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Whewwww...thank you very much for giving us an insanely, intense, uber hot chapter and leaving us having to explain why we're walking around with our mouths hanging open UNTIL NEXT FRIDAY!!! Ember is going to have some serious "balls issues" if he doesn't stop straddling that fence and just go for it...Brady will catch you dude!!! Well, this one was 'HOTtastic', guys...thanks a bunch
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This is a really well done story, however, I'm finding it quite difficult to get past chapter 6...I'm being re-routed each time to a "real jock" blank page. Am I doing something wrong, or is there just a slight glitch in the system surrounding this particular story?? I'm rather hooked on this story now and would be a bit heartbroken if I couldn't finish my catch-up...:(
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Wow...Pix is a thief...he just stole about a dozen or so hearts, just this morning!! Ember will not be able to hold onto old anger, he's too loving and too smart for that...he's going to have to let go and let flow...right into Brady's arms!! Geez..you give TGIF a whole new meaning for us..others wait for paychecks, we wait for "chap-checks"(chapter updates)!! Very nice one!!
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...can it be a "lil lady"that begs??? We wear knee pads pretty well too...
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This was one of those "hella good" stories, Gary!! Loved how you brought it full circle, back to where they should have been before the "hiccup", with a rich ending...everyone won the lotto!! Ahmmm...hate to ask, but can we kinda, sorta, maybe...have an epilogue to the epilogue??? Just asking...well, more like begging!
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Great chapter!!! Feeling Paddy's pain over here and duplicating Ian's tears!! 😭 Adam and Ian will make sure that Pat knows he's loved and wanted now...and the rest of the "family" will be there to!! Hoping no one gets hurt, except the meth dealers, when this raid starts(hint, hint!!) Awesome chapter, glad to see this posted...as always!!
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Awww, my friend, the best always surrounds themselves with the "bestest"!! I've missed you guys more, for sure...but I'm trying to tone down for a lil bit.. ( I know, impossible for me) but I'm TRYING! Kinda like Brady, we keep trying and hope people will see the good in us...
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There's an old Tina Turner song that applies to you and your stories..."You're simply the BEST. ..better than all the rest..." 🎼
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Recently, I've refrained from writing my silly, over-zealous reviews...sometimes i just get a little too excited I suppose. So, can I just say that like all your other stories, this was fabulously written...simply FABULOUS! Thanks for this!!
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Sooooooooooooo well done!! Thank you...can't wait for the last chapter...should be just as stunning!!!
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AWESOME!! Every time I think another family might be trying to take over "best family on the site"...you go and flip the light on and remind us of what family reigns supreme!! Will/Liam's homemade family of love...and now hopefully Payne and "Detective" Wade will add to this fabulous conglomerate of a family! Certainly, Paddy's new puppy scene was a 'smiling heart' scene stealer, while the kitchen scene of "forget about breakfast" had my mocha coloring trying to blush Another excellent chapter, Joh...
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Going to love this one just as much as your others...the duo of Drake and "Dean" will soon be a loving force not to be challenged!! Preston might want to watch his attitude around Jimmy! Looking forward to appreciating Mondays again...for sure!
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Thoroughly worth the way...as always!!!
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Very nice story...really looking forward to more!!! The police and the blue wall of silence and sometimes dishonesty...might just be at work here...just saying..
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I enjoy this story...so very much!!! You give credence to their feelings that make them come to life in today's reality, you make them sexy, sensual, and sensible!! I for one enjoy them having an opinion and being able to have and exciting life!! Your story in just that...YOURS...originated by you, told by you in your own unique way...and we LOVE it!! One of my favorite families on the site...thank you for sharing!!!
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Love this exciting chapter!! Excellent how Yoshi handled Lady Tinya, she's lucky he left her alive...I still don't trust her and her disrespectful ways! Midori and Yoshi together will be a formidable force for all who seek to oppose their love...Almira will have to fall in line or risk losing her son and heir!!! Great writing, soooo looking forward to the next chapter!!!
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Very nice....now to see what type of car Paddy gets, because you know grandparents get to do whatever their hearts desire...he'll get exactly what they told them not to get... after all he is their first grand!! So Paddy has family...brother, cousin, ???, I just hope he's not being abused, cause Will might have to exercise his "kick-ass" rights...again!!! Can't wait for more, more, more!!
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Oh wow....Cat 5 TB(tissue box), definitely!!! Mason-Jared...10 on the scale of Love!! Evi, Ink, and Bella singing and dancing to "We Are Family"!!!! Last but not least..Kasey in da house...batting a thousand on CUTENESS!!!
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You write beautifully...very thoughtful, most provocative in the sense that you provoke us into serious thought about how we can be better communicators in our relationships...because let's face it, communication in any 'ships, be it partnerships, friendships, or "loveships", is the KEY to everything remaining stable, honest and loving!
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Awesome...my favorite quote "Potty dinta wanna come in"...if this lil guy ever hooks up with Benny...the adults all can consider themselves 'one and DONE'..it's a wrap.."who rule the world...KIDS"!!
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Oh geezzzzzzzzzzz...going to have to agree wholeheartedly with BlindAmbition about the 'mugshots'...Maybe we should start contributing to the "KaNaEvi" bail fund, for the times we know that Kaleb, Nan, and Levi will be within shouting distances of each other!! I'm depending on 'Canny' to keep those 3 in check..or barefoot!
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What a fabulous warm-fuzzy chapter!!! Thanks for this...it lifts the spirit from all the evil and mayhem going on nowdays.. Though there may be a few bumps to come, these kids have hit the Lotto of Love, with this wonderful family!
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So glad you're feeling better! We missed you and want you healthy and happy...always!! Just to let you know...between "Canny" and Kasey, we're always either laughing out loud or grinning like idiots... Can't wait to find out whats going on with the school kids...can we spell A D O P T I O N!!! Update: 11 outta 10 !!
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The holidays were wonderful, thank you.. Hope yours was also, and that the New Year is treating you like you deserve...FABULOUSSSSSSSS!!
