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Our family is going through this now with our grandmother. We live for her good days, which seem to stretch farther apart. You captured Glen's anxiety and uncertainty so very well, and was just as effective with Adam, who was patient and caring. You felt they had a great love. Yeah, I was moved to tears. Absolutely beautifully told.. Thank you.

That was lovely. I echo what everyone said. To have that moment between J and M where Jenson is the one to say "I love you" and show as much as he could, how much he meant it, was just perfect. Merrick's dad too, just gave Jenson all that he needed if he had any doubt left. Now we get to the not so nice stuff.. Wonderfully written Lit. If I don't say it enough, I'm so thoroughly enjoying this.

That is an elaborate scheme Sam has planned. Awesome mindfuck if it works, but could it be disastrous if it doesn't? As for Sam, I want to know what hurts him so bad. I'm glad he had Lisa. I hate to think of Sam suffering silently. But, he trusted David so that should have some bearing. Maybe David wants to return the favor? I am willing to bet that Lisa has the scoop about Alan and Mike? Amiright? Now David is two for two with his boy induced shower fantasies. Chuck, like Matty would be ecstatic if they were in the know. Seems nothing is wrong with his 'gaydar' he knows how to pick 'em. Now that Chuck wants to work on his scrawny body, will he hit Matty up for wrestling lessons? I think Matty is the only one who won't mind the Danny look alike. Great chapter always SkinnyD!

That, was fun...The concept was original at least to me, and I thought it was very well done and humorous. Omg Theliel and Sablo. Ayil did them a great favor. Loved this, Thank you..

Aww, that was so very nice.. The start of something beautiful I think! Thank you...

What the frack! Who is Bruce's family, that with a complaint to his aunt, she can act so riotously. She is insane and clearly us abusing her authority as an employee of the state. And now that the judge has effectively put her in check, I just know she will be looking for another way in.. Oh, people make me sick and more so because there are Ms. Chandlers out there, wreaking havoc on lives. Poor Andy, just as some measure of normalcy takes hold, he's back to fearing if he will be taken away again. Plus he loses the safety of Zander at night. At least we know the Stevenson's will not let this go easily and hopefully Andy can see through to that.. Another great chapter Parker.. I can't wait for calmer times to prevail..

Loved how you handled CJ's first time.. I wonder if CJ really will be unaffected as he claims, especially when Owen comes stateside for school. I get CJ is not looking to be tied down, he's 15 after all, but it was his first time and I'm not convinced it's just a vacation fling... I'm curious about where Owen's head is.. This should play out very interestingly. Brett being able to joke about CJ losing his cherry is awesome. The marine is relaxing a tad.. New Year's Eve celebration was perfect. The dads and CJ moment made it so worth not going to that stuffy party.. As always you were a great tour guide. Loved the sites, loved the humor, loved the chapter.. Thanks Carlos!

I love that these characters show up in such different scenarios. This was great Cynus. Alexander is a real great guy and I liked that he chose to act with compassion with with Benny and Kyle.. These shorts are wonderful!

It's kind of awesome when you know what you want and what you're working toward. There's none of that second guessing BS. After a certain age it's more tiresome and I'm so happy that Clay and Ryan are past that. They fit so easy. Sure everything won't be peachy but I'm hoping they won't consciously let their insecurities get the better of them. Now we, I mean they can get to the good stuff! What the hay is up with the Bens? That's the big question my mind.. Great chapter Robert!

Am I wrong in thinking that Viktor and Vlad may be hiding the same secret.. Viktor's brutal denial seemed to hurt Vlad in some way, and it seems like Vlad has added reason for not wanting Vicktor to disappoint their father. There really is more than what meets the eye. There is reason to be cautious and protective of his brother when it comes to Nobu, but the way it ended made me sad for Viktor. I hope Nobu will not let this go. He will be playing right into Dante's hands if he does, I think.. Another great chapter Cynus!!

David trying to rationalize how not gay he is. Trying to catch his own tail he is.. That's funny stuff. Chuck, poor Chuck, don't know whether he's coming or going, but he likes it! Mike brought back up to the meet up. Smart kid. I'm glad that all worked out. I'll say again how good it is that David has Ginny. As for the other mom. She could not be a willing participant in running her son over or grabbing him off the street could she. Tell me that's not what is happening! Awesome chapter SkinnyD, minus the van escaped, it was lighthearted and relaxed for the boys..

I was worried about the mime being creepy too, but he was sweet and it was funny. That was a very creative way to meet your date for the first time. Peter is brave. Her brother Erik had me cracking up to. Clueless about the date he set up to ramble about a meeting in a month.. I knew these were going to be fun. Well done Cynus..

Whoa! Triplets!!! Like Carlos said, we could have used a warning! Oh Caz, do I need to call Kitt or Tim for a drool diverter!! Silas and Toby are hot headed aren't they. I sense this is just the beginning. I can't wait for more... So exciting.

I will join all the enthusiasm and encourage everyone to check it out! It is a fantastic read and you won't regret it!!

This chapter raised so many more questions and introduced more characters to add to the intrigue.. I'm even more curious about what Shane got himself into. What happened to Nicholas? Oh boy... I hope Mr. P gives Jason the benefit of the doubt.. I think that detective was a bit chatty with the the info he shared with Jason. He's fishing I think.. I'm kind of ready for the next chapter.. Really good this one..

I need 'likes', but it was a great chapter Parker.. There was was bound to be one jackass at school, and he's got fools who think he's cool and will do his dirty work.. But Kudos to Andy and Zander for standing up to him. Andy would never have done that before.. Bruce is going to regret pissing Terry off.. We're hitting the inevitable rough patches too. That CPS worker will probably find that she's bitten off more than she could chew with this family. Andy has people to fight for him now, how amazing is that.. Also again yay, for how he handled her questions. It's no surprise that the urge to run is always there, but it says so much that he chooses not to.. Looking forward to what's next!

So much is happening.. I'm tempted to leave it at, 'what Jess said'! Lol.. But besides everything that Jess did say, the thing that stuck out the most to me, was Batman and Robin! I literally screamed out Whaaat! I'm going to have to watch Tommy that little bugger. Of course they could be just friends...ha! And poor Lanni.. But the dance was fun, and Chuck is moving up into the group now... It was a great chapter SkinnyD! Congrats on getting us halfway there, and I tip my glass to 61 more chapters.. I hope you have the college years outlined.. xo

Loved it Cynus.. Sweet with the promise of more.. I think Val is right, we are bound to want to get to know more about these characters.. It's already fun. I'm looking forward to more..

Oh. My. You really know how to pack a punch Gary! Deep breath.. I am going to consider for a minute, that Carly very much believes that she was treated second to her twin for what ever reason. Think of how some one calls you a name and it hurts you, and all of a sudden you're thinking everyone sees you that way. It's not always true, but this would mean that she carried those feelings around through to adulthood. When you're a kid, these feelings can take root and grow to be unreasonable if not addressed or noticed. For years quietly or not, she's fostering this resentment toward her brother and mother too on some level, probably is very insecure and is fighting for her place in the family. Im going to assume she hasn't sought help or talked to anyone about it. So naturally, when her husband falls for her brother, it's her brothers fault. She loses her shit cause she always loses to him. She's angry and bitter and lashing out at Craig where it hurts most. Harlan! Something had to happen to make her this way. She probably already knew that marriage to Jared was a bad idea, but I'm guessing jealousy, and the need to compete with her brother's success made her ignore the signs. In her mind, maybe a good husband and family would finally prove she was worthy. Mom's reaction lends some truth to Carly's feelings. Great that she is supportive of her son, but clearly she's also dismissive of how this affects Carly. I'm sorry I don't care how much of a bitch my sister is, if my mom tells me calmly, to follow my heart and be with her ex, that's a problem.. There is more going on, I think there must be.. It's a delicate situation, you can't help who you fall in love with, and I think if we get to the core of what is driving Carly to this extreme, then she could have a conversation with her brother, and things could work out for all parties. I really feel for Jared who has been suffering silently. So all that said (I was winded), I love that I'm this engaged in the story. I love the emotion and the turmoil, and I can't wait to see what comes next.. Awesome Gary!

I enjoyed this poem when I first read it, and I enjoyed just as much now.. Terrific Tim!

You're going to ruin it for me if you pair CJ with anyone but Owen.. It's special, they are developing so perfectly. Owen will be his first, how the hell are you gonna top that.. And about CJ's first time.... I'm sure you won't be surprised to know I googled naked surfer guy. Only because I like to authenticate what I read... Another really well done chapter Carlos.. I'm enjoying Oz with the guys. It's relaxed and laid back as vacation should be. Makes me wonder what's happening in DC.

i think of this when I hear about people I went to school with have passed. It hits a little close and now, even as we are marking time for a couple family members, I am reminded to keep busy living. But one day in the very, very distant future I kind of hope I know.. And with that in mind, I'll live so that I can be ready for whatever comes. So very well put Tim..

There was just no way that Merrick wouldn't lead that investigation, and poor J may be worried, but he knows he would do the same. The Alectarians are hiding something for sure. Merrick seems to have chosen a great team so I can't wait for the shake down.. Even as everything is going mad around them, I love the quiet of J and M's intimate moments. You just feel their connection.

Wonderful chapter.. Our supporting cast lends themselves quite seamlessly to Clayton and Ryan's story and I like it.. Glad that bit with Ben worked out favorably. He seems a decent guy so I wonder what he did to deserve Benoit LaUghh... Ryan and Clay look to be on the same wavelength and obviously the need some things worked out. But, Mr Rex as they were about to talk you went and left us wondering..

SkinnyD I'm so late. Pls forgive the repetition. First off, I'm so proud of David for reigning in his anger just in time. All Chuck wanted was David's attention, and boy did he get it. Thankfully it turned out well, but I fear Chuck has a serious case of hero worship.. Maybe more? So, in the fickle world of teens, we don't know yet if anything happened between Twoey and Erik, but Sam kissed David! It was sweet that Sam let David believe he initiated the kiss. He knows David so well and now David has something else to mull over. As for Sam, he is brilliant and careful and cunning. I'm still chuckling at the password and I can't wait for the rest.. He's such an amazing friend.. Finally, for that blink and you miss it, shout out to CG.. I miss his reviews!