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Chapter 1 - The Ulaa-Lah
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Ulaa-Lah
Ulah Lah. Or should I say Oh la la? lol -
Ah, but they're needed to clear the sand after the storm.
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Except Bearpaw is barless.
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It was C for Churchill. It was an awfully big shadow.
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Maybe his brother, William?
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Did you mean to leave out "Mr. DeMille?"
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No, unless I forget like last week I'll make the long trek to roll the thing to the street. It's about the only time I hate the length of the driveway.
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I had a friend who lived extremely well with no apparent means to do so. When anyone would ask he'd say, "When you need to know, I'll tell you." The answer was simple. He stole lots of money.
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Chapter 2 - The Android
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The Android
"Aren't I a human in every way...?" It's a valid question. I'm glad the decommission failed, but how? -
Meanwhile in Russia, the guard tasked to watch Asa gives in to his craving for a cigarette.
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Isn't this secret thing reminiscent of Devin's annoying habit in earlier chapters?
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unbidden - Word of the Day - Tue Dec 5, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
As far as we know, there is no centralized command for spammers and they appear here unbidden. -
It might have been best to have the 'we aren't like other folks' talk a little sooner.
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It wouldn't be a Kyle Aarons story without ample doses of brutal violence. It's good this Dead Storm will last awhile because these thieving victims will need some time to recover.
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Since this transition could have potentially happened at any time, was it wise to hide this from Devin until he discovered it by accident?
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I picked up a piece of paper today. It's hard to extract a feeling of accomplishment out of that.
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It occurred to me there hasn't been much talk of other friends the boys had beyond each other so this chapter was different. I can understand this with Devin's family secret. When was Devin told, before or after they moved away? Since Devin is a skinwalker by heredity, he would have the ability and long lifespan by default even if he never used it. It was nice seeing Mac and Devin in an ordinary setting. It'll be hard to develop a close friendship with Rory and Jaxon seeing them once a year.
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Why would someone intent on ill deeds be approaching at speed? They'd be more inclined to creep up. It sure didn't snare Ronnie Prescott.
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I had to wonder why Lucas hadn't cut the branch.
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I knew Jubal would want the cabin finished before Lucas got back home. The phrase 'once bitten, twice shy' apply to Jubal well. He even compares seeking love from other men to seeking affection from rattlesnakes. Poor Jubal. He's more flighty than those wildings.
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Chapter 1 - The Ulaa-Lah
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Ulaa-Lah
New code protocol and an AI designed to fulfill desires. I can see where this is headed. -
midriff - Word of the Day - Mon Dec 4, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
It shouldn't be confused with mid riffs. The guitarist was interrupted mid riffs by a bottle to his head. -
midriff - Word of the Day - Mon Dec 4, 2023
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
The earliest use of midriff was to denote the diaphragm. -
The name Puck should give it away.
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Cassiel's brothers and Fae Princes.
