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What a great surprise! I'm so excited that Seth and Noah are getting married! The proposal was so adorable! I'm pretty sure Seth decking Brock was a Christmas gift everyone here enjoyed! Lol!
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Chapter 8 - Is it Better to Have Loved?
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Is it Better to Have Loved?
No surprise Jasper is still hanging with Kyle and Jessica. Trash stick together. None of them deserve forgiveness. Xavier did the right thing by changing to remote learning. Who would want to look at those three every day? -
It's nice to see a new chapter. I always come back every so often to re-read because they're such cute kids!
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Great story! An all too familiar reality, unfortunately. Too bad we don't have a real Evan and Micha to take down all the "Trent Adams" out there. The lies and misinformation out there is shocking. The fact that people not only have it in them to make it up, but attract people gullible enough to believe it just kinda leaves me speechless. It's really sad what the U.S. has become.
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I can only imagine how difficult it was to write. It was a tough read, but you did an extraordinary job. It's sad that things like this happen way too often.
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Chapter 6 - Past, Present, and Future?
jaysalmn commented on Xfighter1984's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Past, Present, and Future?
Seriously, Jasper. You're screwing around with Kyle AND taking Xavier on a date. Don't even try clutching your pearls in shock! You're just as much trash as Kyle is. -
Great chapter! What a way to end it too! What the hell is Nathan's dad doing there?! The next chapter can't come quick enough!!
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That was a great story! I'm glad Seth and Noah got their happy ending, and very glad Noah's father is getting a good dose of karma! Yay for Lilith graduating top of her class!! I'm sad that it's done, but great job!
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What a great chapter! My heart breaks for Noah. I can only imagine how what Mr. Landry said affected him. I'm so proud of Seth for keeping his cool enough to call the police. He's come so far. I know Noah is in good hands and Seth will do all he can to take care of him.
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Wow! What a shocker of a chapter! I would have never expected that from Mr. Landry. Glad Noah didn't get hurt any worse than he did. The super, super angry guy...that description of Seth made me laugh. Lol!
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Wait a minute....we go from Johnny raping Tim to Tim having a threesome with Johnny and his buddy like the other scenario never happened??? WTF?? These people are too screwed up for me...I'm out.
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The whole Johnny situation is very disturbing. A rapist for sure! What a disgusting person.
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Just when we thought Jason couldn't get any more frustrating.... You have a man who is so in love with you right there! Why waste your time crying over a spineless loser?! I'd love to slap some sense into him! Lol!
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I'm so happy for Seth! It's about time he allows himself some happiness. I'm happy he isn't letting his parents treatment of him dictate his life anymore. The counseling is helping him so much. Saying "I love you" to Noah was a huge step! I, too, am surprised about the money laundering. The embezzlement wasn't a surprise at all. When the numbers didn't add up, unfortunately Max was the first and only person I suspected.
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I hope Seth doesn't hit too big of a bump in the road, because the end of the chapter tells me there's one ahead. He more than deserves happiness and stability.
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I don't know which one is worse, Jason or Nathan. I'm finding it very difficult to like either of them at this point. I'm about ready to walk away from these two idiots. This chapter should have happened a long time ago.
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What a great ending. So happy Jake and Ethen are finally together. I'm glad it wasn't Ethen Alan was having sex with. That's what I had wondered. I find it so hypocritical that Jen was so angry at Alan after what SHE did! At least Alan had booze and drugs as an excuse. She has no excuse for what she did other than she's a liar, a cheat.... and apparently easy. Lol! I thought Jake was in the right to be done with them both all together. That would have been my decision. He's a bigger person than I am. Is there a hint of a book 3??? 🤔
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A Family Beyond Comprehension
jaysalmn commented on James Matthews's story chapter in A Family Beyond Comprehension
What an action packed chapter!! Hopefully Alan did kill that SOB Colin! He deserves it! Cody has definitely redeemed himself as far as I'm concerned. I still don't feel one bit sorry for Jake's mom, and don't know exactly what to make of Alan. I'm assuming he's gay, but I can't wait to find out exactly what is in those pics. Is it just him with another guy, another twist, or something worse? So exciting!!! -
Confronting the Lies, Hammering Home My Destiny
jaysalmn commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confronting the Lies, Hammering Home My Destiny
I'm all in with Jake. I don't blame him for not being able to forgive his mother for what she did and the lies she told. Her crocodile tears did nothing for me. I feel she was more upset that she got caught in the lies rather than for actually lying. Now with Colin/Mike showing up, can't wait to see what happens next. I love Jake's response to him at the door! -
WOW!!! So the whole truth finally comes out! Out of all this, the only person who has been totally truthful to Jake is Ethen. His parents staging that whole police thing so he couldn't leave with Ethen is unforgivable. I would blow the lid off the truth about who my father was on my way out if I were Jake....because sometimes karma needs a helping hand. His mom is so damn fake, I can't stand it! I don't have any respect for Alan, but I feel bad that he's been deceived about being Jake's father. Glad that Ethen isn't really in any trouble. Colin sounds like a total dick. I felt bad for Cody until he turned "informant" out of spite to get Ethen out of Jake's life. I don't know that I could go home and look at any of them with love and respect. Hell, I'd want to go right from Frank's to the airport!
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Wow! Wasn't expecting any of that! As much as Jake loves Cody, I don't think I could ever forgive him for double crossing me if I were Jake. Whatever Cody says his reasons were, that was for sure his way of getting back at Ethen. Can't wait to hear what Trevor has to add to the story!!
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Omg, the suspense is killing me!! I'm so happy Alan finally grew a pair and is doing the right thing for a change! Ethen needs help just as much as Jake does. My heart beats a little quicker every time I get a new chapter message!
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Wow! I have lost all respect for Alan. I hope he feels like shit for what he has put Jake through, but I feel he is just as heartless as Colin. To watch his own son suffer emotionally and mentally and seemingly not feel any responsibility is horrible. I feel bad for Cody too. He's trying so hard with Jake for something that just isn't there. I can't wait to see what's ahead!!
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My first thought was it is Ethen. If it is, I can't wait to find out why!
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Seriously, Nathan can go to hell! If it would have been him at the door, I hope Jason would have slammed it in his face! I don't care what issues he's going through, treating someone he obviously cares for like shit shows me he isn't as good of a person as he makes everyone think. Also makes me think the issues with his ex and not being able to see his child aren't so far fetched. Aiden apologized and showed he's interested. He's looking like a much better option then the, now dead to me, Nathan.
