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I wonder what it was/is about Cory's dad that makes his mom stay.. Only because the guy seems rooted at his core... Poor Cory.. I think that little revelation hit him worse. Even with his support in place that's going to rattle around in his head.. How to deal... It was a great chapter Dayne.. Loved how the brothers and friends played out, and all the little things we learnt.. Uncle Johnny..that's all..
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Happy New Year!! So, Ozzie got a Harley? Like that was not going to happen.. It's nice to see CJ's 'not my boyfriend' whom he is dating , continue to fit in smoothly with his friends... Dragon is who he is, but I'm glad to see he has a slightly different, more aware approach to his flings.. CJ and Robbie Mook? Nice... Awesome me start as always Carlos.. I'm ready for more... Vroooomm.... Friday?
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Who would have thought sheep research would be for a vampire story?! I enjoyed this very much. I liked how you developed William and Tristan. William by the way was a very patient and caring Master, waiting for Tris to come to him.. I especially loved the fresh take on Tristan becoming a vampire. It felt like I could go on reading forever, except that it's a shorter piece you say... Nevertheless I'm very much looking forward to what's coming.. Well done again, tim.
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I hope Wally takes to heart the lesson in this chapter. Life is damn hard, yet here are people who work hard to make something of themselves. It's not handed to them nor do they resort to using people to make a buck. And for the most part they are happy. Maybe he's not so far removed that he can see himself in those people. There is a lot this kid has to relearn. He doesn't even know how to be a good person much less a friend. Fingers crossed that the crew can teach him a few things... if he's receptive. Feels good to finally catch up.. It's been so good Parker..
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I don't know that I fully trust TP/Wally, but so far he's thinking all the right things and there's intent...and he feels dirty about the past. Maybe the apologies will come later when he realises all that he gained from this experience hopefully. That Dr. B was kind to him when she didn't really have to be, was a good thing. Another person from his perspective, in his corner so to speak. There's something with Javier? Maybe? Good or bad for Wally remains to be seen.
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Does he look like a Wally? Hmm.. He didn't correct Cookie though and he went with it. Is this him attempting to distance himself from the real person? I wonder if there will be enough discipline in work and chores that will keep him motivated. Joshua could be a another person with a good influence on TP or he could turn out to be a reminder of his life past. I'm interested in his struggle and choices.
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In like Marc here. Whether he's doing it because of Lee, this has strengthened him and allowed him to take back his life. Saying he doesn't hate TP anymore allows him to write his own story and that's huge for healing and moving on. TP at sea.. Hmm.
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Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 Many Happy Returns
You can't tell a mom, especially one like Elinor not to worry. Not even if you could part the sea. She's basically sending her boys out into the unknown and they came thisclose to being done last time so yeah, she's going to worry. The guys are great though. I love that Tobyn and Kellar have this easy natural way about them now. The way the discuss things, make plans.. It's nice to see. The mind link is awesome. I'm glad they got this time to umm...unwind. If the earth mother isn't done with them, I imagine they will be a force to be reckoned with.. I expect that Kellar will be powerful, but I can't wait to see how the other joinings in the pack strengthen the couples and the pack. Always so good Gary.. -
As I was reading the description of the room my brain went 'I bet there's a peephole'. I'm glad Ben considered that too. Lol.. Against all odds, and clearly in opposition to what I'm thinking, I sort of want them to work out. I think they might be standing in their own way. Granted Ben's fear regarding his career is a very real thing. His sister and best friend are awkward. It's not an enviable place to be in. Then there's Katy.... Whatever comes next, this was a nice time they both had. Good job Mac.
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Travis is a bit of an enigma. He tells us just enough about him but still much we don't know. Same thing with the situation with Eric. What the heck happened that he still reacts so strongly to it. Ben obviously can't ignore the pull, it's something they both want. But in the cold light of day, he's bound to wonder about all the things that don't add up and then us it worth it.. I also know this could simply be a holiday fling that acts at the catalyst for Ben coming into his own. I also don't think that Curtis gave Travis the scar. I think maybe how he got the scar might be the reason. So much speculation, don't mind me.. I'll be patient while you let it unfold..
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Happy birthday tim! Hope your day is as incredible as you are...
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2016 Special Anthology: Rewind * Now Live *
Defiance19 commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Vacation reads!! Thank you authors... Congrats Gary! -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY PATRICK. HOPE ITS A GREAT ONE.
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I can't believe that ME's are totally detached, although there must be some distance in order to do an effective job. I'm sure there are others who can pack it up and not think about it until the next day. I wonder about the ones who have that case or person stay with them. I think about the ways that job changes them.. Thank you for reading this, and for your kind words.
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I promised and here I am... 'fragments of a forgotten dream.' Or so he wishes. I don't think it will be that easy. I knew Katy's good behavior was too good to be true. Although I think her threat to out Ben gained traction from his rejection. I feel for Ben, seeing how he feels this badly about himself. No doubt he will let Katy's words about Travis reinforce those feelings no matter what little truth lives in them. Im looking forward to what's coming.. Great chapter Mac..
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Cell Division and Oxidization
Defiance19 commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Cell Division and Oxidization
Who would have thought that cell division and oxidation would lend themselves to poetry so ideally. This is great Parker. Pretty cool.. -
Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Warren came to save the day! That so didn't do the way I was thinking. I didn't expect smooth, but I certainly didn't expect this close call with Reznick having the upper hand. Way too intense. But he's dead, the copper secret is safe for now. Poor Warren though that adrenalin did him in and Adelin will probably shake him before she kisses him. Also how awesome is the mind connect effect of the joining... Can't wait to see it utilized. Oh the ways.. Great chapter Gary.. Thank you. -
:wizard: HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAYNE!!!! Hope you you have a fabulous day!
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Not A Prompt- The Eternal Flame
Defiance19 commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in Not A Prompt- The Eternal Flame
No matter what, his flame will endure.. Wonderful tribute Drew... -
This was a nice and fitting ending. There's hope for a better future after loss and everything they went through. I'm glad Terry allowed Dave that time to grieve, but did not let him lose sight of the fact that it was possible to love again after his loss. Also love how Terry honored Jae with the honey. So wonderful a story tim. Excellent job..
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Jae's end was sad. I can't imagine that he felt so rejected, that seeing Dave shot and hurt didn't give him pause. Both their foolish decisions have them in this place... Dave however, is going to carry that guilt with him. Then there's Terry. Glad Jim and Gareth are going back with him.. Things are looking brighter..
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Fantastic Gary... Their joining was everything I've come to expect from you and more. Absolutely beautiful... Now, I hear the echo of True Colors playing in my ear.... Thanks for that. Lol..
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Chapter 33 The Business at Hand
Defiance19 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 33 The Business at Hand
Sorry it took me so long.. Stronger together..I want these guys to complete their joining so they are stronger against what they may face. Who knows what abilities will manifest in their favor.. I hadn't thought about it but since Ms Sybil is worried, I'm a little concerned.. Good chapter Gary.. Im moving on.. -
Thank you tim... I get this, I feel it so deep. Ironic, I went to church today seeking I don't know what. I am not completely without faith, but it's failing me terribly. I take strange comfort in the fact that you give words to what I feel.
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Lots of love. Keeping you close in thought..
