deville
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Fantastic to read something set closer to home . Vampires and werewolves in Umhlanga , what a fabulous way to bring down the tone!
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Gosh Luvvie, Combinations like that would get any rock to blush..... stone to glow .... or just look pretty.
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Goodness who would have believed the tarnished old letch , could be polished so thoroughly ? I do however find myself in agreement to his unique solution to the prohibition on collecting and his view on dealing with other intrusive beings.
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I read and thoroughly enjoyed , After The Past, that was before the fantastic revision of the sites functionality on a mobile, so as technologically retarded as I am , I was unable to react or comment . As a pessimist I tend to believe there are bound to be more bad guys than rebuilders .... but I’ve been proven wrong before .... so there’s always hope!
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There is a beautiful simplicity to this story , it is chilling , brutal and reaffirming .... that ones humanity should never be sacrificed .
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Finally evil has a name , which gives the protagonists some level of power against ... at the very least they can start formulating a cohesive plan.
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An excellent ending ! A tribute to the human capacity to transcend our insecurities and move forward supported by those who love and understand us. Just perfect that Jack is a dog...
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He may be paying for it , but if I was Andy I’d have the annoying little git and his entourage of sycophants thrown out immediately .... then again having his space invaded by Tyrone appears to be the least of his concerns ...
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Beautifully written. I am well acquainted with the darkness or one of its siblings, sometimes time is needed to find oneself again and to build the strength to forge ahead again. The self awareness and challenge in your words resonate...
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As dark , if not more so than it’s predecessor ! Particularly eerie. Claude didn’t just alter Ashton’s memories but a whole continuum.
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Fantastic Finale! Talking and listening to each other , precious little can go wrong with them now . An incredibly enjoyable read . Thank you.
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Interesting fight, intriguing outcome, the group is powerful and intuitive but no match for Rhava. I get the feeling with Rhava’s introduction of Marcus that Phuong is not quite out of the running (?)
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A little cock -a-hoop for Riley is just what he needed to debunk the thoughts of surgery . Nice that Trey stood up for him ... hope that remains the trend !
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Chapter 11 Missing Pieces
deville commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 11 Missing Pieces
Well now that the elephant in the room has been driven back into the wild , the boys can get on with the real safari .... watching family and dealing with life . Absolutely fabulous! -
A captivating start . Not enamoured of either Melissa or Brad . It will be interesting to see how and when Buddy and Kyle interact!
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Carter and Riley are good together , not losing themselves in each other but sounding each other out and giving support . Riley talks more to Carter than his parents which is not that strange given his past .
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As much as it seems that Jeff’s barely holding his life and family together , he does care about the children , albeit in a removed and distant manner .
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A poignant tale . The difficulty of focusing on living , when you’ve spent a great deal of time supporting someone dying , to exclusion of most other things is set out with gentle clarity . Cory sounds like a fantastic son.
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It’s great that the love is there , but they still need to talk ... actually not just talk , but communicate .
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Because I can see , the dark glasses caused me problems in the beginning , especially in court , one Judge ( who had not read the brief I sent ) asked if I thought I was a rock star , to which I replied , ‘ no my Lord, I’m just blinded by your brilliant sensitivity ‘
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‘Everything comes to those who wait’ , seems Ray waited a long time in custody to get just what he needed. Prison will not be kind to him , because the walls always have ears .
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I wear dark glasses 24/7, I lost the sight in my left eye 27 years ago and an infection left my right eye extremely photophobic . Although I lost the sight , I opted to keep the eye , which looks normal , treated the infection with massive doses of anti biotics . Riley’s decision is an awful one , it affects on so many levels and is terrifying to a teenager. Riley and Carter are connecting again on every level.
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It’s happy , very early Saturday for me , and these just made it better. Loved No. 1 , creates an image of poetry like word Bonsai , needing vision , patience and skill , then it just is perfect and complete .
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For the moment it’s a blessing Eric left the front door unlocked , but he will need to be more careful , those teenagers sound like trouble . Eric’s reaction to the kiss , is touching but also so incredibly sad .
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Brady really does seem to be losing every last shred of his dignity , what was left anyway , I hope the talk with Ember is going to restore a little bit , but then again , maybe not . Justin and Cameron have a history too , which doesn’t appear to be all that comfortable either. Quite a tense race day for the adults and the boys aren’t even on the track yet!
