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After all the disappointment medically, Ryan took a hit today. The set backs are brutal, but the doctor was brilliant in letting him try his legs on regardless of the news. What was really, really heartwarming and made the whole chapter really great, was Ryan's take away after everything. Clayton will make it better. Love will do that.. Awesome Rex..

Kel's father was planning on ruining Jenson slowly over the years? That is some grudge, or something larger is at stake. I can't wait for the investigation to reveal why. Love the suspenseful build up in anticipation of what's coming. I just hope Merrick is careful as he is so close to what's going on.

Very nice chapter tim... Philip is holding on to the guilt of something I feel he really would have had no control over. The way you described Sean, by all means he was a charmer. Reading his poem again, it seemed to speak to a sort of dominance and power that Philip could not possibly be accountable for. That Sean is back in the house is troubling.. What kind of influence does he have? The emotion flowing through these guys is palpable. Their interaction with each other is fascinating as it comes across the page, and makes it real..

Even after eight years, you have to know when it's not working and walk away. It's sad but sometimes it's necessary. Engagement ring at the bottom of the falls.. Big clue to run.. Nice job on the prompt tim..

Not gonna lie, I held my breath for a full minute with Candy. I'm glad my worst fears weren't realised. I hope seeing the baby won't change her mind again. For now, I'm happy to see her making a turnaround. Kendall probably had a lot to do with that, but Lionel sees something in her too. Sometimes, when someone sees you for who you are, and wants you anyway, it makes all the difference. I wish them the best, but I'm not going to relax until that baby is home with Michael, Kendall and all the family.. That Josh can count on his friendship with Nate as he moves forward will be rewarding for all of them. Moving to a school where tolerance and student's safety is a priority is an excellent move. Too often these situations go awry.. Nate and Bodie continue to delight me. An excellent chapter Gary.. We are getting closer to the big events..

Always when things are going well, the demons resurface to cast doubt an fear and raise our insecurities. I felt Andy's nerves through this chapter, but it was great to feel and see all the wonderful support he's receiving. Zander too. I am so anxious and excited for the big event.. I'm so ready for Andy to be happy happy... Nicely done Parker..

So a little while ago, back in NYC, I dared to hope that CJ and Chipper would hook up. They seemed to have a natural pull to each other when they met. But no, you veered away from that, and gave me a few flings and ended with Owen. You let me joke about Owen and CJ taking off in Defiant while Chipper gazes longingly after them. All the while you knew this was coming! Humph! Sneaky.. CJ and Chipper! If that doesn't muddy the waters I don't know what will. Chipper is smooth though. Sure the intentions for nothing to change are honorable, their talk was admirable. I know there are guys who can do the no strings bit just fine, but these guys are in each other's lives. That's not going to be easy to navigate.. I'm going to wait and see on that one. I'm happy that things are heading in a better direction for Bradley and Patrick. Is JP worried by the new guy in the mom's life. That's what came to mind when he zoned out. I like that Patrick is seeking CJ out, asking questions. By the time he's ready to come out he'll be well prepared.. I'm not giving that thought up, until Patrick is married with kids.. Another very well done chapter my friend! A lot of good things going on, but it does make you wonder what's coming...

Awesome news! Congratulations Cynus, so well deserved..

Ohhh, the ish is about to get real. Jake is a cop, inside the club where his bothers work, undercover as a Dom! Yeah, that's not gonna be exciting at all.. Way to up the ante Caz!

This is a heart wrenching poem, Parker. You told it all very well, but I might have been holding my breath for a while. Very clear images too.. Good job.

Well, that explains some things, but it complicates others. There are a series of miscommunication and misunderstanding between Viktor and Vladi. That places Viktor in a tough spot should he find out the reason why his brother left. How could he not put it together though. Does he fight his feelings to please his father or align with his brother. Then what of Nobu.. Mr. Morrison is a pig... The Russians were paid to take care of Yakuza? By whom? Does Dante know? If we go along with the art of the con (Neil Caffrey style..lol), then it would make sense for Dante to let that tip drop, so when the attack really happens, the Yakuza will be ready, and will be in the Italian's debt. Not a bad way to reel in an ally. But then, there's the timing of Katsumi to consider, and the possibility of another gang.. Hmm.. Feel free to reel me in anytime.. Awesome chapter Cynus.. The web keeps spinning..

Oh, that was really soo wrong.. But entertaining? But I felt bad too. The Garzas at least understand that they did wrong. I think Efrain would have preferred the chance to come out on his own terms, and to rant and defend his relationship with Cory. The fact that the family all figured out he was gay, and long enough to place bets, before he said anything, and thinking the worst would happen, probably made it worse. It seems the boys together are more telling than they think though. It's actually good to see how much they get each other. And, if this ends up as something they laugh about later, Preston can take credit.. When you turn to chapters like this, waiting doesn't seem half bad..

Wonderful chapter Parker.. I thought the marriage would be off the table now, in light of the new developments, but I'm actually glad the boys are moving forward. I think somehow, as unorthodox as it may be, they need to do this on a deeper level than the adults can understand. They'll have a lot of support and guidance, even as its punctuated with understandable worry.. Just as long as they're sure.... Couldn't resist.. Also, glad Ms Marjorie is finally in the loop..

I am relieved Matty was so cool to Chuck.. I am however, wholly saddened by the way David is choosing to handle this. I wish he didn't feel like this was something he had to go through alone. You know how I feel about David, so I'm going to hold on to the boy because I'm so scared this is all going sideways. His logic be damned, because clearly now more than ever, he's going to need all the people he's pushed away. Maybe one of them will be able to get help.. How? I have no idea. Poor Twoey... Wonder if he'll throw himself into the other boys to stop the hurt.. A great chapter SkinnyD, but if this were paper you wouldn't be able to read a word. That's just how upsetting it was..

Great review Tim.. This is truly a fantastic story, and one of the few I've read twice... Everyone should give it a read or add it to their list!

What a very nice chapter to come home to.. That at talk went a lot better than I expected. I thought Jared would have more of a reaction to the news about Bailey, but if suspected all along I guess he's not surprised. That makes him a bit of a saint for sticking around and not questioning Carly at all. It's cool to see the effect Craig is having on Jared and vice versa. My favorite line. "I'm asking you to stay forever, Craig......" That was great. No way you're not hooked after that line. But I agree there is a need to take it slow, and get to know each other again without the ghost of Harlan and the mania of Carly. The feelings are already there, they just need to savour it. Besides, with the house they'll get to spend lots of quality time. Great job Gary...

Perfect, Tim. I love the easy way those two come together. Now if Patrick convinced his whispering devil to take a back seat, we will be great. Michael must have some magic of his own.. Wonderful chapter...

So now I really want to know about the blow out.. Maybe if Jason had let Shane finish his sentence.. Who knows what he was about to ask or say.. Leaving that way probably set Jason back.. Really gripping backstory that leaves so many questions.. I am looking forward to more soon..

I think perhaps Jason should mention he thinks he's being watched. Sure he might think he going nuts but with everything he's learning ad two plus two not quite adding up to four, it may be worth it. I'm not buying the home invasion bit. It's too neatly wrapped up. There is so much more to the story.. Can't wait. I'm glad Paul is a friendly. Jason is going to need it and Shane, them.. Grat chapter..

Yes, Clayton. Rex is not insane, listen to him. Also, yes, you and Ryan are on the same page about your feelings. You should tell each other soon.. You are strong enough to tell him your deepest secret. You can trust him as much as he trusts you.. How's that for a pep talk. I have a feeling Wednesday is going to be great.. Too bad I have to wait until Thursday to find out for sure.. Nice chapter Robert..

Ohh, that slow burn.. Reading Ryan POV was great. I loved that I was right there with him when he realised how he felt. I might have been smiling the whole time. The building tension is a good thing, because then it'll be so worth the wait.. Clayton and Ryan are so natural and good together. Reminds me of a couple of other guys, maybe you know them.. Joe, Rex..lol Great chapter, I'm moving on...

Glad the brothers made up. David is worried about him and Tommy, did he forget his sister. She's been MIA for a bit.. I wonder what Tommy thought of the dolls, but it seems he trusts David enough to not ask questions just yet. I hope David tells someone soon, his doctor, his aunt, gramps... As for the woman who lives in his house I hope the flames rise up to meet her. Awesome upgrade to AP Social Studies.. I liked Mr Field from the moment he asked if there was a time warp. I knew it would be fine. Maybe David has another ally. Whenever David notices specifics about a guy I feel like his light bulb should come on. Does he have a thing for eyes? SS should be even more interesting.. Chuck right on the money, and David is clueless. Sigh. David actually gave Chuck great advice. I hope Matty is easy on Chuck. He feels to me like the kid who desperately wants to fit in, he's smarter than his peers, and now he's with the cool kids. Even as he may want to do stuff, I hope he hears David. I can't blame Twoey for wanting some kind of relief and Erik is willing. Judging from his reaction to his mom and David's comments, I think Twoey is feeling a bit of guilt and a touch of anger. I can only imagine their situation will be more complicated when he is mobile.. Another wonderful chapter SkinnyD...

There is a completeness that happens when you're making love with the right person. A feeling so profound. You were able to lay that here with clarity Gary. This is beautiful. The mood fervent and fiery, and your words impassioned. I'll need a glass of wine now.. ... Loved it Gary.

Okay, So wow! Questions answered but now Kel's father? How long has he been planning this.. I imagine that Jenson realises Merrick is in a lot of danger. How to deal with it all, especially as Jenson is not in a place to help. Maybe he knows things that can help.. Ohh.. A deepening plot, you have my attention Lit.. Excellent chapter... Well done.

Zander's fears we're very understandable, and Andy's reassurances were perfect. I'm glad that Eustace got to put his worry and fear to bed, and to see for himself that Andy was doing better than ok. I don't doubt that there will be plenty more visits.. This chapter was everything I could have hoped for. It hit all the right notes.. Thank you Parker..