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Amazing chapter! Ilaria’s and Rory’s emotions played a huge role in this chapter. Rory was ultimately successful in getting Ilaria to let Milan and Ayu stay in Portento as long as Rory allows Milan to pursue his dreams of travel and architecture. Iris’s bringing to Milan of his Amulet given to him by Rory and reactivating it’s magical properties and reminding him never to remove it. Her healing of Kiyo was amazing and her fondness for the little Alpha’s family is touching. Milan is impressed with the pack house and it’s architecture. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The ongoing relationship between Worthington and Colin is beginning to show promise, the boy Dechaun is definitely becoming an important part of Worthington’s future. The siege of the camp by pseudo government soldiers and Mage’s is troubling. Worthington has definitely shown them that they are outmatched. The arrival of the envoy from the Prince of the Elves was perfectly timed. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Drew’s in it up to his eyeballs, and is pretty much clueless as to how to deal with it. His deep seated fears of acceptance by the twins due to his scars were removed when they both told him that they aren’t concerned about his scars because they love him. Yeah boys! I’m glad that he’s finally getting comfortable with this relationship. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The first change into a wolf for Milan and his first run without restrictions was inspiring. Milan’s wolf being white with gold on his neck and tail sounds beautiful. I was thrilled with everyone helping the Alpha with Kiyo’s injuries and treatments. The tour of the sacred cave and the relief of Milan’s stresses by Rory was classic. The meeting between Ilaria and Rory could be confrontational but will hopefully be a means to resolve all of her frustrations regarding Milan and Kiyo and fleeing Portento. The meetings with the council and swamp residents to decide the fate of Rick should be interesting along with the meeting with Lechter. I’m also requesting to see photographs of Rory and Milan’s wolves. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Very Sweet Chapter! The fact that Aria and Amara are together with Drew, they’ve all professed their love for one another, they’ve acknowledged that their relationship will be difficult for Drew especially, and that they will have to work together to make the future relationship what they want. I’m extremely happy that Aria is attempting to make Drew and Amara happy by trying new things like kissing Drew. I truly appreciate Jay’s no nonsense approach to life and it’s difficulties. I know that there’s more trouble ahead. 🤭 I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Revealing chapter! Greg has been hiding from his pain for so long he has no idea how to move forward. This version of tough love was absolutely necessary, however only he can make the decision to take his life back and deal with his past. This process is very difficult and won’t happen overnight. The owner of the burger joint near the gym is someone who could be ideal for his recovery. Kyle is a great distraction but causes Greg to relive the past. He’s strong enough to be able to be friends with him but Greg is reluctant because he’s afraid that he’ll become the man who took advantage of his naïveté. He needs counseling and confidence in his own innate goodness. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The anger and worry of Ilaria at those “mutts” was touching and very amusing to read in her dealings with Connor. She’s relieved that Milan is healthy for the first time in many years, while still being really angry with Rory for removing Milan from the hospital. She’s still worried about Kiyo and his injuries. It appears that the Alpha will need to call in many favors to get Kiyo cured. The council meeting should prove to be very difficult and interesting, Rory’s plans to bring the forest wolves into the council and let them decide Rick’s fate is the correct path. I’m loving the connection between the two young men and their new found relationship is priceless. Thank you for the happiness in this chapter despite all of the drama around them. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Great chapter! Drew is moving in the right direction. He’s realizing that he’s in love with Amara, and after a rather intense conversation with Jay, that he’s also in love with Aria. It didn’t become clear to him until he was trying to comfort Aria. He was holding Aria’s hand when he was having a nightmare.He was rubbing Aria’s back and speaking softly and promising never to allow anyone to take him away again. He was truly comfortable at that moment when he could clearly see a future with his twins. This realization is scaring him to death, but he’s resolved to taking care of both of his young men. He’s completely certain of the fact that he’s in love with both. Aria climbing into his lap and laughing when Jay suggested that Drew wear a dress. They’ll have a tough road ahead of them, but I’m certain that they will be perfect together. They’ll also have a Mam who will love them unconditionally for who they are individually. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Alex meeting with Brandon to break up and feeling guilty about it means that deep down he’s aware of the damage that he’s done! The conversation with his mother prior to meeting Brandon which clearly brought insight into who he is and what he’s done shows that his conscience is clearly still speaking to him, however, having downloaded a sports betting App is clearly a flashing red light and sirens wailing. His conversation with Jeremy shows that Alex is aware of how much better a person Jeremy is. Alex is aware of the fact that he’s been hiding his reasons for returning to his hometown and he’s fearful of how this will affect his future relationship with Jeremy. Now Natalie is standing in his house and telling him that she’s not willing to let Jeremy go without a fight. What’s a guy to do? I’m really hoping that his conscience will exert much more control over his thinking. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The family celebration and introduction at the MCC church was touching. The closeness of this family is inspiring. The loss of Liam due to his fathers stupidity and greed was tough for Noah to deal with. He’s keeping his emotions under tight control, but he was deeply distraught when Nick found him sobbing on their balcony. With Billy’s help Nick comforted Noah. After enjoying a bit of the bong, they were preparing for bed. They started sleeping in their own beds but some noises made by Nick when Billy was stimulating him causing Billy to whisper to Nick that they should invite Noah to join them. This was a very hot scene. The back to school chapter is going to be difficult to read since it’s the last chapter of this amazing story. I’ll be very sad to say good bye to this exceptional characters you’ve created. 😢 I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The carefree lifestyle Dizzy and Artie have been brought back to reality. I’m glad that Colleen and Adam are forcing them to focus on their school work and grades, the classroom antics will be coming to an end also. Both boys are aware that this is for their own good and will hopefully get back on track with their studies. I’m very glad that Artie finally got the nerve to tell Adam about his “chance” encounter with Ezra. I understand why Artie wants to find out for himself what Ezra has to say, however, I’m also glad that Adam has forced all communications through him. The paperwork terminating Ezra’s parental rights was a great call by Adam. It forces Ezra to sign the papers or forget about communicating with Artie. Adam’s truly stepped up to be the parent that both Artie and Dizzy both need. I’m glad that my predictions about Colleen and Adam were correct. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

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Excellent chapter! Jay turning up at Mam’s house is perfect. All the drama and feelings that Drew ran away from are now staring him in the face and his resolve melts like butter on a hot day. Amara won’t let him spout his practiced double talk, and boils the entire drama down to a single question, which Drew had the good sense to answer truthfully, and kissed Amara. Meanwhile Mam and Jay are taking care of Aria, I believe that she will have a profound effect on Aria in the best possible way. She’ll give him comfort and unconditional love in the best manner that a mother can provide. Once Drew gets Amara settled, then he’ll get the chance to connect to Aria and help him find his way back from the dark and scary place he’s currently trapped inside. Drew’s experiences with PTSD will be helpful to Aria and the simple unwavering and unconditional love of Mam will bring him back and help both young men realize that their deserving of this type of love. Ben and his benefactors should be quite worried about what Drew and Jeff can do to them if they come after them again. Lions protecting their cubs sort of reactions. It won’t be pretty but it will be painful and life changing for those who come after his family, and God help them if Mam gets her chance. Castrations would be the nicest thing she’d do. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! The closeness that has intensified between Artie and Dizzy after their sexual coupling is just too sweet. The note left by Adam was quite amusing and the game that Adam played on Artie after the parent teacher conferences was perfect. The interaction between Adam and Dizzy and his mother after the conference was truly funny and sympathetic at the same time. I think mom is going to threaten him with being able to see Artie regularly while insisting that he grow up! He’s clearly not doing very well in his classes and will now have to pay the price for his errant behavior. I also think that Adam will also go along with whatever punishment Dizzy’s mom comes up with. Artie and Dizzy may be in for some changes in their dealings with one another now that Adam and Colleen are coworkers giving them plenty of time to cook up plans to rein in their sons behaviors. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

WOW! This was an amazingly uplifting and inspiring chapter! I really love the depth and details of how the transformation of Milan was described. The support of the swamp wolves and Asta as well as Sanctuary the spirit of all of the magical creatures of Portento was amazing. The bracelet transforming into vines and a cocoon for Rory to share Milan’s pain during the change. Thank You so much Sui for continuing to create these totally amazing stories and characters. This is another piece of literature that you’ve created for the enjoyment of your readers. I can’t wait to see Milan’s wolf and Ilaria’s reaction to this transformation. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing chapter! The court case was a bit anti climatic, however, the judge ruled that Artie and Adam would remain a family. Dizzy’s testimony was brilliant and cut right to the heart of who Adam really is. The judge was impressed and after asking Artie who he wants to live with ruled in favor of Sarah’s will, leaving custody of Artie to Adam. The birth father turning up in a Dallas court house was a rather ominous coincidence? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃

Outstanding chapter! The summer camp has been a very brief respite from all of the Mage drama. This secondary attack by government Mage’s and military forces is going to be developing into a full on war with Worthington and his league of magical creatures. If the combined forces attacked the government there would be serious fallout and the mundane would be aware of the realism of magic. Can you imagine the black dwarves swarming the Capital? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!😃❤️

Very sad chapter 😢 Drew’s retreat home is clearly not going to be all peaceful and relaxing as he thought. Mam let him know that he’s got it bad and that he’s not that much older than the twins. 6 years is nothing by today’s standards. He’s goiter to have to step up and face the twins in person and let them tell him what they are thinking and feeling. Jeff is a good sounding board and he’s telling Drew to come back and see the twins and help them get through the ordeal that they’ve just been through. He’s been through and is still dealing with his own PTSD diagnosis should be able to help the twins deal with their trauma. By helping the twins he will be able to face his own trauma and hopefully come through to a better place. I think that you need to stop torturing your characters and readers so thoroughly. Maybe space out the torture a little more with a smattering of happiness and goodness? I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Outstanding chapter! Rory has fully become the Alpha of the pack without question. Portento has accepted Rory as Alpha and Milan as his mate.The pack has accepted this mating also. Rick needs to be locked up in a place where he can’t cause anymore troubles. He should be in a solitary cell, where he will be stuck reliving his failures and wrongdoing he’s perpetrating. The mating ceremony with Rory and Milan is something that I’m really looking forward to. Rory curing Milan of his illness while making him his mate will be very special to witness. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Excellent chapter! Artie has built a very supportive and loving family in San Francisco who would go the distance to protect him. His friends and their families are in his corner as well. The fact that the custody’ case is being handled in Texas in his former hometown doesn’t seem likely, unless the town is the county seat. Texas Custody cases are always heard in District Courts in smaller jurisdictions. This should hopefully minimize the good old boy family friend judge from presiding. Adam and Artie definitely need a California gay friendly lawyer whose licensed to practice law in Texas. I have a bad feeling about the quickness of this court case, with the custody being chosen by Artie’s deceased mother. Any decent lawyer should be able to have the case thrown out on that basis alone, as well as a statement by Artie about the grandparents treatment of him while in their custody. You’re making me nervous. 😓 I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃

Okay I was hoping for more from Drew. Henley was correct in his questioning of Drew, but was very wrong to send him away. Drew’s guilt overwhelmed him and he’s running away. This was a very sad chapter 😢 I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃

Great chapter! Alex finally seems to be gathering the courage to tell Jeremy how much he cares for him. After Jeremy revealed that the girlfriend is a beard, he seems reluctant to take the next step, hopefully they’ll be able to figure it out in the next chapter. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

Amazing! Welcome back and I’m very glad that you’re feeling much better. This chapter was the penultimate emotional high! Your royalties from the tissues used reading this chapter should keep your electricity paid for years! This is exactly what we’ve all been asking for since the beginning of this outstanding story! I know that you’re going to torture these amazingly deep and complex people you’ve created for us. So please bring it on! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! ❤️😃😭

This is an amazing story rich and diverse with complex characters and dynamic plot twists which will keep you coming back for each and every chapter! ❤️😃

Amazing chapter! You’ve definitely taken us on a very interesting trip with this chapter. Principal Rick is one of the pack members hoping to start a civil war. He and his partners are manipulating everyone into a major battle which they believe will result in their side being in control going forward. The admission of Milan that he loves Rory was very sweet, the red burning of Rory’s bracelet has an unknown deeper meaning and the discovery of the formula which destroys the ability to fight off the blood type which is introduced into the patient. This formula could be extremely dangerous to the residents of Portento. Your cliffhanger with Milan being stabbed by the knife meant for his brother Ayu is excruciating. However, it’s all part and parcel in how you tell your amazingly rich stories. So I’ll wait semi patiently for the next chapter. Thank you so much for the joy that you bring to all of your readers with each chapter and story that you tell, Sui! 😃❤️