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April CSR Discussion Day: The Big Empty by James Savik
ReaderPaul commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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No, no, no. If the FBI (Federal Bureau of Investigation) and/or CIA (Central Intelligence Agency) get involved, things will get tangled up in politics instead of quick start to justice. @chris191070 and @hankster -- there is a discontinuity in the following paragraph near the start of this chapter. Are some lines to the story missing? “Whether he owns a summer home or not,” Tom said, “he was going to take Joy somewhere nearby. I’ve got to get this information to Ken.” (Missing lines here?) then turned to the chief. Suddenly the viewpoint switches from Tom to Ken -- what happened? Fascinating chapter.
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I predict there is much more to learn of this situation.
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Great story. Very reasonable and believable.
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Adding more stories to my reading list all the time. Thanks, @Myr.
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Seasoning of the Seasons
ReaderPaul commented on Valkyrie's story chapter in Seasoning of the Seasons
Love them, except for chives and pumpkin spice. Sounds delicious!. Not only that, but wonderful poetry. -
Chapter 1: The Seasons of My Life
ReaderPaul commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Seasons of My Life
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@R. Eric -- It occurs to me that direct exposure to radiation could affect the circuitry of Rob and Apollo, possibly at times interfering with the neural networks. Without the shielding that a spacecraft or a planet's atmosphere provides, the circuitry of the Artificial Intelligences could be harmed. Good chapter.
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Actually, it is NOT "Marshall Law." Marshall Law was a television series. It is "Martial Law." Not to be confused with "Marital Laws" which regulate marriages.
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My cousin told me of his great-grandmother, during World War I, was sometimes accused of being German. His great-grandmother had come from Switzerland as a teen girl, and would reply in her Swiss-German accent, "Ve're NOT German! Ve're SVISS!"
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@centexhairysub -- you are absolutely right. @JamesSavik has a really good story in "In the Shadow of the Dragon." It has more than just the military aspect to the story -- it has the kids working together; it has the adults planning ahead to keep the kids safe; it has the distress of the ones trying to solve the problem; it has the complicated family relationship of one of the less featured character, and a lot more. One of my favorite characters is Jacobs -- and I don't want to say more about him at this time so I don't give a spoiler of part of the story for those who have not yet read it. @Myr, these Deep Dives are a wonderful service for us, the readers. Thank you again.
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Some amazing authors in that list.
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Excellent, James.
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March Signature Excerpt: Puzzles Pieces by Mrsgnomie
ReaderPaul commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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This is a serious story, and well worth reading. A teen guy discovers that an effigy of him has been hung in the front yard. As more and more information becomes available, he also discovers courage he did not know he had. At the same time he realizes facts about life and courage that he needs to know. He also discovers the need to form real friendships, instead of mere acquaintances. An excellent story.
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Mark Twain (pen name of Samuel Langhorne Clemens) said something similar about monarchy -- "We hold these truths to be self-evident -- that all monarchs are usurpers and descendants of usurpers; for the reason that no throne was ever set up in this world by the will, freely exercised, of the only body possessing the legitimate right to set it up -- the numerical mass of the nation." Twain said this in -- Letter to Sylvester Baxter of Boston Herald, 1889. The Doors/Doorways series are excellent tales, @Geron Kees. I am reading "Never a Door Lost" again for the firth or sixth time.
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Love this, @JamesSavik. Reminds me of a few people I've met.
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I have been reading this on and off all day, Craig, but on my phone. It takes so much longer on my phone to comment than on my home computer. I have over the years been friends with a number of persons who work at various charitable agencies. There are some who try to go from place to place "skimming" help, and others who truly need help and use it to improve themselves and others. The first of these are the "Carls" of the world or sometimes, the female equivalents. This is a touching story. I am reminded of a boy who grew up in my community whose mother killed his father, then herself. Fortunately, relatives of the father and friends immediately stepped in to help and the boy is now a man of respected care in the area. His mother had been in and out of psychiatric help over the years, and he seems to have his late father's caring attitude instead of his mother's mental problems. But he was quite scarred by the experiences. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories. Thank you for giving me the suggested reading order for them.
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I liked this chapter as well. John/Christian hit the proverbial jackpot with Phillip and Emily.
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I have read several stories by Ronyx, and enjoyed them. Have not (yet) read this one, though.
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Although a bit worrisome at first, the chapter ended on a very happy note. And I love seeing the comments by @Summerabbacat, @Marty, and @raven1 on this chapter. They always have comments well worth reading.
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This is just one more example of how comprehensive and caring sexual education is needed. Thankfully, Phillip did not wimp out, but gave John "the talk." When my dad told me about sex, he took me out to the barn and (in a very embarrassed fashion) gave me a clinically accurate but sketchy description of sex, making it sound less interesting than putting a dried corn cob in the corn sheller and turning the hand crank to get the dried corn kernels off of the cob. He did not touch on nocturnal emissions, why guys get erections, emotions involved, or anything but the bare details of intercourse and an unknowing warning about masturbation. Unlike John, I was a "late bloomer" sexually. My penis and testicles grew well, but I did not have my first ejaculation until about age 14½ one day while masturbating in the barn. As you pointed out by example in this chapter, kids tend to sometimes worry more than is necessary because they don't have complete information and/or understanding of what is happening around them. Good chapter.
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Great first chapter. I like what has come thus far.
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calumniate - Word of the Day - Thu Mar 7, 2024
ReaderPaul commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
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Excellent, @JamesSavik. Please keep up these great series of shorts.
