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Just love it!!! Just when I was about to start shaking with "withdrawal" pains...my guys are back!!!! It's so nice to understand a bit more about Stephen...awesome chapter (nothing new, just your usual greatness at work)!! Thanks a bunch!!!!!
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Love it!!! Koji is intriguing and Andre is falling, falling, falling... Thanks for the very nice update!
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One of my favorites stories...this was truly a "LOVE" story!!! Thank you...you write beautifully!!
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Time Changes Everything~Epilogue
Onim commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Time Changes Everything~Epilogue
Excellent epilogue!!! Covered all our favorite bases...love, fun, family time, sorrow (with lots of tears), and updates on all the family dynamics...BASES LOADED, HOME RUN!! ...Ahmmm...I'll take Jared/Mason for $200 please!! -
Love the chapter...reminds me of "Perfect"!!
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My heart breaks for Midori...knowing that he would give his life to save Yoshi and the empire, with no thanks from the Empress!! Excellent chapter!! Cant' wait for more!!
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Nice chapter...why is James not in the wedding??? Just asking... Is the judge going to move Nan away to Cali??? Anyway...next stop..WEDDING!!!
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So happy to see Hyun and Rafa starting to get it together!! Love the chapter...glad for the update!!
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I'll be the one to thank James for keeping poor Jared safe and alive...and always looking out for the boys!! Great chapter, death for the lunatics, Nan gets her man, an extra brother for Kahn to con, one big NICE family!!!
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Love how these tragic circumstances are solidifying all of them as a family!! In the end...Rude-Penny will be the broken ones, while their sons will persevere just get stronger!
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A W E S O M E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You rocked this chapter, for sure...just frikin' awesome!! Adam knows how to plan a surprise!Thanks!!
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Blu's Rise and Hatman's Demise
Onim commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Blu's Rise and Hatman's Demise
Excellent chapter, now...Nan, myself and Kahn, can handle Rude-Penny from here...judge, jury and the Executioner...we've got it covered!! Loved this riveting chapter! -
Verrrrrrrry nicely done...excellent flow, great humor, beautiful show of love and loyalty, and awesome icing on the cake, with the "Knee To The Nuts" Award going to....(drum roll)...NAN!!!!! (The crowd roars with a standing ovation...Yayyyyyyyyy!!!) Too bad Kahn was left at home...those 'Nads would have been down the hatch!!
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Love this chapter...and absolutely love it when all the characters from each story come together, for whatever reason!! The family you choose...is one you never want to lose!! Great chapter, Joh...thanks, as always!!
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This was the perfect Christmas present, thank you, Joh...it lifted me for a few!! Hoping that you, Hawkster, and families have a fabulous holiday, be safe and happy!! Can't wait until Liam meets Riley.. I thought John and Bill were looking for a new home..uummm..Adam and Ian can buy their house....just trying to keep Riley within shouting distance of all her new family!
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Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story...and it's coming together quite nicely, I have to agree with Puppilull on that one, for sure!! Andre is Koji's reprieve from the voices and the madness...and hopefully his portal to love!!
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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Onim commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Well done!! HAPPY HOLIDAYS....to everyone...including my favorite pup, Kahn!! Can't wait for more, and really hoping that Trump...oops I meant Rudy will get everything he deserves, life, 40 plus, no parole...you know...the usual suspects! -
Wheww...for a minute I thought Anna was going to sneak back and steal Riley, so, I can take my AK-47 and go home, she made me miss my chance! Fabulous chapter, but I can't wait until they get back home and LIAM finds out HE'S got another baby It's about to get real..the family tug of war and the endless pouting,all done with the beautiful family love!!
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Aha!!! Bart to da big house, 70 yrs of butt torture, on a daily basis!!! Well done chapter...only thing missing was us being there to see the look on ole Bart's face!!
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Sweeeeeeeeeet!! That stupid, Rude p**ck has left a money trail to jail..yessssssssss!! I can't wait to see him gifted with the new shiny bracelets he just "purchased" for himself with Kyle's money!! Awwwwww...this was such a "fist pumping" chapter...the wonderful sledding, the "obedient" Kahn's doctor visit and snow angels, the decorating on a dime, the revelation and anticipation of Rude-Penny not being left with a 'penny', AND the fabulous DAD hug!! Homerun..out the park!!
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Nice chapter, though I tend to agree with glennish, the thought of that van hitting Chipmonster would've been so 'relaxing' (Nope..not a violent bone in my body)!! In any case, I was happy that Lily asked Kahn about the bacon first, and he assured her that it went along with his usual eggs, toast and coffee! Yep!! And 1 hotel room equipped with a respirator, for Christmas, for Kaleb and Davis, please...geezzzzz!!Okkk...ready for #3...it's onnnnnnnn now Rude-Penny!! Ya did good!!!
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Hate it when life gets in the way of my reading!!!!!As usual, another chapter well done...a teasing chapter into a new school year and a kind of lead in to new intrigues...BRING IT ON!!! Paddy with a new relative??? Hmmm
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Love the chapter...but I'm a sucker for firefighter/rescue and police romance!! I adore how you allow your characters to display all the emotions people tend to want to keep hidden or "macho" contained...they get to cry and laugh uncontrollably, they get to admit mistakes, they get to show anger and a bit of rage, but most of all, they get to show affection, real touchy/feely affection with love!! Ok..I'm off my soap box now (going to the corner, CONTINUE)
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Nice ending...holding on to hurt and anger only punishes you...especially if the love is still there. Let go and let flow and work on letting things mature to best instead of better. Anywayyy...good story, short and sweet!!
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Really, really liking this one!! Especially with the parents preparing for their new swanky prison suites!!
