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I felt no, feel so badly for Travis. Having to carry that shame of what he's doing even if he can justify it, then having to tell Ben. I'm glad he did so it's out there. Ben decided that he was okay in that moment with the knowledge, and that sex scene...hubba hubba... That definitely changed the game again. There was a closeness, Travis taking his time, yeah that was good. Excellent writing Mac, and another great chapter.. Thank you.

Well then. Look at Ben being all brave, and stepping up for Travis. I like. But, Jack? I could almost hear the hitch when he recognized Ben. (He did right?) still, I'm glad that's out of the way for now.. Another great chapter.. Moving on..

HB, this is superb my friend. I liked it very much..

Ok, so there might have been tears.. Arthur's story is a sad one. The dream/memory fragments and how Sybil holding his hand makes it better, is heartbreaking. He remembers her ponytail, so young and so many lost years. But he is indeed feisty and I can't wait to see what else he can reveal. Then he and Sybill together can shed more light on a host of unanswered questions. Also, (I know you won't answer) but should I assume that Arthur and Sybil have not fully mated which is why she thought he was dead? But, she's a seer so she may know something is up.. And, if Arthur is determined to go to Morningstar, then Vega gets another push to follow.. Win! Awesome chapter Gary..

Ahh....because, of course mom knows.. She just acts like she's not paying attention, but I think too the boys have been a tad bit obvious if you are paying attention.. Luke was so on to her though. I wonder if he thinks that Grace knowing, is a short step to his own mother finding out.. Although I maintain that Cindy knows which is why she acts the crazy way she does.. Anyway, this was another wonderful chapter. I've said it before, but it bears repeating how real these growing feelings between Jackson and Luke are.. Luke is almost pulling back because maybe he's realising that it's really happening with Jackson and he'll the consequences could be well, Cindy. And Jackson while he's not unaffected, it's like he's determined to see it through. The relationship matters to him. Much like swimming, once he realises he cares he gives it his all. The back and forth tension and uncertainty makes me root for them so much. Thank you for another great chapter Krista..

Wait! Thank goodness it was a dream and Daven is safe at least for now. But OMG Kian! What..how will he get out of this.. Im trusting that he will, but I anticipate you taking us on a wild ride before that.. Great chapter..

I loved this Mac. The connection of the two men is tangible and the sex felt deeply meaningful. Not knowing any more than you told really worked here. Their meeting felt complete and satisfying, so that I don't really care about the spaces and what comes next. Really good.. Thank you..

Oh, oh! Great chapter.. That twist was one I didn't see coming.. I am thrilled for Ms Sybil but I can't even imagine her reaction. And Arthur, poor soul. What a relief. Also, what he must know.. Kellar is a force to be reckoned with. He is gaining abilities so quickly. There better be another healer somewhere. It's going to take a hell of a lot out of him to fix do many broken people. Awesome Gary.. Loved it..

Ah nooo.. I caught up here!!!! I need more.. Im glad everyone is safe. I won't say okay because I suspect that will still take some doing.. Great going Caz...

I can't even be mad at Toby fully, because it saved Daniel.. Tracking his brothers like that though, without their consent or knowledge - not good..

I have to take a breath... I'm actually glad I'm behind and can keep moving on because OMG, I'm scared for Daniel.

tim... My heart just broke a little... I can't imagine how you must be feeling.. Just promise not to stop living... You are one of the most determined people I know...don't give up.. I love you, and you know I'm here..

I hope Daven and Kian does not have to end up like Taewon and Kian. I imagine for Taewon he has come to accept it but that's a terrible and terrifying exsistence I would think. Plus Kian needs to relax some but is opening up a bit to Daven. Maybe they can work to take down the dreaded grandfather and things will crumble from there.. I can only hope that Kian is lurking somewhere to ambush that gunman.. Fingers crossed..

Admittedly, I was only thinking of Ritchie getting to be with CJ in DC. I didn't think of the potential blowback, and now I'm kind of sad for the kids. This will be hard for them. CJ has to not lose himself while taking care of his brother. He lost too, as much as he won't want to admit it. The dads had the right idea keeping things as close to normal as possible. The great thing is that both boys have and will continue to have a great support system. The dads know what to look for if CJ starts to slip. I'm sure having Owen close will help too.

Oh my! Taewon love for Kian runs deep. It's one of those things that only they would understand. I was curious as to what that meant for Lina, but realised that it would not affect them at all. There is an equal amount of dread and excitement as I wait to see what comes next.. Great chapter..

Daven's calm is remarkable. I guess he has more or less accepted the situation with Kian even as everyone is threatening to kill him..

Nice.. I hope we become more progressive when it comes to maternal/paternal leave. Less stress on the parents, more productive at work.. We all know that Joel would naturally make a good dad.. I have the feeling though, that it's Lucas who would lose his soul to a clutched finger or toothless smile. Owl blankets...always a great choice..

Hmm... You say you're ok, but.....

Poor Ryan is warring with himself. It's great that he's opening up. Hopefully, he will be inclined to finish his studies as a result. Erik has a good solution I think. Let's see what happens.. Good chapter HB..

Where the stay with Marc and Lee awoke something in Wally, I think staying with Javier and Oscar was pivotal. He's wanting of what they have yes, but so much more aware and in touch with himself. I think too, that now Cookie has managed to get him to utilize his major, he will feel useful. Instead of constantly asking what he can do to help, he will actually be contributing. That has got to add to his self worth. Two things to to note. He finally, finally apologized to Marc. Even if by post card. That's huge. Also, he said to Ellie when she called him Wally, "that's what they call me." Maybe subconsciously he's ready to be who he really is. (My nieces call me Ellie, so I'm inclined to believe she's another friend who will work more magic with Wally. No presh tho.. )

But Liam, you want that spark admit it! I agree with Marty that Liam should give himself a break.. No problem with getting to know Nathan sparks or not. He might not rid himself completely of thoughts of Alek, but he'll be moving on in someway. Putting himself first, which is important..

Me three... Very nice.. I liked this..

What a ride! So glad that Shane and Jason got their happy ending. Thanks for a wonderful story Mitchelll. I'm a little sad to see it end though..

Woohoo! Well Done Caz... Congratulations!

Well, Alek admitted his fault, agreed to take a step back, and promised to make changes. He has Liam to gain or lose if he sticks to the plan, so there's that.. How will Liam feel once Alek really steps back though. At any rate it will give him the chance for some perspective. I think Nathan should be friend zoned, but not just because I'm rooting for Alek.. Nice chapter Lit..