs in his life. Vincent taught him very well. We don't know as much about Lucas, but I think he too will provide the safety Jubal needs. Their early morning conversation was interesting as Lucas flirted with Jacob without shame or modesty. I suspect Jubal would find the confidence and openness of Lucas to be much like Vincent. Jubal is excited to be there to help Lucas. They both have similar goals of being good farmers. Lucas is inspired by Jubal's excitement to build and responds with excitement as they discuss the home and barn. It's good that Jubal has skills and attitudes that help Lucas overcome his own fears to build something together. As always your descriptions bring back memories for me. Whether a Craftsman house, a cabin, or a barn your words draw the images from my memory. I suspect that much of your knowledge comes from both experience and research. Love this chapter that brings Jubal and Lucas closer together.
  20. We are OK. No real excitement so far this week. We were going to Burg Republic for hamburgers on Tuesday, but they were closed. That is a problem in a tourist town like Chiang Mai. Places that cater to tourists close once a week depending on their slowest day. We did find an excellent Japanese restaurant nearby. It was very authentic. We were the only non-Japanese customers. Fortunately, our server was Thai so it was easy to order. The TV was broadcasting a Japanese football game from a Japanese network. The big event of the week is tomorrow when our friend Bo will try to join us for dinner and drinks. He's had many health issues for the last three years and rarely gets out anymore. I like the idea of your family getting to visit your friend at the ranch. Hope you all have a great time.
  21. That sucks big time! Keep fighting the system!
  22. Good thinking Gary. Getting a good doctor is important. I did the same thing with my doctor.
  23. Hi Gary! I had cataract surgery in both eyes last August/September. The worst I had of it was a lot of inconvenience for the four weeks it took to do one eye, then the next, and await the bandages to come off. The next four weeks were inconvenient because of follow-up care. There was no real pain involved. However, the results were amazing! The brownout of colors caused by cataracts was gone, forever. I could see things clearly I hadn't seen well since I was young. I only regretted that I hadn't done it sooner. Do take time to talk in-depth with the doctor about how you want your eyes to be corrected. I chose both eyes to have the same correction, so I still have depth perception. I also chose to keep them both farsighted and now use reading glasses. Good luck with the operation! I think you will enjoy the results.
  24. Hi Albert! Have a great Tuesday.
  25. raven1

    Chapter 212

    Silas as a new addition seems to be in a bad state of health. I want to know how he got that way, and what help he will need to get better. Now he has a chance and Armand is probably going to think of what to do to help Silas. The kids are doing well, but the women from the New York Child Services seem focused on minute details of the home. At least Dr. Hamlin is focused on the children and seems to be pleased at what he sees. I think the women will try to make trouble, but don't see them winning this battle.
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