jaysalmn
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To be honest, I quit reading the story 3 chapters ago, and skipped down to the last couple of sentences on this one. I knew you were gonna get them back together, and for me its unfortunate when the asshole wins. I would never go back to a person who claimed to love me, yet distrusts me enough to call me a liar for months, THEN when learning the truth doesn't even have the balls to even say I'm sorry right away. I love your writing @Headstall, but this one wasn't for me.
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I really feel for Rayne. The exchange between he and Bailey had me teary eyed too. Its unfortunate there are actually parents out that act like Rayne's father. I don't know anything about Harlan as I haven't read the other story yet, but I wonder why he didn't just ask instead of going all stalker. If I were Bailey, along with being angry I would also be creeped out that someone dug to find out info about me.
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'shove it in again' Finnegan literally had me laughing out loud!! I think that suits him perfectly! 😂😂
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Great chapter! So happy Jimmy is away from his asshole father. He's with his grandparents, who are loving and accepting, and he's gonna get a chance to reconnect with his brother. Of course, then there's Richie! Can't wait to see how that plays out!
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Levi definitely needed that talk frim Brent. Brent was correct in saying that Levi was taking his anger and frustration on everyone, especially poor Brody. I'm enjoying how protective Blu is being over Link. Sage has his work cut out for him trying to win Blu over. Kaleb is for sure getting karma with the triplets for some of the stuff he pulled. Lol! Kassidy is a riot! Totally reminds me of Nan!
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Great chapter. Unfortunately, won't be long before D-bag Danny comes along and fucks up this relationship for Jake too. Maybe after Jake cheats on Kyle, Kyle will end up with Ryan. Lol! Jake is never gonna find a real relationship unless he keeps his dick in check and dumps Danny as a friend.
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Gramps is the best! So happy Jimmy will be taken care of, and he'll have a place to go after graduation. At least he knows Gramps, and I'm sure Gram, will be accepting of him when he decides to come out. A little jealous that he's getting a new BMW as a graduation gift! Lol!
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So, Danny helps break up Jake and Ryan, professes his love for Jake, then goes and bangs someone else. I'm sorry, but Danny is a HORRIBLE human being!! Jake isn't any better as far as I'm concerned. If I were Ryan, I would wash my hands of both of those losers!!
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I hope Ryan is into seeking revenge, because Jake and Danny deserve it ten fold!!
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I feel so bad for Ryan. Guess the apple didn't fall far from the tree as far as Jake is concerned. Just like his dad.
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I don't think it felt rushed at all. I think it flowed really well.
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Its amazing how u fit 20 years into 1 chapter. Loved the story. I'm kind of an Ian, but no way in hell would I ever want a man who's banged every man in town. Lol!
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It was the second time around with this story for me, and it was just as beautiful as the first. Grant, Troy, and the gang are great characters, and the story itself warms the heart. Great job, and can't wait to see what you have for us next!
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Wow! I had no idea about this until u posted the link in ur comment on the last chapter of Ash and Ember. Damn, that was hot!! I'm guessing Brian is a dom top?? Lmao! If this happened on their first night at the cabin, I can only imagine....
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Chapter 16 Moral Support
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Moral Support
I have NO sympathy for Hank. If I had accused somebody of something and found out I was wrong, especially an accusation as big as cheating, THE FIRST THING I WOULD DO is call that person and beg for their forgiveness. When someone tells you that you're wrong, what is there to admit to yourself?? You're wrong, you apologize. As much as Hank supposedly loved Chase, he can't even fucking apologize????? I just don't get how people are hoping that Chase goes back to this asshat! Oh, and HANK is making plans for what to do with CHASE'S mother's ring?? WTF????? -
Well, I wasn't expecting to find respect for Jake's dad, but here we are! Lol! I would have never expected him to be so accepting about Jake being gay. My respect of his mother, however, is going downhill fast. I agree that she's just a vindictive bitch. I feel bad that Jake has to deal with her on a daily basis, and I agree that she's the one that's not gonna take it well when she finds out that Jake's gay. I loved the interaction between Jake and Brett, Billy and Dustin! It was great to see the gang back together just having no drama fun! Brett gave Jake some good advice, although easier said than done.
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Chapter 16 Moral Support
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Moral Support
I can't believe he hasn't blocked Hank from any kind of correspondence yet! Block his ass, get another dog if u really need to, and move the fuck on Chase!! You don't owe that asshole a damn thing!! -
Yeah, I can totally see why Jake's mom divorced his dad! What an asshole! That boat ride had absolutely nothing to do with Jake or his birthday. I'm sure the card and cake were last minute to make him look like less of a douche, which is pretty impossible. I wouldn't want to spend weekends with him. He doesn't give two shits about his own son. That's sad.
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Danny is less likeable every chapter! Too bad he's about all Jake has for friends. I'd tell him to get bent!
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What a difference a chapter can make. Could Danny have been more of a d-bag?? I can't believe he's been ignoring Jake since getting together with Kayla, then as soon as she dumps him he wonders what Jake is doing the following weekend! I'd tell Danny to go fuck himself if I were Jake! Who wants to be friends only when its convenient??
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If he truly knew Chase well enough to propose to him, he would know that Chase is not a liar. The way he found Chase in chapter one should have told him that Chase was telling the truth. Hank is scum.
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Too little, too late as far as Hank is concerned. If a partner ever treated me as horrible as Hank treated Chase over something that he made up in his mind, then went and hooked up with a mutual friend, I would want to rip his effin throat out!! No way in hell would I have any other feelings other than hate and disgust for him!
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Oh boy, another trip to Mon Valley!! I already love Jake and Danny! Can't want to see what u have in store for them. Also, I'm hoping our favorite teacher/maybe turned principal met his demise somewhere in the past 10 years. Got hit by a bus in the crosswalk? Teachers got together and poisoned his food? His brake lines got cut? The possibilities are endless, and every one of them makes me smile because the bastard deserves any one of them! Lol!! Great first chapter!
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That was a great chapter!! I'm so glad Brent and Dawson worked out, and Perry went slithering away! Even though Dawson brings up Chase and Hank, their situations couldn't be more different. Neither Brent or Dawson treated each other like shit, and neither went and cheated with a mutual friend. They were never in a "relationship" other than friendship. Brent and Dawson deserved a chance. Chase deserves MUCH better than what he had.
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Chapter 13 Fare Thee Well
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 Fare Thee Well
I was hoping Chase would get to talk to Carter when Dawson handed his car over to him to sell. I don't feel one bit bad for dumbass Hank! He deserves to be miserable. He fucked up way worse than Chase did as far as I'm concerned. He doesn't deserve Chase, and Chase deserves WAY better!!
