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  1. ReaderPaul
    Very true, @chris191070. Thanks, @Myr for these deep dives.
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    Often this is true. But I have met some persons who have paranoia even when they have all the facts on something, and there may be no reason for the paranoia.
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    Lots of good stories in this update. Thanks, @wildone.
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    I had to look up presbyopia. I haven't had that exact one, but know persons who have experienced that one.
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    I have a book of the collected Poor Richard's Almanack, by Benjamin Franklin. The above reminds me of one of the sayings: "Three may keep a secret, if two of them are dead."
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    This reminds me of a book my parents had from the 1930s or 1940s on strange stories and conspiracy theories. A group of people, according to one story, has secretly ruled the world for over three thousand years. The telling about this story was very skeptical, ending with a sentence summarizing the theory that three million, three hundred thirty-three thousand, three hundred thirty-three people have secretly ruled the world for over 3,000 years as follows: "If 3,333,333 people can keep a secret for over three thousand years, they deserve to succeed!"
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    Chapter 1

    ReaderPaul commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Way to go, Chris! Good imagination here!
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    I am tending to agree, @drpaladin. Others seem to have a natural understanding of strategy.
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    Good stuff, Troy. Enjoying the story.
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    Amazing stories and author in these lists. Thanks, @Myr and other authors.
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    HD Chapter 1

    ReaderPaul commented on quokka's story chapter in HD Chapter 1

    Good to see a new story from you, @quokka. If you need to post less often, it is okay. But very happy to see this from you.
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    @chris191070 is correct. I have seen that done by some authors here, and that sometimes has caused me to read BOTH versions of a story. Usually, the second version is an improvement, and the contrasts and variations can be fascinating. That would be my suggestion, as well.
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    Good story, Troy. And we don't get to read the next chapter until May 19?
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    Comedy Deep Dive 10

    ReaderPaul commented on Myr's blog entry in Gay Authors News

    One of the best stories is by @wildone --- under Surreal Comedy. But lots of other good ones, as well.
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    The pictures of beavers above remind me of, when I was a teen, I was staying overnight with a friend and we saw beavers building a dam on the creek of his parents' property. Two nights later, it rained five inches in two hours, and the beaver dam was washed away.
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    I agree with @Sherye Story Reader in her assessment of the story. An excellent read.
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    Would shoulder pads be considered a type of epaulet?
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    You have a good sense of humor, so you would be indignantly jocular.
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    So, @Lee Wilson -- is that you singing or something generated by suno dot com? I really liked Live Your Own Life 1, but I like Live Your Own Life 2 slightly better, though both are really good.
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    Oh, and Lee. In the previous chapter, you have Fabian walking into the Little M Studio. Then: "Aubrey Wright, the auburn-haired receptionist,..." Did you do the alliteration of Aubrey and auburn on purpose, a la Mark Twain, or by accident?
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    You could always later amend it to say -- "The End, For Now." As Fabian gains experience with S&S, his writing abilities on songs will continue to improve. A sequel has many possible angles. Examples include: Alex runs into Javier Gomez (see previous chapter) and Fabian helps Alex with the reconnection or fireworks, as the case might be. Further example: Fabian and his replacement from the former band, Eric Lehman, deepen their friendship. Further possibility: We learn more about Reid and Ryan. Further possibility: The Slacker Crew starts to cut albums. Fabian and Reid give some guidance. Good story, @Lee Wilson.
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    Why or why not?
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    Indecision Today

    ReaderPaul commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Indecision Today

    You have the ability to say so much with such economy of words. I rarely can do that. I admire greatly those who are able to do so.
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    As Mr. Spock from the original Star Trek series would say, "Fascinating." Do you have a sequel series of chapters planned for this story yet? I can't read them, but I notice you have four more chapters loaded and ready to go. Perhaps you might consider a story of Fabian's former band searching for a replacement guitarist? This might be your best story yet.
  25. ReaderPaul
    So are you implying Russell also played the harMonica?
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