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Chapter 49 – Highly Irregular Celebrations
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 49 – Highly Irregular Celebrations
Bill, I am truly impressed with the way you brought my favorite family into the current timeframe. I have loved each and every one of your incredible characters and every one of your books. I will be sad that I won’t be able to escape into their uniquely wonderful world as an escape from “this” not so friendly world, even if it was for the briefest moments. THANK YOU for the incredible detail and depth of the story and each character. I really would like to take up residence in your world permanently. It’s friendlier, safer, filled with love, compassion, empathy and understanding. It’s sad that we are unable to live with each other in this type of harmony. I very much would love to see you create another Currie book after a suitable period of time passes. My heartfelt wishes to you and your family and all of the devoted readers of this story. Stay safe, stay healthy, wear your mask correctly, stay 6 - 10 feet apart and get the vaccines when they are available to you so that we can get together and enjoy our lives similarly to what they were before. 😃❤️👏👏👏👏🙏 -
Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 - I'll Be Home For Christmas
Wow! Thank you so much Bill for showing us the way to get together through the holidays with happiness, love, laughter, safety and protected health. These are small sacrifices in the grand scheme, but are extremely important to protect the vulnerable. I can only hope that everyone follows these simple guidelines so that we can all celebrate next year in person. 😃❤️ -
Chapter 22 - A Test Of Faith
flesco commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 22 - A Test Of Faith
Excellent chapter! Spencer’s continued illness is becoming problematic for Jake and his new shelter family. Donovan seeing Stephen and his father seems to point to a much deeper relationship. His reactions are the first emotions he has shown. Walker’s friend Eddie turning up in this group of refugees is promising for all of those people still looking for their families and friends. The shortages of ammunition, food, medical and treatment supplies is becoming alarming while more and more refugees are arriving seeking sanctuary. Jake and Alex are secure with their relationship and Jake is comforting Alex when he does not find his missing family members. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Excellent chapter! A new understanding between the former emperor Kaveh and Jihan may be beneficial to them both. Kaveh is lonely and Jihan needs information on how to deal with the people of the valley. Nisa is going ahead with the assassination attempt on Jihan still hoping to win Duke Kastan. Hopefully the co-conspirators will be caught before they can carry out their orders. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Welcome to the family David and Charlie! The powerful group that is now supporting Carleton and his efforts to rescue abused boys is making his efforts a bit less cumbersome. Charlie is going to be the apple of Carleton and Maria’s eyes.and will be adored by all of his new brothers. The rest of the family members will be able to make David and Charlie feel welcome and a part of the family. The architect’s visit will bring many changes to the household and family. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Carleton has now found another boy to bring home along with an 8 year old. I truly cannot comprehend anyone having sex with a teenager, let alone an 8 year old boy. There are just too many sick people in this world who are only interested in themselves and their pleasures. They should be publicly executed for their crimes against children. It should be painful and horrifying to send a clear message that you will pay dearly for your actions. Rehabilitation just does not work, punishment should be equal to the crimes committed. Carleton will definitely need to use his own plane and certainly a stretch limousine to accommodate his growing family. The construction on the house will be extensive and he is definitely going to need additional help to care for the children. He should consider a certified teacher who is a trained counselor to assist with any problems that the boy’s may experience. I am truly enjoying this story and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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Excellent chapter! A secret meeting in The Hague with very powerful men wanting Carleton to be an example to others to take into their homes these abused boys and help them readjust to a regular childhood with compassion, empathy and most importantly Love. There’s going to be a lot of changes to Carleton’s life and family going forward, especially now that he knows he will be taking another new son home with him. This little twist in this tale opens up limitless possibilities and potential. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😳❤️
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Outstanding chapter! The walk around the property created new things for the boys to focus on, the conservatory and uses for the trees seem to have put pets lower down on the priority list. The Brussels case gives the impression that there’s a lot more about the arrangements behind the rescues that we not aware of yet. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Chris having a nightmare led to all of the boy’s being in bed with Dad, Carleton helps them to feel safe and comfortable., while letting them believe in love of family to help overcome their suffering. A visit to the grave of the first brother, a walking tour of the property and continued discussions on what type of dog the boy’s want to get, it is going to be a very busy day! I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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Outstanding chapter! What a sad end for the first boy, this is a tragedy that not only Carleton bears, but also each of his sons also learn about and remember. This poor boy’s sacrifice brought Carleton to rescue boys who are suffering and needing his help. Introducing each new son and explaining the very sad story helps each one understand how the rescues began and why it is so important to Carleton. Thank you for another chapter that was both heart wrenching and inspiring. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️
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Excellent chapter! Having all of his sons greet and welcome Chris as their newest brother was the reassurance that he needed to allow himself to relax and be grateful to Dad for his rescue. Maria certainly has her hands full with a house full of boys. The Limousine is the perfect vehicle for them to use since they are generally ignored by the public and can transport new son’s without leaving a trace for nefarious individuals to try and get their property back. Carleton should buy his own and hire a driver/ bodyguard to help protect the family. I am really looking forward to meeting the other boys and getting to know them and their stories. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Chris tested Carleton and was relieved to find out that there was no interest overnight. I think that Chris has decided that wherever he ends up will be better than where he was. He also said that he would run away if forced into sexual abuse. This boy has taken a great risk and will be very happy with Carleton and his boys. I am looking forward to the next chapter and learning more about each of the boys. 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! Chris has taken a large risk by going with Carleton. He is suspicious but he is tempted by the promise that he will be safe and never will be forced to leave sex with men again. It is clear from the lunch and dinner meals that Chris has been deprived of decent food and is enjoying the taste of their quality meals. I think that Chris will cooperate with Carleton and be wary of anything that hints that he is being led into another bad situation. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Outstanding chapter! Carleton has the resources and the dedication to help those children who have been taken advantage of. His altruism is extraordinarily rare. I am really happy that the boy was lucky that he was sent to investigate the man who was watching. It appears that he is being rescued and will be kept safe. I am really enjoying this story and am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Excellent chapter! You have laid the ground work for a mystery and helping children who are being exploited. You have my undivided attention. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
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Hope, Expectations, and the Football Star
flesco commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Hope, Expectations, and the Football Star
Outstanding chapter! Thank you Geoff for participating in the vaccine trials for COVID-19, as an extremely high risk individual I am very proud of those who put themselves at risk to help those who cannot participate, this makes you a Hero in my opinion! Many thanks! Jaime’s joined the army for six years, leaving Hunter at U.T. Austin on his own. Both gave permission for sex with others. This solution could be a difficult one to make work, everyone agrees in the beginning to not become involved, but frequently do, thereby creating problems with the main boyfriend. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 36 – The Times They Are a-Changin’
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 36 – The Times They Are a-Changin’
Excellent chapter! Welcome to the family Xander and TJ! I have always enjoyed the adoption ceremonies for each child, it is a positive way to reinforce how important and valuable each one is, while showing that they are loved and supported by their new parents. When a child is chosen for adoption it helps to heal the anger, frustration and emotional pain caused by what ever circumstances lead them into the State child protective services care. Thanks for always reminding us how important it is to step up and care for a child in need, especially LGBTQ teenagers. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 35 – Another Haunted House
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 35 – Another Haunted House
Outstanding chapter! Thank you Bill for a truly remarkable Halloween haunted house chapter. The description of the scare areas had me living vicariously with the kid’s. I still believe that life is much better in your world than ours. I really would prefer to move to their town and live out the remaining years of my life in a peaceful and compassionate place. I have always been a fan of your writing and story telling abilities. I will continue to enjoy each one that you provide. Thank you for all of the work that you put into your characters and plots. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 34 – A Problem and Preparations
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 34 – A Problem and Preparations
Excellent chapter! Xander’s suffering from bullying over his extra brief in his backpack was heartbreaking. The bullying continues, now at the middle school. Thankfully the principal was creative in his threatened punishment if future violations occur. I am hopeful that Xander’s medical condition doesn’t worsen due to the emotional strain that he suffered. The work on the haunted house is progressing and will be a major hit once again. I am looking forward to the Halloween chapter and then the holiday season is some of your best written stories over the years. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 33 – Many Celebrations
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 33 – Many Celebrations
Outstanding chapter! The triple party’s were inventive and creative. I also wish that my birthday party’s of the past could have been more like these. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! -
Chapter 32 – Who’s in Charge?
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 32 – Who’s in Charge?
Excellent chapter! Xander was overjoyed with the offer to be adopted into this outstanding family. The Currie haunted house looks like it will be amazing once again with the entire family getting excited about this year’s project. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 31 – A Time of Uncertainty and Making Plans
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 31 – A Time of Uncertainty and Making Plans
Outstanding chapter! The punishment is appropriate for those who came forward and will be harsher for those who did not. Bullying is a serious problem that just does not seem to be able to be controlled. Parents are responsible for their children and their behaviors, most bullying is learned from relatives and friends. Parents should come down hard when they learn their children are bullying. Most unfortunately say that they are just being kids or boy’s will be boy’s. Bullying leads to assault and abuse and is the first step into crime. I understand that the teacher’s and staff are always busy, however, closer monitoring of hallways and restrooms would go a long way toward bringing this crisis to an end. I was bullied throughout school and empathize with the victims. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 30 – The More They Stay the Same
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 30 – The More They Stay the Same
Excellent chapter! I am glad that those who were involved in the bullying and worse are beginning to come forward to admit their guilt and receive their punishment. Hopefully the majority of the student body will now be supportive of Tamara and prevent further bullying and assaults from taking place. I am looking forward to getting to know this brave young lady for having the courage to be who she is despite the backlash. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️ -
Chapter 29 – The More Things Change.
flesco commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 29 – The More Things Change.
Outstanding chapter! It is sad that bullying and assault still occurs everyday in schools. Even with the “Zero Tolerance and Anti-Bullying programs” being in every school these days, this problem never goes away. If the perpetrators are identified they should be expelled and charged under the hate crimes statutes being prosecuted to the full extent of the law. The school district should then have district wide assemblies to reinforce the Zero Tolerance Anti-Bullying policies. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😢❤️ -
Chapter 21 - A Mistake's Weight
flesco commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 21 - A Mistake's Weight
Outstanding chapter! Jake needs to keep Spencer under close observation based on his symptoms. If Spencer is sick from any number of diseases that he could be suffering from, however if Jake waits to long Spencer could get worse or even die. That is a lot of responsibility and stress for anyone, let alone a teenager. The overall experience is getting progressively worse and they could be overwhelmed at any time. I’m definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️
