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My take...Alex had ulterior motives...from the start!! MONEY and ESCAPE from oppressive parents...Matty and his money were her 'out' ticket!! Beware of the friendship snake wrapped in tequila and weed!! Just sayin'...if you can rape a 'best friend'...what else are you capable of?? Great story...awesome chapter!
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So happy you and yours are safe and hoping you remain that way and he's feeling better! Thank you for the wonderful update...air hugs from all of us!! 🤗
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Beautiful!! If only the 'string' were as strong today as the one Kyle has, we'd all be in a better, stronger society, country, universe... Stay safe and continue to work your magic!
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Awww Gary... this was brilliantly written and beautifully constructed!! I'd say this was the perfect beginning to a perfect ending...LOVE scores a knockout over chaotic, petty, misunderstandings...welcome home Chase!!🥰 Should have gotten a hint from Rex when he entered the door...he got his welcome home kisses over, first!!🤭Great job, Gary, please stay safe...air hugs n kisses!!
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Yesssssss...pandemic relief is here!!! Heading over to the camp, right now...😷 Stay safe everyone!!!
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Let's just say...it's definitely "Wayne's World"!! Amazing short story that hit all the right spots and showcased his excellent talents...and also the bonus of sharing a beautiful poem!!! Both were brilliantly done, thanks to you both!💯
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Definitely on the right track...and what a great right track, that we'll gladly follow you on!! This was intriguing and hot! 🔥
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Chapter 4 An early morning surprise
Onim commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 4 An early morning surprise
Fabulous!!! Stuck in the house...loving these two!!! Be safe, and thank you for the chapters! -
Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
Onim commented on ShadowDweller's story chapter in Chapter 2 Time moves on and Adrien gets braver
First time??...you're doing excellent!!! The chemistry between these two and the experience of Theo is what made the sexual adventure so nice...now we'll have to delve into personalities and outside influences...no doubt, you'll handle just as fabulous!! Thanks for the story and please be safe!!! -
Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Onim commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Assault With A Kitchen Weapon
Thank you, Laura...for your wonderful stories and for a bit of relief for a few minutes, during such stressful times! Hope you and yours remain safe, as we navigate this crisis...and always!!! Much love to everyone...stay diligent and safe...we'll get through this, and be STRONGER!! 😷 -
🥂🥳 CONGRATS...MUCH DESERVED!!!!
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This was very nicely done...Molly said it all!!! Sorry I could only give it a 5...the other stars didn't come up 😪, but know that I'd have given it a 10!!
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I'm soooooo late...🤭 First off...HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! Now, thank you for this one, Gary...I for one am in complete sympathy with Chase...it's hard to gauge how others deal with grief and one should never let the words "time to move on" or "get over it" be uttered in a grieving person's presence, it simple is NOT our call!! And most certainly, we will make horrible decisions when we are grieving and trying to figure out which way is up! So I would ask Hank to please hang in there with all the patience of a saint...if he can, knowing what a difficult road that could be. Anyyyyway...I'm loving this one and can't wait to see the wonderful 'fusion, or the great 'explosion' to come with these two...either way, I KNOW you will NOT disappoint!! Hugs for you...
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Niceeeeeeeee chapter!! HAPPY NEW YEAR, everyone!! 💞
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Very beautiful...thank you for the Christmas gift! 🥰
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Gary, what can I say that has not been said...you continue to amaze and astound us with the beauty and love depicted in your characters! Often times challenging us to never give in to feelings of hatred and futility that we may entertain at times...thank you for reminding us that we can be better to each other!! Hugs, kisses...and always love for ya, my friend!
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I think Jett will be getting the "IF YOU HURT MY SON..." friendly convo, with a feel free to fill in the blanks, talk!!! Great chapter...and I'm with team '3 chapters a day' would be just fabulous..
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So happy to see the two of you back in the mix!!!!!🥰 Seeing this story posted is like waking up from a long 'drought', staring into the cool waters of the Yukon! Fabulous start, as usual!!🤗 So sorry that you are still having health issues and hope things will smooth out and get much better! You're in our thoughts.
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This was sooooooo beautifully done, Gary!!! Nothing unusual about your work, though! A lot of us have been "Don's", but how he handled it was masterful and correct, as opposed to my "thought provoking" way...'bash it in the head and keep it moving'!! LOL...just kidding😜 Anyway..LOVED this shorty, and looking forward to the long one you're finishing! Hugs n luv!
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Thank you for taking the time out of your "real" life, to entertain us with this wonderful story...you relieved us of some of the daily chaos that surrounds us these days!! This one goes on the "Read It Again" list...again, much thanks and looking forward to the "shifting" one, next!!
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Brilliant!!! This was too well written....you scared the __it out of me!!! 😨
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Beautiful chapter! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY...hoping you have many more years to go!!
