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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 7
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 7
Great chapter! I love Jaime!! His commentary is so entertaining! What an afternoon they're having! Can't wait to see what Ricky wants to try! -
Don't get me wrong, I love the story! I've lost track of how many times I've read it.
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I thought the exact same thing when I first read it! Had it been me, things would have been broken, chairs would have been flying out of windows...maybe along with the ex! Lol!
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Freshman Year, Christmas Break
jaysalmn commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Freshman Year, Christmas Break
Great chapter! I absolutely love Noah's story. Its wonderful to be able to read something happy and positive when the world today is negative in so many ways. Be safe. Minnesota isn't too bad right now. Expecting it to get worse, but hopefully I'm wrong. The retail company I work for is cutting freight by 60% expecting another stay at home order in the near future. Scary times, but we have stories like yours to get us through. -
Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
jaysalmn commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
I'm not a fan of those kinds of stories either, and was skeptical when I started reading Morningstar. It ended up being a favorite of mine. -
As horrible as he was to Sage, the whole world is gonna hear Blu explode when he hears about Tracy!! Lmao! Sage and Link weren't hiding anything, and Bella is his princess! I don't care how big Tracy is, Blu is gonna want to destroy him! Can't wait for that chapter! Lol!
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I really enjoyed this story! Alex matured way more than I had expected, and I absolutely love Jeremy! The only part I would disagree with is Alex meeting with Brandon. Why Alex would want anything to do with him is beyond me. The last thing I would do for someone who hurt a person I love, intentionally or not, is to make up with them and continue to be friends, but whatever. Great story! Can't wait to see the next one!
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Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 6
jaysalmn commented on Comicality's story chapter in Give It To Me Straight - Chapter 6
Go Jamie!!! Great chapter! His thinking through all this was so entertaining! Can't wait to see what happens next, especially when Silas finds out! -
Loved the story! To answer your question, yes I would definitely like to read more!!
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What a great bonus chapter! Harlan knocked Pastor Hypocrite off his self made pedestal! Love it!! Hopefully this will give Huck and Rayne the chance to find that father/son bond again. Its obvious that they're both unhappy with the current situation.
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Well, this isn't exactly three 8 year olds we're talking about. No comparison.
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There are a lot of red flags waving on this one. A "straight" guy would rather share a bed with two other guys than sleep on the sofa, or ask to stay in the main house, not to mention that he has already had an encounter with Richie. Nothing about this seems right.
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Just the fact that the three of them are sharing a bed is extremely weird. They live in a gated property, his grandfather can afford to buy him a new BMW, but there's no sofa?? They can't afford to buy a fold away bed if he insists on staying at Jimmy's?? I don't get it.
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It will be very interesting to see how Jimmy and Richie can even move forward with a third wheel. Considering Richie and Nick already had one encounter, I'd be apprehensive if I were Jimmy. Happy to see that Jimmy is doing so well at his new job.
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What a wonderfully written chapter! I'm teary eyed as I type this. I'm so happy Kyle and his father at least started communicating and hopefully moving to a better father/son relationship. Kyle really needed to hear what his father said. Lucky for Jake it turned out the way it did. With the wrong kind of father, that could have blown up and ended really bad. I'm beyond happy that Jake and Kyle have the kind of connection they do. I think they're good for each other. Glad that Danny has been respectful of them....so far. I don't hold out much hope that Danny won't persuade Jake to cheat on Kyle. His track record so far in this story makes me think this is a definite possibility. I hope I'm wrong.
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Awww their first kiss!! ❤ I like that they're taking it slow and not going from a first kiss to humping like rabbits in the same chapter. Yeah, we kno exactly what Brandon and Charles were gonna do when they went back to the EMPTY house. Lol!
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To be honest, I quit reading the story 3 chapters ago, and skipped down to the last couple of sentences on this one. I knew you were gonna get them back together, and for me its unfortunate when the asshole wins. I would never go back to a person who claimed to love me, yet distrusts me enough to call me a liar for months, THEN when learning the truth doesn't even have the balls to even say I'm sorry right away. I love your writing @Headstall, but this one wasn't for me.
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I really feel for Rayne. The exchange between he and Bailey had me teary eyed too. Its unfortunate there are actually parents out that act like Rayne's father. I don't know anything about Harlan as I haven't read the other story yet, but I wonder why he didn't just ask instead of going all stalker. If I were Bailey, along with being angry I would also be creeped out that someone dug to find out info about me.
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'shove it in again' Finnegan literally had me laughing out loud!! I think that suits him perfectly! 😂😂
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Great chapter! So happy Jimmy is away from his asshole father. He's with his grandparents, who are loving and accepting, and he's gonna get a chance to reconnect with his brother. Of course, then there's Richie! Can't wait to see how that plays out!
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Levi definitely needed that talk frim Brent. Brent was correct in saying that Levi was taking his anger and frustration on everyone, especially poor Brody. I'm enjoying how protective Blu is being over Link. Sage has his work cut out for him trying to win Blu over. Kaleb is for sure getting karma with the triplets for some of the stuff he pulled. Lol! Kassidy is a riot! Totally reminds me of Nan!
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Great chapter. Unfortunately, won't be long before D-bag Danny comes along and fucks up this relationship for Jake too. Maybe after Jake cheats on Kyle, Kyle will end up with Ryan. Lol! Jake is never gonna find a real relationship unless he keeps his dick in check and dumps Danny as a friend.
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Gramps is the best! So happy Jimmy will be taken care of, and he'll have a place to go after graduation. At least he knows Gramps, and I'm sure Gram, will be accepting of him when he decides to come out. A little jealous that he's getting a new BMW as a graduation gift! Lol!
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So, Danny helps break up Jake and Ryan, professes his love for Jake, then goes and bangs someone else. I'm sorry, but Danny is a HORRIBLE human being!! Jake isn't any better as far as I'm concerned. If I were Ryan, I would wash my hands of both of those losers!!
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I hope Ryan is into seeking revenge, because Jake and Danny deserve it ten fold!!
